PYAAR TOH HONA HI THA-updated(chap-6 page 9)

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Payal

@paaal

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Guys... I noe.. there are many good ffs going on in this forum..n I love all of them...must admit that this forum has got some of the best creative minds... !!! I am not sure if my ff will b upto the mark or not... but am here adding another to the already long list of the existing ffs. Please kindly bear with my 1st chapter... and if only u guys feel interested... I will continue.....😛😛

CHARACTER SKETCH:

Pratigya Saxena: The youngest daughter of Shyam Sexane.. whoz a rich businessman. SHe is young beautiful yet pampered... n short tempered. She is a smart girl and exactly knows her priorities in life.(Played by Pooja Gor)

Krishna Singh : The youngest son of the Singhs... whoz business is reputed. They have a chain of restaurants across many countries.. though they are permanently settled in India.Krishna has completed his MBA.. n is suppossed to join the business.. while his big brother keeps travelling becoz of business issue. (Played By Arhaan Behl)

Reat of the characters are same.. just I woudnt get into much details..coz my ff wud b centralized on KriYa. Singhs are nt illiterate here... n Shyamji too has a sucessful business 😊

INDEX:

Chapter 1-Page 1
Chapter 2-Page 3
Chapter 3-page 4
Chapter 4-page 6
Chapter 5-page 7

Chapter 6-page 9

Edited by paaal - 15 years ago

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Payal

@paaal

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Posted: 15 years ago

CHAPTER- 1

"WHAT DO U MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will have to adjust my whole life with this mans designs !!!!!!!! " shouted Pratigya.
Adarsh n Arushi exchanged quick glances and stepped forward..
Adarsh: Shhh!!!! Prats… softly… who bhahar hi baithe hain…
Prat: I DON'T CARE…. Do u hear me… I give a damn to him;….
Arushi: Prats…. Dear… try n understand… Okay… I will tell papa… but right now..please behave urself….
Prat: Arushi…!!!!! How many more times… will u make papa understand… hez gone crazy….
Arushi: Per… Prats… (looking at adarsh) he isn't that bad… is he???
Prat: Ohh… My God..(still fuming) Arushhiii… I noe… he isn't bad… but Not my types…. DO… UUUUU GUYSS GET IT…….

Both Adarsh n Arushi leave the room…. And head towards the hall..
Shyamji and Nainaji look at both the children…n their looks itself revealed the entire situation. Arushi made her way to her papa… n sat near him.
Adarsh: Lalaji… woh… usko…
Lalaji: Ka baat hain… bitiya ko pasand nahi aayi ka?

Both Shyamji and Nainaji could see the face of the old man…. His eyes were almost glistening with tears. Shyamji hung his head down….and spoke softly…
" Lalaji…. Aap bilkul fikr mat kijiye… main aapko… puri…payment… "
Lalaji: " Are… nai nai.. Shyam babu…. uka kono zaroorat naahe… bitiya ko pasand naahe aawe hain…
Shyamji and Nainaji looked at the helpless face of lalaji. He has been making clothes for the family since the last twenty five years. He is one of the best tailors and designer for traditional wear….n the Saxena's has been their customer since a long time. He was appointed by Shyamji's father for designing the clothes of the ladies of the house. But its only Pratigya who always comes up with flaws in his clothes.
The man stood up… ready to leave… and looked at Arushi n Nainaji

Lalaji: Bitiya… humein lagta hain… ki hummein…aab uu baat naahe rahe… aap log chaho…to….aap log bhi… aapnne kapre…

Arushi: Nahi…chachaji… mujhe to aapke banaye hue kapre.. behad pasand hain….mujhe toh… aapke banaye hue dresses hi pahenne… hain.
Lalaji gave a faint smile and walked away.

Arushi tried opening her mouth…" who.. Papa…." Her voice faded away as her dad gave a cold look to her
Shaymji: Not this tym Arushi…. I need to talk to Pratigya this tym..

Shyamji walked towards Pratigya's room followed by Nainaji.. n the other two siblings
Pratigya was there busy practicing her favorite dance steps… she looked absolutely engrossed in her activity as if nothing has happened. Arushi n Adarsh again exchanged nervous glances… as they knew that their dad was really upset that day. Nainaji was also a biit nervous as Shyamji walked towards their pampered daughter.

Shyamji quickly muted the loud music which made Pratigya look at them at once.
Prat: whoa.. Papa… hi.. wassup…
Shyamji: Pratigya… do u realize that the way u r handing ur life is absolutely crazy….
Prat: huh… ??? Papa… but !!
Shyamji: Pratigya… dekho… bahot dekh chuke hain hum…. Now its high time… that u start behaving like a matured one….
Prat: 😲 Papa… main… (she looks at her mummy to get support.. but she looked upset too)
Prat: Ohhkk.. I can guess it now..u guys r upset for that man …C'mon papa..
Shyamji: Pratigya… bare hain who tumse… izzat ke saath baat karo…
Prat: Ohhk… papa… but lalaji… isn't of my type…u also need to understand that..
Shyamji: I do understand… but is that way u behave with ur elders…. Tum agar who kapre rakh lete to tumhara kya chala jata….he has been making dresses for since… ur childhood…
Prat: Dekhiye..papa… I noe… hez a good man.. lekin… I cant crowd my wardrobe with all the useless stuffs…
Shyamji: Stop behaving like a kid Pratigya….kissiki mehnat… kissike pyaar ka kadar kerna shikho…. Who aadmi tumse aapne bacche ki tarah pyaar kerta hain… tumhe pata hain… unhone… aaj bhi tumhare rejected dress ka payment nahi liya..
Prat: Ohhkk.. dad… main kal unke dukan mein jaakar unhe unka payment… clear..kerke aungi..
Shyamji: THAT'S NOT MY POINT PRATIGYA……..
Pratigya looked a little shocked as shehad very rarely seen her father soo angry…

Shyamji: tum aaj yeh sab kuch nahi samjhogi… jis din …aapne haatho se..kaam kerna parega…. Uss din… tumhe mehnat aur paise ki sahi mol pata chale ga… pata chal jayega… ki jis papa ke paiso ko tum aise… uda rahi ho… who paise…lane..mein tumhare papa ko… kitni mehnat kerni parti hain….. aur haan…yeh bhi samajh jaogi… ki jab kissi insaan ko aapne menhat ke badle… beizzati milti hain… to uspe kya guzarta hain….

Pratigya could feel her eyes swelling up with tears…
Prat: pa..
Shyamji: aur haan… kisike dil torne se pehle… yeh zaroor soch lena… ki agar kal ko tumhara dil toote… to tumhe..kaisa lagega….
Nainaji who was silent since the beginning said: Aab..jaane bhi dijiye… baccchi hain..

Shyamji: Nahi..nainaji… yeh aab bacchi nahi rahi… bari ho gayi hain…aur main to bas ker hi donga… lekin tumne aaj lalaji ki shakal dekhi thi… room se jab aapki beti chilla rahi thi… unke aankho mein aansu aa gaye the…

Pratigya stood there bewildered... she still coudnt find out the exact reason why her dad was so pissed off at her… n fumed internally thinking how much over reaction that old man might have shown that her dad was saying soo much to her.

Pratigya breathed a sigh of relief as her mom-dad stepped out of her room. She looked at her two cute siblings… they had made such a face.. as if.. something terrible has happened.

Prat: oye… tum dono aise rondu shakal kyun bana ke ache ho?
Adarsh: Prats… chup kar yaar…tujhe samajh mein nahi aati… dad is fuming..
Prat: I noe… bhai… hez fuming on me na…don't wrry… I will show him… Pratigya Saxena noes how to do mehnat and also how to earn money !!!

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Maarrriiiam...Mariam :-)

@MaankiMariam

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey ur ff sounds interestin...1st chapter was gud a kinda role reversal wid pratigya as the brat 👏 continue soon xxxx

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Sarun_wahifan

@Sarun_wahifan

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Posted: 15 years ago

u wrote it so beautifully that even if it's the 1st chapter only , now i am eagerly waiting to read the next chapter... please do continue... & thanx aloat

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Payal

@paaal

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam...x
hey ur ff sounds interestin...1st chapter was gud a kinda role reversal wid pratigya as the brat 👏continue soon xxxx

😊 Thanks a lot dear... yeah... in my ff.. Prat is kinda pampered 😛 Hope.. my next updates are also able to entertain u 😉

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Payal

@paaal

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kurtee
pls continue....

Yhh..I will continue... 😛😛 Thankss.. a lot 😊

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kriya_fan
u wrote it so beautifully that even if it's the 1st chapter only , now i am eagerly waiting to read the next chapter... please do continue... & thanx aloat

Thanks baby.. I am soo glad that u liked the 1st chapter... I will continue soon 😛😛

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Paal,

this ff of yours is really very interesting.The first chp was very well written⭐️.Looking forward to the next chp😊

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 15 years ago

wooooooooooww payal....gud work beta......plzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz update more and more..i loved ur frst chap.....😳😳😳👏👏👏 prats is sooooooo spoilt....🤢 felt bad for poor lalaji....😭

Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago