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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adilmomin786

Dude I also hate the concept of teen marriage, hahaha....great mind like (think😉) alike ...hai na? glad u 2 don't like it 😆im trying to find out the raaz. heee....no worry....finally it may be some stupid reason...most probpably...the reason may be.money!!!! I like motu...this motu i have seen him in baa bahu aur baby...😆...so i am not impressed...his body structure looks so artificial...like scare crow...😆both dads are stupid, exactly and older sister is a attitude chick. she was in kasturi's...😆 I caught up all of it in 4 hours, so lots of fast forwardinggggg..hahaha...good but i am watching reqularly .i dnt like both leads, harshad is ok, i dont even know the girl. she has quint eye lol i heard neha was supposed to come in there i don't like nehatu...she is very chalak and drama bazz....after nach baliye she ditched namanshaw lol...and its supposed to be a love triangle, ufff...usual drama...then its bye bye to teh serial heeee...😉.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaasshh

shumi di...u wont believe i read 10 chapters at a stretch....yesterday night.....😳😳😳😳 hahaha....i believe you kaash😃 i dnt have wrds to describe....thank u dear😃.....u kno wat..my father was constantly poking me to get up and go to bed bt i kept on disobeying...ur ff had stuck me on my seat......wen he became furious..i just switched on the printer and took out the last three chapters to go to my bed and read😆😆😆😆........ do i need to say anythng more?😳 ....hahaha...that remind me...when i was writing this FF first time (two years back! in 2008😆) one of my reader was a grade 12 student stays in school hostel. she request her days sch0lar friends to print out my ff from home for her to read at hostel ...😆cuz india forum was not permitted in her hostel...lol....... plzzz plzzz jaldi se update karo.........aur double double update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sure...😃

btw thanks for all u r wonderful words😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

I can smell danger looming ahead krishna and prats! Krish should trust and reveal everything to prats before it is too late. This rolli is pure devil , how dare she blackmail krishna? She's a shrewd and hyprocrite, calling herself pehla pyar??? What an insult to true love! When you love someone you should not look at his bank balance. She will definetely try to separate krish and prats but krish needs to be strong and not let her have the upperhand. Anyway fortunately there were some light scenes such as cute dinner part and how can we foget their trip to shimla? Beautiful location with "anaconda around". Thank you for giving us such a entertaining novel Shumi. 😃 shefads

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shefads

I can smell danger looming ahead krishna and prats! yep...Krish should trust and reveal everything to prats before it is too late. but he is already late...This rolli is pure devil , how dare she blackmail krishna? She's a shrewd and hyprocrite, calling herself pehla pyar??? What an insult to true love! When you love someone you should not look at his bank balance. i know yaar😡...when you come to know more about her you will feel like killing her....girr...She will definetely try to separate krish and prats but krish needs to be strong and not let her have the upperhand. unfortunately he is not...he becomes week in front of pratigya...Anyway fortunately there were some light scenes such as cute dinner part and how can we foget their trip to shimla? Beautiful location with "anaconda around". hahaha...sure rolli is not less than anaconda...Thank you for giving us such a entertaining novel Shumi. 😃 u r welcome dear 😃shefads yaar i was awaiting for your comments before i post my next up date...😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART-32

krishna put his hand around her shoulder and hold her close to him with care while walking.krishna and pratigya were talking and smiling with each other while walking... suddenly she bumped on krishna and circled his neck with both her hands.krishna and pratigya for a moment don't understand anything. they went blank.

she:'krish i love u...😛'
krishna:'rolli ...behave your self...😡'he tried to pull her hands from his neck to get rid from her tight hold.

rolli :'krish mai ne thumai kahan kahan dhoon da.....😃'she suddenly kissed him on his cheeks.
pratigya:😲🤢 ...she was dumb founded.she felt that the ground under her feet was missing.
krishna:'chee..chodo muchay...😡'he made her face disgusting and tried to push her her away.

rolli :'krish you can't do to me like this. i am your first love...pehela payaar.our fruit of love is witness for that...'all three looked down...a sweet cute and chubby one year girl baby was standing beside rolli with a candy in her hand.pratigya was literally shivering.it shook even krishna .

rolli:' krish ...i know you are angry with me...you can denay me but not out child...'by the time krishna pushed away rolli ....pratigya slowly walked away from there with out a single word.she don't have the guts to listen further...she felt as if her mind and whole body system stopped working.

rolli:😈... gave a smirk at krishna.a triumphant smile flicked across her lips.
krishna:😡...he ground his teeth and looked at her with anger.

krishna:'..you....son of a devil😡...i feel ashamed that once i loved you...i hate my self for that...i never expect that you can go down to this extent...lanath hai thum par...😡'he squeezed his fist.
rolli:...i love you...😈'a triumphant smile flicked across her lips.
krishna: go to hell...😡
rolli:'hell mai tho ab thum hogay...😈...'
he was more worried about pratigya .he just neglected rolli and walked fast to catch pratigya .before he could catch up she reached the room.when he entered the room she was sitting on the bed like a statue staring some were.she was numb.krishna was tensed ...he don't know how to convince her...how to explain her. he went and sat beside her.

krishna:'...pratigya thum rolli kay baatho mai math awo...'his voice stammered .pratigya looked in to his eyes.she tried to speak but could not.after a struggle...

pratigya :'..thum...issa kai sa karsakthay ho..???😭'before she completes tears jumped down on her cheeks .
krishna:' please.... pratigya mai thumai kaise samjawoon...😔' his voice filled with hurt .

pratigya :'mai thumai eith naa payaar kiya.....eith naa payaar😭.....sab kuch lutadiya thumpar...mere payaar mai kya kami thi muchay nahi pathaa😭.....thum ne mere saath issa kyun kiya...???😭'she closes her face with both her palms and cried loudly.

pratigya: maine thum se suchcha pyaar kiya...mere pyaar ka thum ne yeah sila thiya...
😭'
krishna: 💔 please pratigya...'he was heart broken ...experience a constant pain in his heart.

krishna:'pratigya ...'he tried to wipe her tears. she moved back.

krishna:'muchay bolne ka moka dtho pratigya...'he plead her.
pratigya 'muchay srif yeah bathao... kya rolli thumaara pehela payaar hai?...😭...' she asked in between her cry.
krishna:🤢....💔..he could not speak.his heart wrenched with pain.
pratigya :' bolo...😭'
krishna:'haan...💔😭'his eyes filled with tears he was completely shattered with his own answer.
pratigya:😲 😲 😲...she was taken aback with his answer.

pratigya :'tho mai koon hun..?😕...meri jaga kithar hai...?😭 doosra? theesra? chowtha? yaa paanchwan..?😭'she cried loudly.krishna never saw her before crying like that.his stomach quaked.her cry made him weak and nervous.

krishna:'pratigya issa math bolo...'he tried to hold her.
pratigya :'don't touch me...you don't deserve that...😭'she pushed him and cried continuously.

krishna:'issa math karo pratigya ...i love you...💔'
pratigya :'don't say that...😭'she screamed and cried.

pratigya :'yeah shabth thumare leyeh guna hai...mere leyeh tho shaab hai...😭 i hate you...she was wincing in pain.

pratigya :'..yeh baghwaan...aaj thum ne muchay peheli baar meri maaki kami mehasoos karwathi...na maa,na behan...na bhaai ...na pati..koi nahi hai mere leyeh😭...mai dad se kya boloon?...wohi tho yeah bandhan banwaa ya.....dad ne issa kyun ki ya...😭?'she cried like a crazy.
krishna:💔💔 was looking her cry helplessly.his was collapsed.

krishna:'pratigya muchay maaf kartho😭... mai thumai khona nahi chahatha tha..issleyeh mai batha nahi paaya...😭'pratigya was not in a position to listen krishna.she became physically weak cuz of constant cry.krishna noticed that and gave water to drink.she refused to drink.she curled herself and lied on the bed as a dead shrimp...she was searching for her mother's lap to bury and cry.

pratigya :'maa...maa...😭...muchay bulalo aap kay saath...iss dunyan mai mera apna koi nahi hai...😭'like crazy she was talking to herself and sobbing.it was pathetic to see her in that condition..

krishna:'pratigya ...please...'he touched her shoulder to console her.she was like senseless🤢.there was no reaction🤢...except 'maa...maa...'there was no reaction in her🤢.krishna gathered her in his arms and hold her tightly with his chest...

krishna:'muchay maaf kar dtho pratigya 😭...maafkar dtho😭...mai thumara gunay gaar hun.....'he hugged her tightly with his chest and cried. ..she was lying in his arms without any sense🤢 .
Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the update soo cute until that rolli came alomge but u plzz keep on ypdatein waitn for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART-33
krishna made pratigya to lie on the bed comfortably,placed a pillow beneath her head.she was still senseless.he gently pat no her cheek.
krishna:'..pratigya...pratigya...😔'
pratigya:🤢

krishna:'..pratigya...aankhen kholo...kuch...bolo..'she was almost unconscious.without further delay he called the doctor.

doctor:'...she is under shock...but don't worry ..she will be ok soon. keep her body warm...don't let it chill down...'he went.

krishna sat on the bed near her feet.he took them and kept it on his lap,they were ice chill.to warm them up he rubbed them gently.'she is right ...i don't deserve her, payaar kar na mere leyeh gunaa hai...'he felt a strong jolt inside his chest.his thought went 4 years back.

VIT... Vellore Institute of Technology!.

girls this is an international standard university in tamilnadu(india)where students not only from all over india but also from other countries come and study.it is an expensive university with all luxurious and hundreds of courses.(my mom house is just ten minutes walk from VIT😃).
VIT! look at one simple block of the university.it has separate blocks for separate departments!
main entrance of VIT!
krishna did his five years M.Tch., in printing technology here.(no need to do B.Tch., straight away 5 years course)when he was doing his M.Tch.,he was thin ,tall and brown...calm and quit..as innocent as school boy. no maturity in him , neither his mind was developed completely nor his body....don't participate in sports or in any other extra curricular activity.but he was outstanding in his studies.as his native was ooty he stayed in the university hostel.

it was his final year.

rolli:'hi meena...have you completed your assignment...😊?'she stopped meena in the corridor.

meena:'yet to be...'

rolli:'...omg!😲...it is due tomorrow...'

rolli:'..hello dude...i need some help in completing my assignment...'she asked mohan.
mohan:'....you have selected a wrong person...😆'he walked away.

rolli:'..hi..you..'she bumped on krishna.

rolli:..have you competed the assignment?...'spontaneously she asked him thinking that'...this idiot!!! ...no way...'

krishna:'..umm...😊' he hust smile as a sign of 'yes '

rolli:''yes'!!!!...wooo... ...yes...finally i found one...please i need your help.around 6pm i will meet you in the library...'she did not even wait for his reply.

krishna met rolli in the library.rolli was also final year M.Tch., student
but from different batch/section.cuz in the library they are not suppose to talk loudly rolli pulled her chair very close to krishna and sat beside him.when he was explaining she was moving very freely with him. she don't mind touching him ,holding his hand while explaining.it was a new experience for him.he never sat so close to a girl.rolli's free movements made him confused... bit crazy too.

there after rolli met him frequently for asking doubts.he came to know that she is from bombay.she was brilliant in her studies and she was very social with him.he started liking her company.

once krishna came out of the exam hall .rolli came running and hugged him in front of his friends.krishna was stunned.

rolli:'..krish😛....i am so happy..the same problem what you taught came in the exam...i am going to get full in that...'krishna was embraced and speechless but she was very casual. he liked the way she called him krish from the tip of her tongue...
he could not under stand what he feel.he was so innocent and confused to understand what she is up to?
that is their last exam...next day all the hostelers will disperse for ever.soon after the exam as usual rolli met krishna.

rolli:'ufff...finally we completed our course...5 long years...i am sure i will pass in distinction...😃'krishna did not concentrate on her talk.he was gathering courage to speak to her.'to day i have to say...'he said in his mind.

krishna:' i want to say some thing to you...😃...'he said randomly

rolli:'come out ..why you hesitate?😃...'she hold his hand and encourage.

krishna:'...rolli...i like to marry you...i love u...😕' some how he managed to say.for the past few days he was practicing to say this in in front of the wash room mirror.


rolli:'what...?😲'she left his hand immediately.

rolli:'are you o k...?😕'

rolli:'are you crazy..?😲 you love me...?😡'

rolli:' this thin brown boy loves me...😆'she looked at his friend and made fun of him.krishna felt as if she slapped several times on his face.

krishna:'par ...thum..thum..tho much se...you are so close to me...😲 😲'he said without believing her words.

rolli:'..what do you mean by close to you?😡...look i am bombay based girl ...from a cosmopolitan city....i move freely even with other boys that does not mean i love them all...😡'
krishna:😲 he felt a prickle of disappointment travel down his spine.

rolli:'you are from south..brought up in a small circle...just like a well frog...'

krishna:speechless

rolli:'waise bhi who will marry you?...have you ever seen yourself in the mirror...thin ,tall , brown, boney and skiney...ufff...look at your messed up teeth...😆....i hate your dressing sense...eww...look at your shoes and belt...look like a gunda...'
rolli:'you are from middle class family.i know you got selected in campus interview by the delhi bases...some textile industry...'

rolli:'how much they will pay you?may be 50 to 60 thousand rupees per month...ufff..half of your salary will go in paying house rent in delhi....i don't want to live a middle class life...'
krishna:💔🥺 💔🥺 💔🥺 her insulting words pierced his heart and broke into zillion pieces.he literally felt his heart bleeding. he clenched his jaws so tightly feared it might snap at the hinges.

rolli:'i have bright feature ...better than you... bye... 😡'she said non stop and went without even turning back. krishna was not able to speak out.that was their last meet.after that they never met again.

mohan:'she is from cosmo..forget about her...'
kumar:'krishna...she utilized you in her studies...it is your fault you took it as granted...' different friends said different things.nothing went in to his mind.he felt as if he was dead.'his friend took him to hostel.

it was a big shock for krishna,horror part of his life.he was completely shattered..some how he manage to pack up his things with the help of his friends and reached ooty.

ooty:

he was still under shock.could not come out of it.

gunniya:'krishna jab se thum aayeh ho..you look so up set.....you did your exams well..isn't it ?'
he was as innocent as a teen...his mind is still adolescence...he can't control him self, he don't know to hide things from his mom...he was shattered and burst out every think about rolli to her mother.gunniya came and sat beside her.

gunniya:'krishna...this shows that stiill you don't have mind maturity.cuz she was nice to you...you thought you love her.do you know what is love? or what is marriage? ...it is not a one day drama or one man show..."

gunniya:'.....yours is nothing but infatuation, lust, ...in this age almost all get this feeling ...it is all a kind of crush...in college life it is quit common to every one...don't take it serious'

krishna:😭

gunniya:'forget about her ...she is not your love...she is not meant for you.....'she wiped his tears.

krishna:'thumara suchcha payaar thumai zaroor melega, you will find your angel...mark my words😃'...she gave a broad convincing smile.

after gunniya's console krishna felt better ' amma ne such kaha...it is not a love...just a infatuation ...crush..'he wiped off his tears for ever.

next week he went to delhi to join saxena industry.soon after he joined the gym...with in a year time he developed his body with six packs ...to such an extent that he could get modeling offer.

now he is one of the handsome dude in delhi😃.
Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh nooooooooooo 😭😭😭 that rolli...hw cud she be soooooo rude....that dumbo? what does she thnks she is anyway?😡😡😡😡 and well i wud have loved krishna evn if he was thin an all...😆😉 i hope pratigya comes to know of the real truth...plzzzzzzz😭😭😭
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Oh no!Poor Pratigya!She was completely shattered by what Roli said.Tht Roli is such a devil😡🤢.I hope Pratigya is gonna be alright and that all these misunderstandings will clear up soon.Both the chps were very well written⭐️⭐️Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Means that baby is not krishna's!!! yipeeeeeee.
Hate rolli.....y is she framing krishna for her kid.....maybe its illegimate or shes a divorcee

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