fan fic-- tum kahaan se aayi ho.(updtd prt 9 pg15) - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
Wah Kaash!
I did not know that you wrote FFs too. Good work!
This is reminding me of Qurbaan, Fiza and Fana!
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely chapter.
i like his honesty
update soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was a nice and romantic chp.Hmm......looks like he is falling for her as well,slowly.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yaaaay!! Finallyy!! Wohooooooo!
Hmm I Wonder Who Made That Noise...
Update Soon x
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Posted: 15 years ago
hoooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!finally he accepted her!!!!!!!!it ws rllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly an awwwwwwwwwwwwsom chap.cnt stop smiling while reading.i actually felt lyk i ws prats(😳,oops, cnt cntrl my behooda mind)n i ws able 2 feel each n evry emotions of both as tho im feeling it!!!!!!may b dats d power of true LUB.it ws a very very very nice,sweet ,cute beautiful ........................(space provided nt enf 2 explain,sry😉)chap.on reading d chapi jz rememberd a thn:Derz no need 2 speak evrythn 2 exprss ourslvs..........if feelings r true........one cn undrstnd cmpltly abt d one whom dey rllllly luv........
ohhhhhh........im getting distracted agn!!!!!!!!!sry,im alwys lyk dis wen it cms 2 cmnt on ur romance writng skills
Kaashuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu,muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
u r rlllllllly an FF Princess!!!!!!!!im fed up wit cmntn onn ur ff......cz each tym i hv 2 find som nw wrds 2 appreciate u.no........my english vocabularyz so small.....so nw i cn 1ly giv u⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
omg!!!!!!!its bin half an hr dat im writn dis post.cz i hv 2 think n rethink abt wat 2 writ n hw 2 skip d rest of my feelings.newys im nt boring u.....keep ur gud wrk n plllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updatesooooooooon!!!!!plzz update sangini tooo
Edited by zash_sparkling - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
update update update update update update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_sparkling

hoooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!finally he accepted her!!!!!!!!it ws rllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly an awwwwwwwwwwwwsom chap.cnt stop smiling while reading.i actually felt lyk i ws prats(😳,oops, cnt cntrl my behooda mind)n i ws able 2 feel each n evry emotions of both as tho im feeling it!!!!!!may b dats d power of true LUB.it ws a very very very nice,sweet ,cute beautiful ........................(space provided nt enf 2 explain,sry😉)chap.on reading d chapi jz rememberd a thn:Derz no need 2 speak evrythn 2 exprss ourslvs..........if feelings r true........one cn undrstnd cmpltly abt d one whom dey rllllly luv........
ohhhhhh........im getting distracted agn!!!!!!!!!sry,im alwys lyk dis wen it cms 2 cmnt on ur romance writng skills
Kaashuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu,muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
u r rlllllllly an FF Princess!!!!!!!!im fed up wit cmntn onn ur ff......cz each tym i hv 2 find som nw wrds 2 appreciate u.no........my english vocabularyz so small.....so nw i cn 1ly giv u⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
omg!!!!!!!its bin half an hr dat im writn dis post.cz i hv 2 think n rethink abt wat 2 writ n hw 2 skip d rest of my feelings.newys im nt boring u.....keep ur gud wrk n plllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updatesooooooooon!!!!!plzz update sangini tooo

and i cn always end up giving u this..... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 i thnk ur bones myt have nt been broken by these....😆😉 and ya i will update sangini soon.. it was just that am having a smaaalll writer's block..i will quickly thnk of somethng and update....😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
sry frnds.. as u know.. my nani wasnt well.. i had returned a day before bt i had to do overtime work as i wasnt here for so many days... really sry guys.. heres the next chapter...😊😊😊 plzz read and comment....
part---9
pratigya returned back to her room slowly,careful nt to wake anyone up.. she entered her room and closed the door... then she glanced at aarushi whu was fast asleep... sighing.. she went to the dressing table near her bed and stood in frnt of it... she looked at herself in the mirror and touched her face with her fingers..,her cheeks were warm.. she had nvr felt lik this before..... she touched her lips... closing her eyes she cud still feel his lips on nhers... embracing herself,she tried to be steady.. to become normal agen bt her feelings seemed to reach beyond all bounds and limits...
"di........? " aarushi's voice snapped her back into the present.... she turned back and saw her,sitting upright on the bed,looking at her in a strange manner.... she tried to smile----tum soyi nhi aabtak?
aarushi did nt reply.. instead she got down frm the bed and came towards her in slow steps.. her face looked different and serious....
pratigya----kya hua aarushi?kuch kehna hain tumhe?
aarushi stood in frnt of her and sighed,she seemed to feel lil uncomfortable.....
pratigya touched her hand----baat kya hain aarushi?
aarushi-----di....humne...aapko dekha....
a chill ran down pratigya's spine.. she remembered the noise she and imrtan had heard during their intimate moment....
aarushi----woh....hum..terrace par jaa rahe the..humne aapko imran bhaiya ke saath......dekha......
pratigya left her hand instantly and looked away... her cheeks became red hot in embarressment.... she cud nvr evn imagine being caught in such a delicate moment and that also by her lil sister... she felt a knot in her stomach as well as in her throat.. she cudnt speak.....
aarushi knelt down in frnt of her and put her hands on her knees.... she pleaded to her----di.. aapko kya lagta hain..mummy papa manenge is rishte ke liye... di.. woh ek ajnabi hain... hum unhe thk se jante bhi nhi... woh kya karte the kaha rehte the... kis kis se milte the... hume kuch nhi pata unke bare mein... aap aisa kaise kar sakti hain di..... aur jitna hume lagta hain mummy papa kabhi nhi manenge... di unlogo ko aap par bht naaz hain... aapko lekar unhone bht sare sapne dekhe honge.. aapki shaadi ka.. aapka singer banne ka sapna... di... woh aapke layak nhi hain.. pata nhi kyun... hume nhi lagta woh......
pratigya struggled back her tears and said----aarushi.. jo tumhe nhi pata..uske bare mein tumhe koi baat bhi nhi karni chahiye....dukh hota hain......bht dukh hota hain...
aarushi----di.. aap us ajnabbi ke liye mujhe...
pratigya turned her face at her-----bas aarushi... keh diya na....? tum is bare men humse koi baat naa karo to hi behtar hoga.. hume pata hain hum kya kar rahe hain aur kyun kar rahe hain.....
aarushi got up,somewat disppointed-----di....ye thk nhi hain... hum...hume.. mummy ko batana hoga is bare mein.....
pratigya----soch lo... zaroorat padi to hum uske saath ye ghar bhi chodkar chale jayenge.....
aarushi was shocked.....
pratigya said agen----dekho aarushi... hum jante hain ki tum humse bht pyaar karti ho.. aur ye chahti ho ki hum khush rahe... to ek baat aaj hum tumse keh dete hain... imran ke bina hum khush rehna to dur... saans bhi nhi le sakte aab.....
with that she walked towards her bed,pulled a sheet over herself...and closed her eyes.....
aarushi stood there for sometime then she also retired to her bed.....thinking.....
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naina ji was working in the kitchen as usual wen aarushi crept up to her in anxious steps----mummy...?
naina ji turned and smiled at her brightly----are tum? kya hua? kuch kam tha?
aarushi----nhi mummy woh..aapse...kuch.baat karni thi.....
naina ji,cntinuing with her work-----ha bolo beta kya baat hain../
aarushi was abt to say somethng wen suddenly pratigya entered,fumbling with her purse----mummy woh kal college mein... she stopped midway seeing aarushi there and looked at her suspiciously....
aarushi swallowed her words and looked away.....
naina ji turned to pratigya----hmm? kya keh rahi thi tum?
'wen pratigya spoke agen,her voice had changed totally----hum ye keh rahe the ki mummy... kal college se hum kuch dosto ke saath bahar jaa rahe hain ghumne ke liye.. isiliye thoda late ho jayega...
naina ji smiled---thk hain beta.. par apne papa ko bhi bata dena iske bare mein thk hain?
pratigya---ji mummy....
she was abt to leave, wen suddenly aarushi spoke----aap... kal kahan jaa rahi hain?
pratigya turned back and looked at her staright in the eyes----usse tumhe kya matlab?
aarushi fumbled for words----aahh... woh..hum...woh...
pratigya pointed a finger towards her and said in a stern voice----tum....apne kaam se kaam rakho samjhi?
tears welled up in aarushi's eyes at her sister's extreamely unusual behavior... evn naina ji was surprised at the way pratigya spoke to her beloved sister..... she said to her----pratigya? ye tum aarushi se kis tarah baat kar rahi ho haan? ye koi tarika hain baat karne ka?
aarushi quickly wiped away her tears and ran out,without uttering another word..... pratigya shrugged her shoulders and walked out too...leaving naina ji alone with her own struggling thots.....
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outside,imran was abt to start his bike with a kick wen suddenly pratigya called him frm behind----hey...ruko ruko ruko....
she almost stumbled down the stairs to reach him.....
then she smiled widely at him bt he did nt smile back..... he was still lil disturbed by the last night's incident....
imran----kya hain?
pratigya-----tum kahan jaa rahe ho?
imran----kyu?
pratigya----nhiii woh...kya tumhume hamari college tak drop kar sakte ho?
imran took a moment to thnk,then nodded slowly-----thk hain.. baitho.....
grinning,she climbed up behind him on the bike and put her arms around his waist,making him feel quite uncomfortable.....
he started the bike with a kick and then drove away.......
neither of them noticed that aarushi was standing by the window and watching them carefully...... as they left,she drew in the window curtains...and moved away.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😆
Lovely chapter hun....😃 👏missed ur ff....😊
Ahhh poor Arushi is so caring and loving..... behuda prats doesnt understand anything at the mo..... to blinded by love.......
I hope prats realises soon....
Update soon hun..... keep it up sweety👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena1

Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😆

Lovely chapter hun....😃 👏missed ur ff....😊
Ahhh poor Arushi is so caring and loving..... behuda prats doesnt understand anything at the mo..... to blinded by love.......
I hope prats realises soon....
Update soon hun..... keep it up sweety👍🏼👍🏼

hey aleena missed u so much yar... how r u??????🤗

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