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Posted: 15 years ago
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I jst thought of a story abt Kriya's union.Pls read and comment.
So as usual Prats is in her Maaiyka helping her mom cook.They wanted to make sabzi.But they didnt have enough veg.So Prat's mom told her to go and buy some from the market.Prats agreed and went.
Prats was walking on the road while Angadwa's gang surrounded her.She was like..😲
Prats:-Humhara raasta chodo!
Angadwa:-Tumhara raasta ab hum nahin chodeygey!Krishna bhaiya nai tumko chod dhiya!Hum haina tumko..Woa kya kahtey hai?..Haa! Kampaany dheyneykeyliyey!😆
Prats:-Tum kuch nahin karsaktee!
Prats tried to walk away but Angadwa held her hand.Prats key andar Devi shakti aagayee rey!!😆Prats slapped him so hard that the sound went to China!!😛She ran away.
Angadwa and gang started running after her.Prats too was running.Angadwa caught her somehow.They both started to fight.Both were like 😡..!Haathaapaaiy mein prats ki saaree ka blouse patgayee.😲Prats felt very embarassed.Every1 in the gang started to harass her as she became powerless after her blouse got destroyed..😭
Suddenly,some1 from a 10 story building jumped!!(So filmy!!😃)And u guessed right!Its...
Krishna Krishna...!
B4 any fight sequence,he removed his shirt and covered prats with it!Prats was speechless!!(OMG!!😳)Then the big fight sequence started with Baba in his black vest!
Prats was lookin at him like...😍
Finally,fight ended.He looked at Prats who was standing very far away.And guys!In slow motion,Prats ran towards Baba and hugged him tightly!Baba was like..☺️And holding hands,slowly they walked on the road..😆
Prats:-Krishna,hum tumse kuch kehna chahatheyhey..
Baba:-Bolbo..
Prats:-Hum...Hum...Humhey maaf kardo.Hum tumhare pyar ko samaj nahin paaye..I...love u..!!👏
Baba:-Kya???Phirse bolbo!
Prats:-I love u!hum tumse bahuth pyar kartheyhey!
Baba:-Phir bolbo!
Prats:- (at the top of her voice..)I lub u!!!!!!😃
Baba hugged him.They were near a small house.(My god!My imagination)SLowly they walked in the house...
U complete the rest!!😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW....thts a nice prediction...soo luvly
buh as u mentioned prats saying ILU......thodi jaldi nahin ho gayi kya?
lol.......i mean after that incident prats wil start feeling for krishna
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Posted: 15 years ago
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if only this would happen but nicly written thou
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@sofwan. hum since u have left us hanging in the middle of the trcak so my imagination is oging really wild
gud story but at teh moment it doesnt make any sense prats saying i love u will take loads of time 4 sure.
if this would have happened before their marriage there might be a chance to see such trcak but not nowwwwwwwwww
but but gud attempt dear and welcoem to this forum :) keep enjoying posting here
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one!!! really well written! but the Lub u thing was li'l too fast! u should have dragged it a little to grab more interest! but anyhow it was really nice! i wish it wud actually happen😍! BTW welcome to the forum dear🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sorry huh.Actually had to go for tuition,thats y signed off in between..Yea.Ur right.Prats ithnee jaldi I lub u nahin bolneyvaali!So,I'll change from d hug scene..
Suddenly,prats remembered about her revenge plans.So she backed off.She started crying and ran back to her house.Then,that song will b played.."Chaaha,tumhi ko har pal.."Krishna will be sitting on the ground thinking.Prats will b crying in her room😭.Suddenly,it started raining.Prats remembered that she had Krishna's shirt.😲She will think that Krishna may catch a cold.She will run very fast out of her house.To her surprise,she'l c Krishna sitting on the road in the rain.She will run to him and tell him.
Prats:-Andar chalo!
Baba:-Nahin!Tumko kaa?Hum yahiin teek hai.
Prats:-Teek kaise?Tumhe sardi hojaaeygi.
Baba:-Tumko ka?!Hum tumre kaun hai?
Prats:-Tum humhare pathi hoa!😳Aur yeh humhara farz hai ki tumhe har museebath se bachaaey!
Baba was speechless.
Prats:-Chup chaap chalo humharey saath!
Baba followed her to her house.Secretly they went to the terrace.Prats brought hot water for him which accidentaly fell on Baba's hand!!😲Prats was so worried that she held baba's hand tightly and started to rub it with her saree's pallu!!😉Baba was staring at Prats.Prats also started to look at him.Slowly they movd closer.And closer.And closer.And ❤️ was going to happen when prats suddenly turned away.Baba's heart was like 💔..Prats told him to go back home.And she went down.Baba was very sad.But when he was about to go,he remembered he had no shirt..He didnt knw what to do.Just then,Prats came up and gave him Adarsh's shirt and told him to wear it and go.😳Krishna smiled.Prats walked away without even smiling.Baba again was becoming sad when prats turned,looked at him and smiled.She ran away b4 baba said anything.
Baba went home happily just bcoz prats smiled at him.Prats was in her room.Her mum came searchin for her and to her surprise,prats was smiling all by herself.She was thinking about baba and smiling.Nainaji talked to her but she was lost in her own world..Baba!!!😆She thought."Yeh humhe kya horahaa hai..Kyun hum Krishna key baareymey soach raheyhey?"End of episode!!!
Edited by sofwan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aabrayy

WOW....thts a nice prediction...soo luvly
buh as u mentioned prats saying ILU......thodi jaldi nahin ho gayi kya?
lol.......i mean after that incident prats wil start feeling for krishna

by keeping in mind the kriya track record abi yeh thora jaldi nahi buhat jaldi hai 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I hope evry1 likes my new ending!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hai!! - hope your first prediction comes true - but of the two, second one seems more plausible at this time!!!

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