fan fic--A mock version of pratigya(updtd ch 5) - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
I read all the chapters together and I laughed so hard i nearly fell of my chair.🤣 As there wasn't enough room I didn't fall off by which i was saved from serious injury. 🤣If something had happened i would've sued you for making an FF that was too funny for normal people to handle.😃👏👏😃 Keep writing cause your ff is great⭐️. Please update soon.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
Arre yaar Kaash,seriously man,how do you manage to do this,I mean despite all the comedy and stuff you still manage to make it romantic😳.This chp was very good😆😆.Looking forward to the next one😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiR

Arre yaar Kaash,seriously man,how do you manage to do this,I mean despite all the comedy and stuff you still manage to make it romantic😳.This chp was very good😆😆.Looking forward to the next one😊

same here ya!!😉 by the way humko to end sab se achha laga😉😳😛 naughty krishna 😍 pata nahin show mein partigowa devi itni meharbaan kab hogi😡😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriya_fan

same here ya!!😉 by the way humko to end sab se achha laga😉😳😛 naughty krishna 😍 pata nahin show mein partigowa devi itni meharbaan kab hogi😡😉

well you sure do seem to be naughty😆but in the show if she has to be nice to him then he has to learn to respect her first.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Hilarious fanfic, too good. cant wait for the next chapter😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
chapter-----5
krishna has acquired the power of SPIDERMAN....😆 nowadays he is vry busy in practising his skills....(oviously wen pratigya is nt inside the room)....of making spider ropes 😆... pratigya was a cleanliness freak...so she wud become furios to see the whole room woven with dirty spider webs.....😆 though she knew abt krishna's newly acquired power bt she had forbidden him to publicly display it.....😆 bt as usual krishna disobeyed her and cntinued with his own mischiefs...
that day pratigya had gone shopping with komal and adarsh(komal had married adarsh on gun point)....and she told krishna that she wud take a long time....... krishna was overjoyed to hear it..... he thot----uuuff...aab aaj hum chain se aim practice kar payenge apne kamre mein.....na koi pratigya na uski jhik jhik jhik jhik......😆
as soon as she went out..he started to practice his aim at each and evrythng inside his room... in this process he brot down a vry expensive vase into pieces and the wall hangings too.... in short,he created a total mess in the room and wen he actually stopped it was quite late and time for pratigya to return.....😲
he looked around himself in panic... he had brot the whole room upside down..and there wasnt evn enuf time to set thngs ryt... still...her started to clean up evrythng wen suddenly he heard pratigya's voice frm downstairs------haan kesar didi...aapke liye bhi shopping ki hain humne...chaliye hamare kamre mein hum dikhate hain....
krishna's heart leaped up into his mouth......he became terrified as he heard footsteps coming towards their room.... to save himself...he ran into the balcony and jumped over the fence...then he stuck himself underneath the balcony with his spider ropes....😆
he started backcounting....
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just as he had guessed.....it seemed as if an earthquake had taken place......the whole house shook as she screamed.....including krishna.... just becoz the ropes to wich he held on to..were quite strong otherwise....🤣
"krishna...krishna????? KRISHNAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!"------he heard her shouting... he shut his eyes tightly and waited.... soon she came over to the balcony and addressed him-----krishna hum jante hain ki tum balcony ke niche chupe hue ho...jaldi bahar aa jao...warna....warna....warna.... hum scissors leke ayenge....aur..tumhara woh rassi kat denge bata rahe hain.....🤣
krishna-----nhi....nhi....ruko.....hum ate hain........
he struggled up and over the fence in frnt of his ferocious wife.......🤣 whu stood there...panting like a hungry tigress......😆
krishna-----woh...pratigya...woh hum....woh......
pratigya-----humne tumhe mana kiye the......aur tumne hamari baat nhi mani...thk hain koi baat nhi...tumne hamare room ko ganda kiya hain...chizein todi hain...hum yahan nhi reh sakte...HUM GHAR CHOD KE JAA RAHE HAIN.....🤣 (actually adarsh had planned for a family picnic....bt pratigya knew that SS wont let her attend it...so she took this chance to act on.....and created such drama...)
krishna scratched his head,cnfused...he cudnt make out whether she was serious or just joking.....
pratigya turned around and walked away....... wen she ACTUALLY left the thakur mansion,krishna realised that she wasnt joking.....
at frst he stood there quietly.....unable to thnk wat to do....then suddenly he put his hands up in the air and started to dance in joy........🤣
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it had been some days since pratigya left...and krishna was missing her terribly...he wanted to bring her back in SPIDERMAN style bt he didnt want to make her more angry so adopted the human being way..... although SS was totally against it...he went to the saxena's to bring pratigya back......
after a lot of rona dhonas and singing tragic songs in frnt of her house......😆 in his disgusting voice disturbing evn the neighbours.... pratigya at last agreed to return back with him...(in fact she HAD TO...the neighbours pleaded her 🤣)
as they reached thakur mansion...SS stopped them frm getting inside.....
SS-----jo ladki is ghar ke chaukhat par thukke chali jati hain...uuko hum bina mafi mange is ghar mein ane nhi denge.,.......😡
krishna-------bauji hum bht thake hue hain...aab ee sab dirama baad mein karna...gana gate gate gala sukh gaya hain humar....hume andar jane dijiye....aao pratigya.....
he took his wife's hand to lead her inside bt SS stopped them agen...
SS----kaha na....koi andar nhi jayega? pehle mafi.....
the furious and tired krishna cud nt thnk of any other way... he flipped his fingers and pushed out a spider rope wich sped up to his father and got stuck on his kurta.... then agen he gave out another rope wich got stuck on his dhoti.....
then krishna said to the bewildered SS------humoi andar ane do bauji....warna agr humne ye rassi khich diya na...to ijjat ka dhajjya ud jayega...samjheo ki nai......🤣🤣
SS became tensed.... he knew his son pretty well...he was as stubborn as he... he smiled-----are beta gussa kahe karte ho...humo to mazaq kar rahe the....rassi mat khicho yaaar.... biwi baccho ke samne nanga karoge ka apne bauji ko....chalo chalo andar ayi jao......
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krishna and pratigya entered the house happily,hand in hand.....😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
you took so long to update it! 😡 😆
🤣 🤣 arre kahe dhotti bachha li be! 🤣 utar jaati to achcha tha! 🤣 I am imagining SS grinning n pleading to Spider Krish to 'not let the rope go' 🤣

Krish ko ye shaadi mahangi pad gayi lagta hai! 😆
Edited by pritirays - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: pritirays

you took so long to update it! 😡 😆
Let me go n read it! Will post my comments soon! 😉

i always wait for the ryt time beta..😆 this ff is like lord krishna...appears only wen it is needed the most(wen there is atmosphere of tension in this forums)😉😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaasshh

i always wait for the ryt time beta..😆 this ff is like lord krishna...appears only wen it is needed the most(wen there is atmosphere of tension in this forums)😆


wht happened now? Bashing again started or wht? 😆
Btw 'ye awaaz mujhe de de Kaash' 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ohh ohhh, and I wanted to tell you abt SMK FF! YOu ended it so fast! 😕 I mean the plot was good but too fast towards the end! 😆

I wasn't even able to imagine Ekta style camera zoom - zoom zoom zoom
🤣 as in zoom three times on Pratigya's face when she came to know how Krish saved her! 😳

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