~Dhoka Ya Pyaar~..Chap 38 Pg.56(UPDATED!!)

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Originally posted by: NZ_rockx

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hellllooo...muchas muchas gracias..for ur lubelyy comments..here is chapter 3 of my FF

~Chap 3~
NEW CHARACTERS
Ronit Roy: Mr. Singh Krish's dad
Urvashi: Krish's step mom
Tina: Maid

Please Papa..wake up..u have to wake up..u can't leave me alone like that..plzz wake up..
He was crying and begging his dead father to wake up..
plzz papa..he saw sum people were carrying his dad's body he wanted to stop them.."Stop...where are u taking him..hez my dad..dont take him away..i can't live wid out him"..he is running after them..but they took him away..
and he falls down..
PAPA!!...Krishna wakes up..shouting..
he sees around the room..he cudnt breathe...he didnt knw..when he fall asleep on the rocking chair..the room wad drowned in darkness...he wiped the drops of sweat on his forehead..he opened the window and took a deep beath.."Huh!"..he sighed..and got lost in his past..

chotima..chotiMa...aap kahan jaa rahee ho..plzz mujhe chor kar nahi jaao..papa bhi ghar par nahi hain..main akela hoon..
the kid pleaded to his mom..
Mother: Betaaaa..pata hai na..mujhe jaana hai..business meeting hai.."Tina..Tina"...(the woman shouted the maid's name..to call her)
Tina: yes Ma'm
Mother: where were U..go and take him...and make sure he sleeps..(she shouted at Tina)
Tina: Ma'm..Baba is very sick..he has got high fever...
the Mother again yelled at Tina: why are you here then...we have hired u to take care of him..can't u just do ur work..
Tina: But ma'm in this state BaBa needz u and Mr. Singh..he wants his parents around him..
Mother now roared: Oh realli..now u will teach me..listen u...im not his mother..im Mr. Singh's second wife..and he is not my kid..understood!!
now u better take him..wid u..and give him medicine..

Tina sighed helplessly and took the kid wid him..who still was sobbing.
Tina: chaliye Baba...she took the kid to his room and closed the door

the women leaves the house..and after sum time Mr. Singh arrives..
the huge mansion is drowned in the darkness..he directly goes to his son's room..where he sees Tina..he asks wat happens and she tells him watever happened...
he sits next to his son and tells tina to go.
when she leaves..he starts talking to his 6 yrs old kid..
Mr.Singh.."Krishna Beta..im soo sorry..now papa is here..im sorry for everything that's happening to u krishna..i knw im responsible..but im helpless beta..after ur mom's death because of cancer..i needed sum1 to support me and take care of u..i thought she wud give u mother's love..but i was wrong..and im regretting now"
now Mr. Singh was crying..Krishna woke up and smiled seeing his father..he hugged him
Papaaa, sed Krishna..
mela betaa...mr. Singh kissed him on cheek..
then the son and father started palying wid each other...
this is how years passed..now Krishna was 13 years old..his stepmom..dusnt care about him..shez never home..always bz in her social activities...

one day Krishna hears his stepmom talking to sum1 on the phone
StepMom: everything is happening according to our plan..i think now is the time..we shud call Mr.Singh over the cliff..wahin par uska kaam tamam
and then we will take all the money and will run away..and waise bhi police ka chakkar he nahi hoga kyonki tum khud he police department say ho..now i cant wait darling..can't believe..that business tycoon Mr. Singh is soo dumb that can't even figure out that i married him juzz coz of money..
Well humay kya..humko to bas paisay se matlab hai..becharay Mr.Singh...hahahahaha..she laughed evilly ..and left the room..

there 13 years old Krishna was numb after hearing his stepmom's plan about killing his father...he ran to his room..thinking wat to do...he cudnt tell police
he called his dad...there were no signals...he ran outside..to hide in his stepmom's car..because he knew she was going to the place where she planned to kill his dad..
but it was late..she already left...
hours passed..he continiously tried to call his dad..but his phone was switched off
At nite..his stepmom came to the house..she was very nervous..Krishna was very scared..he was hiding behind the sofa in the TV lounge
after she arrived..an hour later..she started crying loudly..
she called all the servants..and told them that Mr. Singh's car has met wid an accident and he is NO MORE...
she called his dad's onli sister..who was use to live in Paris..she cudnt believe..
Krishna was unspeakable..coz he knew it was gonna happen...but he was soo helpless that he cudnt save his father's life..

he saw..people started to cum to his house..businessmen..media..politicians..police and her stepmom's boyfrend..he saw them smiling at each other...in the crowd of strangers..there was no one..who cared for Krishna..

after a day..when his dad was gone 4ever...his Dad's sister came and hugged Krishna..and cried..for hours...Krishna cudnt speak anything..

she talked to his stepmom..who was trying to act that she was very shattered..after her husband's death..Krishna ran back to his room..
the lawyer came..and that's when Mr. Singh's second wife..got to knw that ...a day b4 his death..Mr. Singh changed his decision and left every thing for Krishna..till he was 18..his sister was responsible for Krishna..there was nothing left for his second wife...
Mr. Singh's sister took Krishna to Paris wid her...where he grew up..and studied..but he always wanted to take Revenge frm his stepmom..his father's murderer..he kept searching for her and after searching for 9 years..he came to know that she was living in Shimla...but where..he didnt know..he had to find out..and that's y he came here..and became Angad's frend who told him about this house..thats y he stayed with these two ladies..who cud never..suspect him..he had no intention to harm them..until they stay out of his plan..he didnt wanna harm any1...he juzz wanted to take revenge..by killing that woman..

he was like other 22 year old guys...he was dashing..in Paris..mostly gurls were ready to die for him..but he never respected gurls like that..who were always after hot guys..and were use to flirt with them
they always reminded him of his stepmom..who married sum1 else..and was having an affair..

a tear fall down frm his eyes on his hand..which brought him bak to the present..he realized it was very late now..he shud close the window..because the window opens rite in front of a balcony..and he feared that it mite be pratigya's room
Pratigya's thought brought a smile on his face.."Pagal Larki"..he whispered..and closed the windows and lays down on the bed and fell asleep..

Precap: Krishna..Pratigya and NainaJee on dining table..for break fast..

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ellen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

yey first to reply! awwww so its good intention.

his stepmums such a cow! awwww bless his dada!

this sounds really good now, thank god suspence is broken he he, anyway great job. please continue soon nida :D

Edited by ellen4eva - 15 years ago

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nida

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: ellen4eva
yey first to reply! awwww so its good intention.
his stepmums such a cow! awwww bless his dada!

this sounds really good now, thank god suspence is broken he he, anyway great job. please continue soon nida :D

AwWww..the first 1 to comment..btw..wats ur name yaar..
thanxx for ur comment..phew so now everything is cleared...no more suspence..
i knw..hate the step mom....dont worry jee..now it will get more interesting and hopefully..u will like it..
will try to update very soon

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Aww....tht was an awesome chp.So we got to know more abt Krishna and in the previous chp he wanted to find out where his stepmom was.He does have a very painful past.I feel sory for him.I am looking forward to the next chp😊

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Aabray

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: NZ_rockx

Aray mere pyaaree souten jee..tum to Eid ka chaand ho gayee ho...aaj kal miltee hi nahi jo bataaon..aur waise bhi tumko surpirse he mila na 😉😆😳..aainda dehaan rakhoon gee..madam..theek😳
and thanx for liking the concept🤗

i dont cum online in yahoo.....mera pc achanak slow ho gaya...aur waise mujhe bohot kaam time milti hain......thats bcoz one ov my family is goin canada forever.....soo i hv to attend all the farewell parties.......sum last parties wid them😭

anways love the chap 3............buh i read kriya romantic scenes more clrly.....as u know i cant read a WHOLE chap.........😆

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Sadie

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Awwww!!!! The End Bit Was Sooo Cute!! Pagal Larki Lol! Finally The Suspenece Is Broken ! Lol Update Soon =)

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parvs

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

hey that was really good... please continue soon

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nida

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Posted: 15 years ago

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heyy guyss...thanxx for ur comments..here is chap 4 of my FF
hope u all like it..plzz continue to comment...or press the like button

~Chap 4~

Knock Knock..Krishna woke up...rubbing his eyes...
he got up and opened the door...and sees an old man..looked like a servant..
Servant: beta aap ko NainaJee nay bulaya hai..nashatay par...
Krishna: theek hai..main aata hoon..waise aap ka naam kya hai kaka
Beta: sab mujhko Ramu KaKa bolte hain...tum bhi bol sakte ho..
Krishna: theek hai..chaliye to phir aap NainaJee se boliye..main thoree dair main aata hoon..
Ramu Kaka left and Krishna closed the door..and rushed to the bathroom to take a bath
After exactly half an hour..he was on the breakfast table

NainaJee and pratigya was waiting for him..
Krishna: i am soo sorry..lagta hai meree liye aap logon ko bohot wait karna parha...
Pratigya gave him a sarcastic look...and sed.."Nahi Nahi...aap kyon sorry bol rahe hain..humko to aap ka intezaar karna bohot acha lag raha tha..aap thora aur time laga lete..
NainaJee:"Pratigyaaa"..Naina Jee looked at her to tell her to stop
Pratigya..became silent..
NainaJee: nahi beta..hum samajh sakte hain..kal he to aaye ho..everything will be fine..once u get use to the routine..waise raat main koi problem to nahi hui na..
Krishna: aray nahi nahi nainaJee..bilkul bhi nahi
NainaJee:..tum mujhko Naina Aunty bolo..mujhe acha lagay ga..she smiled..
Krishna felt so nice..he realli liked NainaJee..she always reminded him of his mother..(not the step mom..)
Pratigya: maasi..now shall we start..mere pait main haati shor macha rahay hain
NainaJee and Krishna looked at her..and laughed..which caused pratigya's face turned red coz of embarracement
sumtimes..she hated her talkitive nature..and this was 1 of the time

every1 had breakfast..During breakfast NainaJee investigated about Krishna..and he told her that he is from Punjab..and his family lives there..thats all he sed..
Krishna: Naina Aunty..the breakfast was deliciouss..
NainaJee smiled and sed: yeh to achi baat hui..waise bhi bahar ka khana is not gud for ur health..waise beta..Do u go to the office at the same time..
Krishna: yes aunty..
NainaJee..thats gud then..u will have breakfast wid us everyday..
Krishna: yes..ok aunty..i will leave now..i have to shift sum of the stuff here..and thats y not going to the office
NainaJee..ohh ok..thats gud..if u need sum help then tell Ramu Kaka..he will help u..and if therez any problem then tell me..NainaJee went to the kitchen

Krishna smiled and got up to leave..pratigya had already left...and was sitting in the TV lounge..rite in front of the small dining hall..
..he was leaving..he had to pass frm the TV lounge where pratigya was sitting and reading a fashion magazine..he stopped in the TV lounge and..and looked at pratigya..who was bz with the magazine..
he again smiled..while looking at her..he didnt know why..but he tried to be serious..
Krishna: umm...Excuse me Ms. Pratigya..
now pratigya..looked at him..and was irritated..coz of the disturbance..
Krishna: ummm...im sorry..woh kal k liye....main kuch zyada he bol gaya tha..
Pratigya who was now raising her eyebrows..and was gonna reply..it made Krishna nervous..he never talked to a gurl..that nicely..he didnt give Pratigya a chance to speak and continued
Krishna: woh...yesterday it was soo hot..and i lost my patience..and talked a bit too much..im realli sorry..
Pratigya:..now started giggling..which made Krishna more nervous..he was about to leave and was almost at the door..when pratigya called him
Pratigya: aray rukiye..Mr. Krishna..its ok..
he turned around and saw pratigya smiling..he smiled back for a second and left

Pagal..and ULLO..#1..Krishna cursed himself in his mind..there was no need to say sorry..pata nahi..kyon bola mainay..ab woh mera mazak bana rahee hogee..Krishna was frustrated..
these gurl are impossible..maafi maango to mazak urhatee hain..if u dont say sorry then they fight wid u..
he was mad at himself since morning while..setting his stuff..then suddenly his cell phone rang..
Krishna..Hello..main nay kaha na..keep searching for her..i will give u as much money as u want..i juzz want that women..understood..!
then he disconnected the phone..and put his gun in the locker of the closet..and locked it.. for safety

he was tired..it was almost evening..the sun was still shining..but now..there was wonderful breeze blowing out..and making the atmosphere amazingly beautiful..he opened the door and went outside to get sum fresh air.. and streched his arms..and took a deep breath...he noticed
and saw..a girl was walking in the garden on the grass barefoot..the gurl was none other than pratigya..
He 4got all his frustration and anger..he thought it is because of the weather..he walked over to pratigya..who now hesitated...and wore her sandals..Krishna realized and sensed that she was hesitating..but he cudnt keep himself asking the reason behind walking barefoot on the grass
Krishna: may i ask u a question if u dont mind..
Pratigya: yes sure..
Krishna: what is the reason behind walking barefoot on the grass..he asked wid so much innocence..pratigya cud feel the confusion in his question...
she laughed..and answered..it is my way to relax..u try it sum time..walking barefoot on the wet and cool grass..is so much relaxing..try it sum day...she smiled...
Krishna: ohh ok..yeah sure..he smiled..
Pratigya..sorry now i have to go..coz im going to my frendz house..have to get ready..
Krishna..ok..bye..enjoy..he smiled..
Pratigya: bye..and she left..

Krishna goes bak to his room and gets bz wid the setting of his Room..while doing the work he was thinking that Pratigya is soo different from the gurls he met. She knew her limits..the way she was reserved from Krishna..he liked her sharam and haya..because Krishna was still a stranger for her....he thought..she was such a sanskaari gurl..this thought made Krishna respect Pratigya..

Pre-Cap..Pratigya is at her frendz house when NainaJee slips down frm the stairs..
Will Krishna get to knw about this accident..Will he help?!

plzzz guyss..leave comments and tell if u want sum changes..and if u like it or not..criticizm is always welcomed..😃

Edited by NZ_rockx - 15 years ago

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Arre wah!!chp bahut badiya tha.It was very sweet.looks like Krishna has started to think a lot more abt Pratigya now.Looking forward to the next chp.😊

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