~Dhoka Ya Pyaar~..Chap 38 Pg.56(UPDATED!!)

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nida

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: -sunlight-

thats ok - i am waiting eagerly for your next chapter :)

im working on it..will update tomorrow.. 😉

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kasturika ghosh

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soooooo nice.....lovely concept.....lovely stry....and awsum writing...plzz cntinue........

p.s. loved naina ji....she is soo sweet kash...meri bhi aisi hi ek maassi hoti...😍

and pratigya is so innocent and cute....wonder how krishna wud b......

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Shabz.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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a new ff...gr8 start. the first chapter is well written, looking forward to the next.

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Sadie

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Amazing!! So Far So Good =)

Update Soon Cant Wait !

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Aabray

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

wats this arida??? u didnt evn tell me abt it........nevaa mind
anways nice concpt dear

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nida

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Originally posted by: kaasshh
soooooo nice.....lovely concept.....lovely stry....and awsum writing...plzz cntinue........
p.s. loved naina ji....she is soo sweet kash...meri bhi aisi hi ek maassi hoti...😍

and pratigya is so innocent and cute....wonder how krishna wud b......

🤗

Awww..thanxx Kaasshh...for ur sweet comments 🤗...i tried to make Naina Jee look more interesting and sweet..coz..she always cries in the show..but in this story..she is like Prats best frend..and yaar main bhi yahee soch rahee thi k kaash meri bhi aik aisee masi hoti..but meri koi maasi he nahi hai..
and Krishna's character has lots of secrets,,...so its a bit suspenseful..😉

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nida

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Originally posted by: Shabz.
a new ff...gr8 start. the first chapter is well written, looking forward to the next.

thanx shabz...so glad u liked the FF..hope u will like the next chaps..😉 😃

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nida

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Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku
Amazing!! So Far So Good =)
Update Soon Cant Wait !

thank Uuu..will update very soon 😳

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nida

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Originally posted by: Aabrayy
wats this arida??? u didnt evn tell me abt it........nevaa mind
anways nice concpt dear

Aray mere pyaaree souten jee..tum to Eid ka chaand ho gayee ho...aaj kal miltee hi nahi jo bataaon..aur waise bhi tumko surpirse he mila na 😉😆😳..aainda dehaan rakhoon gee..madam..theek😳
and thanx for liking the concept🤗

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nida

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thanx soo much guyss for appreciating ma work and liking the concept 😳..here is the chap.2 of my FF
and plzz dont 4get to leave comments or press the like button 😉

~Chap. 2~

Pratigya:Who Are U?...she looked at him..observing him carefully..he was smiling..and was carrying a bag..

Stranger: Main Woh..
Pratigya: kya Woh haan?..aap ko tameez hai k nahi..she kept talking in frustration..

the guy who was now losing patience...says: Oh HeLLo..madam..phelee baat...aap mujh se takraai...main nahi..aap kahan dekh kar chal rahee thee..Kab se bolne Kee koshish kar raha hoon par bolne he nahi day rahee..is there any machine fixed in ur mouth that u juzz can't stop talking...I came here searching for sum1..her name is...(he looked in the paper in his hand).."Yeah..her name is Naina..and one of my frend told me that shez looking for a paying guest..and i need a place to live..so i came here...but lagta hai..he gave me the wrong address..im leaving..aur haan waise sorry aapko bolna chahiye tha..but im realli sorry..he finished..and thought "kahin kuch zyada to nahi bol diya"..
"i think i shud leave now"..he sed..

Pratigya was looking at him wid her mouth opened..and squeezed her small eyes..was gonna give him gud reply..but heard her maasi who was cuming towardz them...

NainaJee:"Aray Ruko!"..she stopped the boy who was leaving..
NainaJee:..Hum hain Naina..bolo kya kaam hai..
The Guy: "Ohh..namaste NainaJee"..actualli my frend Angad told me that u need a paying guest..so i came here..but i thought he gave me the wrong address..he sed..while looking angrily at Pratigya.
NainaJee Smiling: Aray nahi..tum bilkul sahi jagah aaye ho..Mrs. Sharma and Angad told me about u..u can stay here if u agree wid my all conditions...no drinking..smoking..if u go out...u have to be here at 10:00..the watchman will not open the door if ur late..and we will give u food..but no frendz cuming in our house..and staying..i will give u the written contract..which will include other conditions..if u agree..and sign than u can bring ur stuff today..Naina Jee smiled in the end.

The Guy Smiled and nodded..and also looked pratigya..who was still mad at him..and giving him an angry look
Naina:to phir..main contract lay kar aatee hoon..Pratigya Beta..Y dont u show him the house..Pratigya was shocked to see how her maasi was trusting this guy..
NainaJee: i think u both have introduced urselves..rite..the guy nodded and smiled
NainaJee: So young man..i can trust u in the case of my neice..u knw na wat i mean..i dont think u r like those guys who try to flirt wid gurls..tum shareef khandaan k lagtay ho..Naina Jee looked at him and asked for the answer
The Guy: yeah sure ma'm..u can trust me..im not like that.(iss pagal larkee se aur main..woh bhi flirt karoon) he thought in his mind and laughed..
NainaJee:thats gud.. by the way..tumhara naam kya hai beta?
The Guy: Krishna Singh...mera naam Krishna Singh hai..
NainaJee: achaa...chalo phir theek hai..tum apna kamra dekho Krishna..main aatee hoon..naina Jee leaves..
Pratigya: (pata nahi apne aap ko kya samajhta hai..Krishna Singh..aise naam bata raha hai..jaise kisi film ka hero ho...Langoor jaisa dikhta hai..hero aur yeh..NO WAY!) pratigya sed in her mind

Krishna looks at Pratigya..who was staring at him..and was lost..
Krishna: Ahem Ahem..mujhe pata hai..k main kaafi gud looking hoon..but ur aunt sed that she trusts me..that...
Pratigya interupted him: chaliye main aap ko aapka room dekha doon.
Krishna smiled and they both walked towards the room

the room was pretty big..Krishna liked it..perfect for him..and for his purpose...Krishna was lost thinking about how and

when to start his plan..when Pratigya's voice brought him back to the present..

Pratigya: So Mr..

Krishna: Krishna...
Pratigya: Jee Krishna..yeh hai aapka room..koi cheez ki zaroorat ho to bol dijiye ga..Maasi ko..main chaltee hoon..
Pratigya was leaving..when saw maasi cuming with the contract..she waited for maasi to finish talking about the contract..finally Krishna signed it
and Naina Jee and Pratigya left..

In pratigya's room..

After taking a bath Pratigya was feeling soo fresh and nice..she went to the mirror and was combing her hair..when maasi entered with 2 cups of coffee..
Pratigya: Aray Maasi..kyon aap itna kaam karte ho..main abhi aa rahee thee na coffee banane k liye..
NainaJee..Nahi beta..Saara kaam to aaj tum nay Kiya..2day u cleaned the whole room..for that Paying guest..kya naam hai uska..NainaJee tried to remember
Pratigya: Krishna Singh...Pratigya sed imitating him...
Naina jee laughed..kya huwa..tumko acha nahi laga...Kaafi handsome hai..main to samjhee k tum..
Pratigya interupted NainaJee: O pleeassse Maasi..woh Langoor..itna bhaao khata hai..hez juz to proud of himself..Stupid..

NainaJee: Nahi beta..aisa nahi kehtay..kya pata..woh dil ka acha ho..shareef khandaan ka lagta hai..Mrs Sharma bol rahee thee..that hez new to the place..shayad transfer huwa hai..job waalon ke taraf se..aur waise bhi..he will give us the money..more money than the previous paying guests were use to give..it was a family of 6...and hez onli 1..so its not a bad deal..NainaJee winked and they both laughed..
hmmm..Pratigya agreed with her maasi..

Krishna on the phone wid sum1
Krishna: Jaldi uss aurat ka pata lagaao...main aur intezaar nahi kar sakta..
mujhe uska har halat main pata lagana hai..samjhe tum!
and he disconnected the phone..and sat and relaxed on his rocking chair..lost thinking about something

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