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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow Kaash..........tht was a vey nice chp.Krishna is so sweet in ur ff. 😊
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kya baat hai! well done 😊
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Iss ff ko kab update kar rahi ho?? 😊
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Originally posted by: shruthiR

Iss ff ko kab update kar rahi ho?? 😊

aaj sham ko ....😊
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Originally posted by: kaasshh


<div></div>aaj sham ko ....😊


Gr8!!tab tak main besabri se intezaar karungi 😊
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chapter---12

pratigya was bored. she didn't have anything to do and neither cud she thnk of anything. she was afraid to go out as she feared her neighbours wud start making abusive comments at her... she felt terribly lonely. she knew that she had disguised herself as krishna's wife so noone cud raised their fingers at her deliberately bt she also knew that nothing cud stop these people frm gossiping and she didn't want to be their centre of discussion. so she remained in the house only....

as she had nothing to do and she sat lazily on the bed,numerous thots came to her mind. at frst she thot-----kya papa sachmuch hume kabhi ghar mein nhi bulayenge? kya sachmuch wo hume tyag chuke hain? aur bhaiya? wo kaise react karenge jab unhe sabkuxch pata chalega? kya wo bhi papa ki tarah humse saare rishte tod denge? ya fir wo hume yahan se le jayenge? nitin kya sochega?

the sound of the wall clock's pendulum disturbed her thots. she looked at the clock,it was 3 p.m. she sighed and got up,she had evn forgotten to take her lunch.

she went to the kitchen and started searching for thngs. as it ws nt a familiar place she found it a great difficulty in finding small thngs like bowls and evn glasses. after searching a lot,she caught hold of the bowls bt the glasses were still nt to be found. frustrated,she came out of the kitchen and decided to look into the wooden shelves if she found them there....

she pushed aside the sliding doors of the shelf and started looking for the glasses.. suddenly she noticed something inside the shelf wich caught her attention. she grabbed the thing and took it out to take a careful look. it was a pallate,an artist's palate. she looked at the thng suspiciously, wondering wat was it doing there. then she shrugged and decided to put it back into its place wen she touched sometng else inside the shelf. with increasing interest she pulled out a bunch of painting brushes.....

pratigya was surprised---ye sab yahan kya kar raha hain? kya krishna paint karta hain? warna in sab ki uski kya zaroorat ho sakti hain?

pratigya put the thngs back into their places and headed back towards the kitchen bt the incident did nt escape her mind. she had herself learnt to paint in a high-class sophisticated painting institute although she found least interest in painting. it was just that her father wanted her to be trained in evry single thng.....

pratigya remembered once she had argued a lot with her father regarding this issue.......

************* papa aap aisa nhi kar sakte...apko koi haq nhi banta....mujhe ye sab bilkul pasand nhi hain.....mujhe painting bilkul acchi nhi lagti papa....mujhe guitar sikhna hain...i want to play the guitar.......

shyam ji----tumhari itni himmat? aab tum mujhe ye sikhaogi ki mra tumpar kitna haq hain? badtameezs ladki!!!

pratigya had tried to calm down..she knew that she cud nt win her father by showing her temper. she had lowered her voice almost immediately------papa am sry...maine aapse istarah se baat ki par papa am so offended....aap kuch samajhne ke liye tayar hi nhi hain...mujhe painting acchi nhi lagti aur agr koi cheez accha na lagta ho to use karne mein kya fayda,aap hi bataiye?

shyam ji----tum wohi karogi jo hum tumse karwayenge....humne to kabhi apne ma bap se ye nhi kaha hain ki humse ye kyun karwaya wo kyun karwaya? to tum kaise ye sab kuch keh sakti ho hgumse? tum painting ka dusra year complete karogi ye mera hokum hain.....*******************

pratigya? kya soch rahi ho?------krishna's voice almost made her jump...she was day dreaming,sitting in the kitchen with her dirty hands... she had evn forgotten to wash her hands...

she got up and smiled at him---tum aa gaye wapas?

krishna---nhi ye hamara bhoot hain...aur tum ye kar rahi ho? ye waqt hain lunch karne ka? itni der tak kya kar rahi thi?

pratigya walked towards the basin to wash her hands while krishna sat down on the bed to rest a little......

pratigya came back after some time with a glass of water. she offered it to krishna and then sat down beside him....

pratigya---accha mujhe ek baat batao...

krishna---kya?

pratigya----kya tum painting karte ho?

the smile disappeared frm his face wich became stern and stiff..... he did nt reply.. pratigya did nt notice it and she continued saying----nhi actually maine tumhare shelf mein brushes aur palate dekhi thi isiliye socha ki shayad tum painting karte honge.....maine bhi painting sikhi thi kuch saal fir papa se jhagra karke chod diya...mujhe accha nhi lagta tha.....

krishna(in a cold tone)----to fir sikhi kyun?

pratigya---bas papa ki wajase....jor jabardasti...papa ne mujhe dance aur singing classes mein bhi bharti karwa di thi par wo bhi chod di maine.....ye sab accha nhi lagta tha mujhe...

krishna smiled sarcastically-----hmmm...aisa hi hota...ameer bap ki beti ho.....tumlogo par paisa kharach karnewale bht log hote hain lekin un paison na amiyat koi nhi samajhta.....

pratigya felt some what ashamed at his wrds...she held down her head... krishna sighed and got up... then he headed towards the bathroom to get fresh....

wen he returned,he noticed pratigya still sitting quietly on the bed,head held low,with the glass in her hand...

krishna called out to her----kya hua? aise kahe baithi ho?

pratigya didn't reply....krishna walked up to her and asked her agen,gently----pratigya baat kya hain?

she looked up at him and said----krishna am sorry......

krishna----kisliye?

pratigya-----krishna maine aisa bht kuch kiya hain jo mujhe kabhi nhi karni chahiye thi....maine hamesha apne bare mein socha hain..kabhi kisiki bhavnao ki kadar nhi ki.....apne mummy papa ke bhi nhi....bht swarthy hun main....aur aaj jo kuch bhi mere saath ho raha hain..thk hi ho raha hain...i deserve this...... kya ho jata agr main karan se sagai kar leti....mre parivaarwale to khush hote,hain na? nhi....mujhe to apni marzi se chalna tha....ye sab jhoot moot ka drama,ye saari nautanki.....main kitna gir chuki hun krishna...apni swarth ke liye maine apne mummy papa ko kitna dukh pahuchaya hain.......aur tumhe bhi meri wajase kitni saari pareshani uthani pad rahi hain......am sorry for all these krishna...plz mujhe maaf kar do......

krishna listened to her quietly and then sat down beside her.... he put his hand around her shoulder and gently pulled her to his side...pratigya laid her head on his shoulder and wept....... she had realised that she had been so wrong these days...she had always taken advantage of her family's love and care towards her...and she knew that watevr was happening with her..was some kind of a punishment for her.........

after some time krishna said to her-----pratigya....aab jo kuch ho gaya hain uske bare mein sochkar kya fayda....lekin haan ek baat to hain........hume lagta hain ki aab hume sachmuch shaadi kar leni chahiye...

pratigya sat up straight and looked at him...she was shocked...she didn't know wat to say---kya? kya keh rahe to tum?

krishna'haan kyunki log to hume pati patni samajh hi rahe hain...to fir shaadi karne mein kya harj hain?

pratigya fumbled for wrds bt cudnt thnk of any...... suddenly krishna burst out in laughter......he continued laughing for at least few minutes,his whole body shaking with the convulsions of his laughter......

pratigya was puzzled...she cudnt make out anything frm his strange behaviour.....

krishna stopped after some time and faced her----tumhe kya laga...hum sachmein tumse shaadi ki baat kar rahe the? are yar.....pgaal ho kya.....are hum kabhi ye nhi chahenge ki tumhari zindagi barbad ho jaye...hum to sirf mazaq kar rahe the...ooofff tumhari shakal dekhni layak ho gayi thi jab humne ye baat batayi tumko.......

pratigya was furious at him for making such a stupiud joke...she started to beat him with her small fists,in spite of krishna trying hard to protect himself...ultimately he caught both of her hands and pushed her down on her back.....she smiled at last..........and suddenly put her arms tightly around krishna's neck.....

krishna was totally taken aback at this action.....he kept his hands down on his sides although there was a deep desire in his mind to hug her back bt he knew that if he did that...he wud nt be able to separate himself frm her.....

pratigya whispered into his ears-----i really like u a lot krishna....tum sachmein bht bht bht acche insaan ho....thanks for evrythng u r doing for me....i really like u.............

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aa...pratigya zyaada hilo mat...haan ye thk hain----said krishna with the brush between his teeth....

it was evening and pratigya had forced krishna to start with his artistic practices agen.... krishna had revealed it to her that painting was his passion. pratigya was too excited to hear it and expressed her wish to make him paint her picture..... after much pleadings and buttering,krishna had at last agreed to her proposal....

but this grl did nt know that it wud nt be difficult only for krishna to do this work bt it wud also be equally tiresome for her,being a model.... she had been bored out of her mind,sitting in the same posture for about two hours and wanted to have a break..... bt krishna wud nt let her... he wud snap at her evry now and then wen she tried to move a little...

disgusted,pratigya called out to him---plzzz krishna....my back is paining....i want some rest......

krishna,continuing his work----kisne kaha tha ki meri painting banao...meri painting banao? huh?

pratigya ----o kjrishna plzzzz...at least ten minutes break?

krishna----no mam....abhi nhi bas thoda sa hi baki hain ho jayega...tum chup chap baitho....

pratigya continued to plead,her voice becoming more coaxing and sweeter each time-----plzzzz krishna......tho0da sa....pani to peene do......

krishna---nhi....kaha than a humne......ye asan kam nhi hain

pratigya---haaan ji...aab pata chal raha hain........par plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

krishna did nt reply this time....... pratigya had to shut up,ultimately.......and sighed.....

after another hours hard work wen pratigya had almost started to feel that she had no bones...krishna completed his work......

pratigya jumped up at once after he said------aab tum hil sakti ho..........

she came towards him to have a look at the painting bt krishna stopped her---aha....abhi nhi...

pratigya was surprised-----kyu? kya main apni tasveer nhi dekh sakti?

krishna---kyu nhi par pehle apni aakhen band karo..........

pratigya smiled and closed her eyes...krishna took her hand and made her stand in frnt of the painting..... then he said---aab apni ankhen kholo.....

pratigya slowly opened her eyes to take a look at her own face..... at frst her eyes had no expression in them...then gradually they became so much wide as if she had seen a ghost.......no...it was not a ghost...really....it was a beautiful face of a baboon..........

krishna did nt wait for her reaction and started laughing heartily......he roamed around the whole room,clutching his stomach.....while pratigya stood like a doll,with the painting in her hand....

krishna---kyu....bilkul tumhari jaisi hain....hain na?

without a single wrd,pratigya caught hold of the colour palate and swung it at krishna....he was just in time to lower his head.......pratigya...grumbling camer forward in quick steps and clutched at his hair......

pratigya----mar dalungi main tumhe....aaj to tumhe mere haath se koi nhi bacha sakta......... tumne tin ghante se ye painting banayi hain? yahan mera sar ghum raha ahin.....pith dukh raha hain...hath payer sab dukh raha hain tin ghante se ek hi posture par baithe baithe aur tum? i will kill u today....

krishna released himself frm her clutch and ran towards the bathroom to escape her rage....she followed him..... bt her feet slipped on water and she fell down on the floor......

krishna was more amused at her condition and continued laughing..... pratigya became so furious that she picked up a water filled bucked and splashed water on him........ his laughter stopped immediately......

he looked at pratigya....she had wetted him frm head to heels.........

pratigya giggled-----kya hua? aab haso naa...hasi kyun ruk gayi tumhari....aab hanso? jee bhar ke hanso......

krishna stepped towards her and suddenly clutched her waist and crushed her against himself.... she stopped giggling to see his eyes.......there was something wich seemed unfamiliar to her...as if the person she knew was suddenly lost and this was a stranger whum she didn't know at all....

krishna slowly moved his face towards her... she closed her eyes,unconsciously.........as if she was awaiting something......he stopped an inch away frm her lips, pratigya started to breath heavily.......it seemed as if her mind had blocked all thoughts for few seconds.....then suddenly....he released her and moved away.......

pratigya opened her eyes and stared at him........the same krishna she knew was back......smiling.......

krishna-------bhuk lagi hain ya nhi?

pratigya did nt reply.......she just lowered her head and smiled..............

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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yaar,this Krishna is so cheeky and naughty,uske shakal ke badle mein baboon!!!anyway it was a very sweet chp but I wish he didn't keep containing himself atleast he shuld also hug her.tht wuld be so....... 😍 .It was a very cute and sweet chp. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww, very nice chapter. its nice to see a teasing krishna...the last scene was very cute, is pratigya getting attracted to him?
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chapter-----13

adarsh was pacing up and down the room,furious...arushi sat watching him,tensed.... after few minutes she gained the courage to ask him----bhaiya aap kya soch rahe ho?

adarsh stopoped immediately and turned at her------aarushi mujhe ek baat samajkh mein nhi aa rahi hain....jab tum dekh rahi thi ki papa pratigya ke saath kya kar rahe hain...tujmne unhe roka kyu nhi? tum itni bhi choti nhi rahi jo at least unhe ye na bata sako ki woh jo kuch kar rahe hain galat hain......? scuol ki bacchi nhi rahi tum aab....18 ki ho gayi ho........papa pratigya ko ghar se nikal diya aur tum chup chap dekhti rahi? aarushi mujhe tumse ye ummeed bilkul bhi nhi thi.....

aarushui felt like crying at his harsh wrds....wat cud she do? she had always been timid and low--voiced in frnt of her parents and had nvr saidn or did anythng against their wishes...as she loved her sister pretty well she had immidiately called up her brother after the incident and had told him about it so that he cud come and bring her sister back bt there he ws,scolding her for her timidness.....

adarsh seemed to melt down a l;ittle to see her tears...he came forwards and put his arm around her side........

adrash---aarushi mujhe maaf kar ndo...shayad maine kuch zyaada hi bol diya hain tumko....kya kare pratigya ko lekar bht chinta ho rahi hain....wo kaha hain,kaisi hain hume kuch bhi pata nhi hain.....aur kaha dhunde use? in sab baaton ki wajase main bht pareshan hun aarushi....plzzz mere baaton ko dilse mat lagao.....

aarushi hugged her brother tightlyt and started to weep like a child....these thoughts were troubling her too bt the poor grl was nt being able to express herself to anyone.......

adarsh consoled his sister for some time then he wiped out her tears... he took her hand in his and said in an assuring tone-----i promise u aarushi...main pratigya ko ghar lakar rahunga......kahin se bhji dhund kar launga use.......bas tum mujhe ye bata sakti ho kya ki wo ladka krishna kaha rehta hain,ya fir pratigya se uski mulakat kaha par hoti thi?

aarushi----nhi bhaiya...di hume kuch bhi nhi batati thi iske bareme ha par kuch dino se pratigya di bht pareshani mei thi,jabse uski sagai ki baatein ho rahi thi tab se....aur hjaan ek din maine use woh pas ka coffee shop hain na.....? usmein baithe hue dekhi thi kisi ke saath par thk se dekha nhi ki woh krishna tha ya koi aur.....

adarsh got up immediately,his face becoming stiff out of rage----krishna hi hoga......hamari behen ko behla fusla kar shaadi kar li usne....par hum apni behen ki zindagi istarah barbad nhi hoine denge............ his jaws became stiff due to the sternness of his resolution.......

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krishna.....kya hua....11 baj gaya hain aur tum abhi tak so rahe ho?-------pratigya called out to him...

she had woke up as usual late,at 10 bt to her surprise while staggering towards the bathroom she had found that krishna was still sleeping wen generally he wakes up lonbg before her....... she thot that perhaps he was quite tired so did nt wake him up and went into the bathroom to get a shower.....

bt wen she came out after half an hour,she still found krishna sleeping.. this had made her a little worried and she decided to call him......

pratigya----krishna? krishna?..........

he did nt move......

pratigya sat down beside him and gently shook him-----krishna....kya baat hain? der ho gayi hain........tumhe bahar jana hain...hain na? chalo uth jao..........

krishna slowly opened his eyes.....pratigya was shocked to see his eyes,they were fully red and watery..she felt her forehead,he was burning with fever........

pratigya---are tumhe to bukhar hain...tumne mujhe bataya kyun nhi raat ko....main tabhi tumhe dawai de deti........dekho......tumhara sharir kitna garam ho gaya hain......

krishna tried to sile bt cudnt......pratigya became vry worried....she was nt at all good in handling such situations..... in her home,wenevr anybody had a fever......her mother naina ji used to look after that person and take his/her full responsibility until the person does nt become better.......

pratigya recalled the activities of her mother in her mind,wat she used to do............

then she got up quickly and ran outside.......

she went into a medicine shop nearby and bought six calpols and some antacid tablets....then she returned back and came to krishna.....he was still lying there.........unable to get up bt he was wide awake....

pratigya said to him-----krishna jaldi se ye dawai kha lo abhi......

she handed him the calpol and a glass of water.......then he placed her arm behind his neck to help him raise himself a little......he tried to get up by his own and succeeded bt then his strength gave out and he fell back once more....bt pratigya,vry carefully supported him.......and did nt let him fall back.....he took the medicine and gulped it down with water....... pratigya,vry carefully and slowly,let him lie down agen bt nt on the floor...she had brought her pillow and she laid his head on it....instead of the hard ground........

krishna smiled dryly at her----thnks....

pratigya----krishna tumhe abhi bed par sona chahiye...yahaan zameen par nhi...plzzz kya tum bahar ke kamre tak chal sakte ho? main tumhari madat karti hun...

krishna raised one hand and said----thodi der baad............

pratigya understood that he was feeling too weak to evn walk...she put her hand on his forehead and slowly ran her fingers into his hair...he closed his eyes....

pratigya----doctor ko bulau kya....mujhe thk nhi lag raha hain...tumhari halat....

krishna----koi.....zaroorat nhi....hain...bas....thodi der........aur........

pratigya didn't know wat to say.....she cud feel that thngs were nt at all ryt....his eyes were depicting his condition...it was bad......

pratigya-----thermometer hain kya ghar pe?

krishna tried to smile bt cudnt----nhi......

pratigya cudnt take it anymore------main ja rahi hun doctor ko bulane......mujhe kuch bhi thk nhi lag raha hain.......tumhara tabiyat bigadta ja rha hain......

she was abt to get up bt krishna caught her hand......he made her sit down agen...... he found it difficult to talk bt some how said to her----plz.........pratigya....doctor.......mat bulao.........p.....paisa...nhi hain..........

his wrds made tears come into her eyes...she sat down agen beside him...krishna pushed himself forward and rested his head on her lap..and tried to make himself comfortable...... she cudnt believe her ears...this man cudnt show himself to a doctor when he really needed to...just becoz of some money? where she had always wasted this particular thng called "money"...

she wiped away her tears and said----krishna main doctor ko bulane ja rahi hun...baki chizo ka tum fikar mat karo......

krishna----plzzz...mat jao.......

pratigya helped him to sit up slowly...although she cud see that he had no strength......the she said to him-----main abhi aa rahi hun.....tum mujhe kaske pakdo main pehle tumhe bed tak le chalti hun...plzzz krishna...koshish karo....

he tried to get up....his face twisted as he had no strength at all...pratigya tried her best to pull him up and at last their combined efforts were successful....krishna took pratigya's support whu took him towards the bed....

on reaching there she made him lie down on the bed carefully and pulled a sheet over him... then she said---main abhi aati hun.....

with that she went out.........

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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwww kashhhh sisss gr888 kiaaa scenes likheyy hainnn tooo shweeett n cuteeeeeeeee..keep it up siss infact il suggest k tum story writer ya director ban jao lol..but only if ul take arhaina n arhaan in ur movie play drama wateva it'll b ehehe..
pakaaa??promise keroo ab..dun frgt n yar reallly cuteee scenes mindblowingg keep it up..
gudd workkk!!!!!!!!

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