for arhaina.. ;) fan fic---SANGINI updtd ch---18

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kasturika ghosh

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Posted: 15 years ago

a big hiiiiii to all my frnds....😊😊 this is my third fan fic on kriya...hpe u enjoy it....my present one is still going on and i will update the two together.... actually i hve so many ides in mind that i wud prefer to write multiple fan fics😆😆...he he bt u no its nt possible so i will go on with these two only..😳.

this fan fic has been inspired by a song(thnks to arhaina.😊).....and i hve made the song,the title song of this fan fic.....😊 for my swt sis arhaina...whu is also a member of this forum with the name prettygrl19....she is gonna come back to this forum on the 12th of april after cmpleting her exms which happens to be her birthday and we will give her a big surprise...😉

........sangini........

characters

krishna singh---arhaan behl

pratigya saxena---pooja gor

naina saxena---monika singh

shyam saxena---shahab khan

aarushi saxena---avantika hundal

adarsh saxena---ankit gera

ayan bora---vinay rajput

chandan urf chandu---jaideep suri

nitin mehra---giriraj kabra

angad yadav---kunal karan kapoor

(i will update more characters once they enter the story)

krishna---a rootless,aimless,destitute and lonely 25 year old guy,whu lived in mumbai.. he earned his living by scaring the wits out of any person,or indulge into a hand combat with any student and beating him black and blue...or bribing money out of anyone's pocket...in short a clear niussance..he was vry clever so the police nvr got any proof against him bt they hated him like hell as he fooled them evrytime... he had a normal business--wich was only a show off--a small stationary shop,wich was run by him and two of his frnds,ayan and chandu,whu were the closest ones to his heart..as he had no family and no parents..

in spite of being such a nuissance and creating trouble for evrybody,he was a passionate man and loved painting.. he had a canvas in his home and often painted his heart's desires wen he felt too lonely in his desolute life... he evn visited painting exhibitions held in various parts of the city to watch the paintings bt cud nt afford to buy them.. once wen he was in scul,he had dreamt of being a painter in future life bt cud nt as the death of his father brot him to the streets. the struggle he went through to acquire his rights to live was full of pain,frustration and horror.. his dreams were crashed on the ground as survival became the primary motif of his life. he lived in a rented house wich was in a vry bad cndition bt still he had to pay 3000 bugs for it...life in mumbai was really tough. sometimes he paid the rent properly and sometimes he didnt, noone cud tell him anythng,they were afraid..

so this was the life of krishna,uninteresting and undesirable.... yet he loved it becoz he knew that he had worked really hard to achieve watevr he had got frm life....

pratigya--- she was educated,she was smart, and a typical 21st century grl,gorgeous,proud and somewhat selfish. she was 22,and had just graduated in humanities. she was extremely talented,apart frm it,being a professor's daughter,had been of quite an advantage in her life.. evryone respected her father and honoured him. she cud sing well and also had great interest in dancing and sports... in other words,she was a perfect grl with all the qualities needed to be perfect and spectacular...

as she had completed her graduation,her family members were looking forward in getting their daughter married off as for her,a long queue was waiting. bt pratigya was nt in a mood to get married off so soon... its nt that she wanted to study more..bt she was having some kind of affair with a classmate of her,nitin mehra.. whu had told her to wait for at least 3-4 more yrs....

...................yun to har prem kahani mein mera hi kissa aata hain

surat main apni dekhoon,aur nazar woh aata hain

uchalke taaron ko chuloon

hawa ke kandhon pe jhooloon

apne khabon ke kiwardiya khol du jo

dil mein kya kya hain umange bol du jo

sangini sangini.....piya ki main banungi.....

sangini sangini.....piya ki main banungi..........................

the video representation of the fan fic.....................

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a9w7DZ_etfM

Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

oho, so is this Arhaina's gift-to-be? 😊
lovely writing, keep up the gud work! 😊

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

Nice one Kaash.But just one thing in ur first ff Krishna was his usual rich self but in the current 2 ff's ur writing he's poor.Its kinda hear wrenching. 😭

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

oh n yes, Arhaina n I had discussed about Sangini on FB 😉

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kasturika ghosh

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Posted: 15 years ago

chapter---1

krishna threw away the brushes and the colour palate away in disgust... the brush landed on the floor and the palate hit the wall making a big stain on the wall and colours also sprinkled on the window curtains. then he lifted up the canvas stand and crashed it on the ground,bringing it into pieces... he went over to the wall rack and took out evry single painting of his. he stared at them for sometime with fire in his eyes and then started tearing them into as many pices he cud. he wished to destroy them all,he hated himself for having spent so much time on them. he took out his lighter frm his pocket and gathered the pieces in a heap.. then he threw his lighter in the heap.. the ruined pieces of his paintings started to burn just like the broken pieces of his heart... he watched them in disgust,in anger and in pain... those were his only belongings,his thoughts,his imaginations,his dreams wich burned before his eyes......and he stood there,watching...........

someone bumped hard on the door.. krishna did nt move..or it wud be beter to say that he did nt hve the power to move... he was shattered.. the door bumped hard..and soon voices cud be heard...

"bhaiya,bhaiya....darwaza kholiye plz",someone called out frm outside...

"krishna bhaiya........bhagwan ke liye darwaza kholiye",nother voice....

the door flew open with a crshing sound and three to four men entered the room... they were horrified to see the scene--krishna standing like a pillar and a big fire burning before his eyes---two of the men quickly tran towards the bathroom and took out water buckets frm it and splashed water on the fire.... after some time the fire died..

a number of people had gathered bt most of them stood outside and murmered among themselves...they were terribly afraid of krishna and his temper... bt the two guys whu put out the fire--happened to be ayan and chandu--- were his close frnds. they were nt afraid of him.. instead they were worried abt him....

chandu shook him hard by his shoulders.... he was furious...-----bhaiya,bhaiya hosh mein aayiye....ye kya karne ja rahe the aap aur dekhiye kya kar diya aapne? apni sari paintings jala di? bhaiya hum jante hain ki ye paintings apke liye kitni anmol thi....fir kyun kiya apne aisa? kyun?

krishna slowly turned towards him....the anger had faded away frm his face....and it was replaced by grief......devastating grief....

chandu was shocked to see his state---bhaiya?

ayan turned around to see that a big crowd had gathered outside...

he shouted out to them---abe!! kya dekh rahe ho be? eeyaha kono tamasha chal raha hain ka?

jao na apne apne kaam par jao........

after the people had gone away,he shut the door and came to krishna and chandu....

ayan----bhaiya aapne kyu kiya aisa? aisa koi karta hain bhala? unlogo ki baaton mein aakar apne apni zindagi ki sare palon ko aag laga di? ye koi mamuli paintings nhi the....apke zindagi ke ek ek palo ko apne painting ka rup diya tha....aur aaj....

krishna cud take it no more and shouted out---to kya karte hum? ye saare koi pal,koi khwab nhi hain....behude rango ki dher hain.....jala diya humne.....thk hi kehte hain wo log...gunde mawalio ki paintings unke jaisa behuda hi hota hain..... isse accha to ye hota ki hum filmon ki poster paint karte.....shahrukh khan ki,deepika padukone ki...hain na? kam se kam usse paise to ate....in sab ki tarah ghar ke ek kone mein pade to nhi rehte....

chandu and ayan knew that he was ryt...after all wat that manager said to him was really bad.....

chandu gritted his teeth---us manager ki toh.......

ayan put his hand on his shoulder to calm him down.....

it happened so that krishna,after a lot of requests made by angad,and chandu went to give his painting for an exhibition held in bandra... the painting was quite good and other people had also praised it a lot bt the manager of the exhibition refused to keep it because it was made by krishna,the goon,the so called mawali of the city.... he had insulted him and shoved him out of the hotel in wich the exhibition was being held..by armed guards....

if krishna wanted he also cud hve shown his power bt the managers wrds had struck him to his heart----gunde mawali logo ki painting yaha nhi rakha jayega....unke liye to jail mein exhibitions karni chahiye...

ayan and chandu sat beside krishna silently and stared at the ashes of his dreams on the floor.......

Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago

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kasturika ghosh

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dkmystery
oh n yes, Arhaina n I had discussed about Sangini on FB 😉

ya dnt tell it to her,its her bday gft......😊

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiR
Nice one Kaash.But just one thing in ur first ff Krishna was his usual rich self but in the current 2 ff's ur writing he's poor.Its kinda hear wrenching. 😭

kya kare yar....hamesha to raison par focus karna thk nhi hain...hain na?😊😊

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Divya

@dkmystery

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaasshh
ya dnt tell it to her,its her bday gft......😊

I won't 😊
n tell u what, were u there when she told us about the boy who warned her about her dupatta getting stuck in the car's door n we told her to ask his name, might it be Arhaan too 😉
could u use something like that... that would be a double gift 😊

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaasshh

<div></div>kya kare yar....hamesha to raison par focus karna thk nhi hain...hain na?😊😊

Your point has been noted. 😊

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kasturika ghosh

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: dkmystery

I won't 😊
n tell u what, were u there when she told us about the boy who warned her about her dupatta getting stuck in the car's door n we told her to ask his name, might it be Arhaan too 😉
could u use something like that... that would be a double gift 😊

yaaaaaaaaaaa yuhu...i do remember....thats it...i'll do it.....😉

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