Fan Fiction ' You are mine ' NEW! Ch 26 pg 141 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Hello 😊 sorry for the delay. It took a while to write the next chapter lmao i was practically writing it with one eye closed. 😆. I apologise if it isnt as good, ill try to make it up for the next chapters. Off too sleep 😊 goodnight or goodmorning !
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Chapter seven

Pratigya was stunned at the intensity of Krishna's words. Although it was apparent that he was angry, however it seemed like he used his anger as a mask to conceal his true feelings.

"Why Pratigya, why did you reject me last night but yet easily accepted a stranger without any reservations." Krishna continued. "Answer me."

Krishna leaned dangerously closer, his forehead touching hers as he sighed in impatience. Pratigya saw that he had his eyes closed as if willing himself to calm down. At this moment, the dangerous and ruthless Krishna had disappeared instead replaced by a vulnerable man in need of love and gentleness. Pratigya didn't know why she found herself staring at him, her heart missing a few beats upon looking at his beautifully sculptured face. She didn't know why she had the sudden impulsive urge to cup his face and soothe away his anger.

Your prince charming will love you, kiss away your tears and will forever protect you.

Arushi's words were constantly ringing in her head. What if this man was her prince charming? She thought to herself, maybe?.

Without thinking, Pratigya found herself slowly raising her arms in preparation to indulge in her impulse and soothe away his anger. Before her hands could get into contact with his face, Krishna's eyes snapped open causing Pratigya to quickly put her hand down. The gesture had gone unnoticed.

Krishna no longer seemed angry; instead he was staring right into her eyes which made Pratigya uncomfortable and a bit self conscious. Pratigya lowered her eyes and continued to stare at the ground, purposely avoiding his gaze. She felt Krishna's fingers slightly touching her face which caused her to turn her face away from his touch.

Krishna cupped her chin and forcefully turned her face back towards him. He pushed the tendrils of her hair away from her face and with his thumb he gently wiped her tears away. Krishna didn't ponder too deeply in why her tears affected him but in truth her weeping drove him mad. When he had touched her tears it had made his skin sting and his heartbeat quicken.

None of this made sense to Krishna! He had constantly watched his mother and his sister in law cry from being beaten by their husbands. It never had any affect on him. Then why was it that when he saw his Pratigya cry did it felt like his heart was slowly breaking. Why did he have the absolute need to destroy anyone and everyone who dared to cause a single tear to well upon her beautiful eyes?

It was her tears which had stopped him from tearing that man into pieces. Damn it! This was not the time for him to develop a weakness, Krishna thought to himself in disgust. If she realized the effects her crying had on him then she would use it to her own advantage, something Krishna would never allow as long he lived!

Pratigya felt her heart warming up as she felt him brushing away her tears. He will kiss away your tears. Hope soared within her heart; hope that someone will love her despite her flaws. Suddenly she felt her dreams crashing down as she saw Krishna staring at her tear drop which he had on his finger. With a cruel smile he flicked away her tear as if it meant nothing to him. He further twisted her heart by wiping his hands on his clothes as if her tears were something dirty to be cleaned off with.

"You women are useless creatures." He retorted, "Within seconds you cry like a baby hoping people will sympathize with you." Pratigya looked at him in shock, "If your hoping to melt me down with your tears then let me tell you that Krishna makes people cry tears of blood but he never does and never will comfort them."

To her embarrassment she could feel tears slowly starting to well up again. Suddenly desperate to not let Krishna see her crying, she pushed against his chest. It was if she was trying to push against a brick wall! Her pushing didn't even cause him to breathe let alone move him away from her. In frustration Pratigya pushed away her accursed hair from her face and concentrated in finding a way out of the carriage.

Beside her she felt Krishna stiffen and before she knew it he once again seized her wrists painfully. "Leave me alone" she shouted, "You're hurting me!"

He grasped her hair painfully and roughly pushed her hair away from her face. With his fingers, he tilted her face onto her side.

He was shaking so hard, Pratigya tried to withhold a scream threatening to tear away from her throat. Oh god she frantically thought to herself, his going to hit me! From the corner of her eyes she saw his hand lifting and with a cry she clenched her eyes closed waiting for the blow.

The blow never came; instead she felt his fingers slowly tracing her cheek. Confused, Pratigya hesitantly opened her eyes and saw that his whole senses were focused on her cheek.

His hands were trembling as he slowly traced the thin scar on her face. Blood pumped hotly in his veins and his jaw twitched with each beat of his sudden frantic heart. Someone hit her, someone dared to touch her, someone put a scar on her perfect face, someone scarred his Pratigya. His thoughts were running wild; he was in shock that despite him being alive someone had dared to hurt her. He had failed to protect what he owned.

He couldn't stand a single flaw being marked on her face. She was perfect and flawless; scars shouldn't exist where she was concerned. He would and could not tolerate any disfigurements on her. Yes he thought to himself, whoever put that scar on her will pay. He promised himself that he will scar anyone who did that to her, even if it was in the expense of her family.

Because he hadn't been near, someone had dared to hurt her. Not anymore, he thought to himself. The only solution was to quickly take Pratigya away from her family; it was time for her to start addressing him "pati dev". And he assured himself that today will be the day when Krishna and Pratigya will unite forever; even if it meant that he had to kidnap her to get his future bride.

Edited by siinnce.09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
OMG!!That was Mindblowing.It was sooo............................GOOD!!
Unbelievable man!! 👏 👏 👏 You shuld seriously start writing books.Trust me,this chp was excellent.
Once you completely recover you can write the next chp.Will be waiting for it eagerly. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
this is a very gripping story...u write very well.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
I just read the first 2-3 chapters, and I can't believe that its your first fan fic. The story seems interesting and I wonder what happened to prats in the past.

I am happy that at least krishna is well educated in your ff unlike the show...but can't wait for prats to change his thinking and perspective of looking at women. I am already in love with the fanfic, can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.....
you are a great writes dear, and keep up the good work..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Wow that was a mindblowing chapter

Hmm so Krishna is thinking about kidknapping Pratigya
Cant wait to read more
Hope your eye gets better soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Omg You're Doing An Awesome Job!! Keep It Up! And Hope Your Eye Gets Better :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Heyy Lol found this and read ahead...
Lol thx for the other pm though
I like how the story is moving forward i guess Pratigiya has a lot to figure out about Kishna...
Aww i feel bad for her because of her past
cont.soon nd pm me when u update this thanks :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Awesome 👏
Please continue soon.... just loving how the fan fiction shaping up.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
U r a genius yaar seriuosly HATS OFFFFFF......well i can give sum6thing here it is .Well the way krishna'a anger that pragotya's flawless face was harmed someone dared to even touch her.i coud litterly eel his anger n pain n then pratigya's imagination that he may her prinxce charming was too riomantic.............LOVEd it do coniue dying to read next partssss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Thank you everyone for your lovely and motivating comments 😃 Sorry for the delay, I had uni today and on top of that my right eye has been literally filled with tears since i had the conjuctivitus . lol But i felt the need to write the next chapter, gosh i think about this more than i do for uni. Anyway enjoy the next chapter 😊
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