AarYa SS: Passionate Love Affair; updated chapter 4, pg 61

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Hi friends😃,

😆 I don't know what got into me that i thought of writing 😆. Beware i might bore you 😆 as i know my level of writing 😆. But fir be i gave it a try 😉. Just updating the character sketch if 10 people will like it then only i'll take this SS forward otherwise will say Sayonara to writing 😆. Please be kind to me 😆😳.

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Description: Its basically a story of two individual who fell in love with each other and experiences the magic of being in love (OMG how common it sounds😆).



You meet thousands of people,and none of them really touch you .
Then you meet one person and your life is changed, forever !!
And this is when you experience passionate love affair 😳.




Character Sketch:

Yash Pratap Sindhiya: A 27 years old, tall about 5feet 11 inches and by all Parameters a very handsome guy with a muscular built and Charming face. Also an only heir of Scindhiya industries. Don't have any plans to marry any sooner but secretly waiting for the girl of his dreams.



Aarti Dubey: A 24 year old, 5 feet 8 inches tall, gorgeous but a spoilt brat, got everything she wanted but never appreciated it as she never wanted just money. Her dad lives in abroad and Aarti lives with his father second wife Shobha.


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Will update part 1 after getting 10 likes 😆.

Yay got 23 likes 😲😆 and as promised updated chapter 1

Scroll down to read its in following post 😳.


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So the wait is over 😆 .. i mean my wait is over of posting the chapter 1 of Passionate Love Affair😆.I am so happy guys ...thanks for the motivation , its because of you i am able to post my SS. 😳

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Chapter - 1

31 Dec 2013, Manali , India, 11:30 pm, It was cold and unusually dark night. The city experienced its coldest night in four years today with mercury settling at minus 2.1 degrees Celsius, five notches below normal.There was not a single person when I came out of my office building. The wind was howling through the side streets and slapping me as I passed each street. The city was eerily quiet - others were smart enough to stay home, beside their fires, where I now longed to be. , Lights are strung up in the streets; jolly music plays endlessly in shops and on the radio and everyone feels obligated to be cheerful, although not necessarily happy.

I picked up my pace as I approached the car parking area. Soon I would forget the cold or rather enjoy it after reaching my rest house. God am really tired today, as I was busy whole day. It's because of the urgent meeting I have attended, arrived here in evening and was working like a freak even after the meeting.

I took out my car keys, unlocked the door and suddenly my mobile rang. I saw the name flashing Maa I smiled; it's the 6th time Maa is calling me in last 6 hours. I pick up the call and Maa said "Yash beta waha sardi kaisi hai? Jaldi Ghar chale jana", (how is the cold there?return to the rest house soon )and before she could say anything I told her that I am on my way back to rest house and ended the call. I started my car and drove off. My rest house is near church hill Road; it will take me 50 minutes to reach there. I saw my watch its 11:45 pm, 15 minutes more then I'll enter in 2014 . I switch on the radio to listen my favorite program Chandni raatein - Old Romantic songs .

In Radio , Hello my dear listeners I am your friend Samay we are just 15 minutes away from new year so make new resolutions , promise yourself that you will quit smoking , lose weight, drink less alcohol , Take good education and job, manage stress and Stay healthy . This is my wish for all my dear listeners who are single like me (Chuckles),get their soul-mates because all you want is love in your life. As the American writer Richard Bach said, "A soul-mate is someone who has locks that fit our keys, and keys to fit our locks". And..

Yash Monologue: Where are you my love come soon am waiting for you. I know you are here only, somewhere near me longing to meet me, craving for my love just like me. Not just anyone can complete me the way you can. I am waiting for you; my heart's other half and my life partner.. I know you can make me feel entirely whole, healed and intact, like no piece is missing from the puzzle. I am waiting for the great supporter and life time companion and a passionate lover.

Monolgues ends with!

5..4..3..2..1.. Happy New Year Dear listeners !! Its 1 Jan 2014, we have entered in new year guys its celebration time.. Here is an awesome song for you all Ashique 2 Mashup with DJ suketu enjoy!

Suddenly the song stops ... attention listeners, this announcement have been made to inform you about a gang of robbers, who seek lift and robs the victim in gunpoint. This serial armed robber's gang always keep themselves in disguise, their planning is impeccable and they nearly always escape. 3 are arrested in mumbai out of 6 robbers and there boss who is girl still not tracked. So, beware and stay safe by not- traveling- at- nights and don't take the shortcuts if traveling as they may be found in deserted areas . Thank you and a very happy new year to all.

Oh shit radio signal broke down. Ok I won't take the shortcut and turned my car towards the highway. After a mile,I saw, the whole road is blocked due to heavy snow and heard someone knocking at my car window I rolled down the window glass and the person said- " sir car aage nahin ja payegi pura rasta block hai aap yaha se short cut le lijiye".(" sir you won't be able to take your car through this road its totally blocked , take this shortcut).

I was having no other option so I took the shortcut through the forest to my rest house. As soon as I entered the shortcut road, the front glass of my car was covered with fog in a fraction of seconds. I switched on the car wipers and slowdown my car as it was almost invisible road. Suddenly I saw someone in the middle of the road, a women wearing white saree . I blown my car's horns more than thrice but to no avail. I shouted by taking out my head from the car window " hey are you walking on the beach or something ", move aside but all my efforts gone in vein when she ignored my voice completely.

I came out of the car and jerked her arms such that we faced each other. Before I could say anything that women kept a gun on my forehead. And said "hands up, drive or die and took me towards my car.

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😆Updated chapter 1 😆 ..ok ok this is a love story only not a horror or suspense story i am just building the plot ..Have patience , hope i didn't bored you ..please bear with me if i did 😃.

If you liked i then i 'll update chapter 2 after 3-4 days !

Love you pyare Dosto 😳.

Pankhudi !


Edited by pankhudi_TiaRa - 11 years ago
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wow pankhudi u turned as a writer wow ...title dragged me here ofcourse to say the least and ur name as the thread maker forced me to comment u know...

the story line seems interesting 😉...i m looking forward to enjoy the update soon
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Hi like the concept of this story please do continue. 😃
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Originally posted by: sb1410

Hi like the concept of this story please do continue. 😃



Thanks dear 😃 i am glad you liked it .
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nice concept , please continue .
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hii pankudi.glad u turned writer ..u succeeded by title it self dear ..the title of this new story draged us here ..dnt fear..
update soon ..waiting for update..
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I think you have more than 10 likes already so part 1 kahan hai ??? 😆
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Your name dragged me in and the word 'Love' do sounds common but it is this word that spreads so many different emotion to keep all of us intact...so dear...you do sound a good writer and am sure...you are going to rock.😃

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