'!MY PRINCESS: Maanveer two-shot!' Part 2-page 3.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone. I hope 2014 has brought along great going in everyone's life actually for past some months, i have not written any OS so just thought of writing a two shot, its not as good as other writer's works but still i hope you all read it. Please do leave back your review. So here i go...


MY PRINCESS!!!



He looked at her everyday from his window but today it was different. He did not stand there, waiting for her to show up. Instead he had put on his best clothes, his favourite gel and was impatiently looking at the watch.

"damn this watch, why don't the needles jump to four.", Uday banged his fist onto the other hand.

UDAY'S POV

It is going to be difficult, very difficult and I, very well knew it but for how long can I only admire her, after all I need to let her know about my feelings before its too late and most of all, before i go crazy in her love. Oh god, but will she come. Does she even know me? If she doesn't come...then...

End of pov.



His mind and heart were battling with each other. She was the girl, about whom he barely knew a thing but that was not important, as he loved her and today after the confession,the whole life was there for them to know of each other. She stayed at the servant quarter of Devgarh palace but he had always seen her in the garden beside the servant quarters. And since Jaigarh palace and Devgarh palace being side by side,one could could easily see into other's garden and thats how he had seen her on one cloudy evening and the moment he saw her, She was HIS and he was HER'S... her flawless skin, beautiful yet questioning eyes, curvy pink and tempting lips just left him spellbounded. Playing with those kids who were the children of the maids of Devgarh palace,she looked much innocent herself. He knew that day was the arrival of Princess Manyata with her maid from Chicago and that maid was Mali kaka 's (gardener) daughter. And then he concluded that she was that girl...

"goodness gracious, She and a maid to someone. No, not anymore. From now onwards, she is a princess, MY PRINCESS", He smirked but this time it was more of a blush.



He waited near the beach for her as he was sure that the letter that he had given to the kid was recieved by her . She had looked up at the window while folding it back and smiled at him.

There she was,trying to find her way through the rocks. As she came nearer, his heartbeat shot up and finally when she arrived, for sometime,they just looked at each other.

"thanks for coming Princess", he did not know how it just escaped his mouth.

They just sat down while she looked at the sea and he looked at her.

"why did you call me here Yuvraj.", she asked calmly still looking at the sea.

"don't you know?.", uday spoke softly this time as if feeling hurt.

"but i want to know it from you,",finally she looked at him

They looking at each other while their eyes spoke and the distance minimised when he suddenly spoke," I love you with you all my heart and soul princess, Will you be mine?"

She did not say anything , he could not understand what was going on in her mind. But her eyes were filled up, he cupped her face and said," please dont cry princess, so what if there are differences between us. I will sort out things. I will convince everyone anyhow, even Mali kaka will agree to it . I am sure, but before that i need my answer sweetheart."


She looked at him all confused and then she smiled,"will you surely Yuvraaj?"

"SURE princess but my answer." uday retorted excitingly.

"YOU WILL KNOW IT SOON", she turned back and left, leaving him all BEWILDERED.



To be continued...
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MAHI1198 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome blossom great os yar...
Uday fell in love with servant?
I guess that servant will turn out to be manyata obviously...
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG OMG EXCELLENT chappy...Loved it yaara..The Starting was mind blowing , scene description was awesome...Cant wait to see where it goes!
ps:I'm already addicted to your story man!So pliz pliz pliz update soon n yeah do pm me pliz😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, that was awesome! Uday thinks that "HIS PRINCESS" is Mali Kaka's daughter😆.
I'm sure she is rightfully Devgarh's Princess, and he is making a huge mistake.
Do update the second part soon,
dying to read it😳!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome blossom great os yar...
Uday fell in love with servant?
I guess that servant will turn out to be manyata obviously...
update soon...

Thank you Mahima, your comments are always very encouraging.

Will update by day after tommorrow.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nash..

Thank you Mahima, your comments are always very encouraging.

Will update by day after tommorrow.

I'm glad u feel so... but u really r good in writing... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nice update
i think that girl is manayata
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChocoChudail

OMG OMG EXCELLENT chappy...Loved it yaara..The Starting was mind blowing , scene description was awesome...Cant wait to see where it goes!
ps:I'm already addicted to your story man!So pliz pliz pliz update soon n yeah do pm me pliz😃

Thanks a lot dear. That was a great compliment.

Will surely pm you the next part. Thanks again for the wonderful comment. It means a lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Wow, that was awesome!

Uday thinks that "HIS PRINCESS" is Mali Kaka's daughter.
I'm sure she is rightfully Devgarh's Princess, and he is making a huge mistake.


Do update the second part soon,


dying to read it

Thank you so much Navina, am not as good in writing as you but just thought of giving a try. I am glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angleroops

hey nice update


i think that girl is manayata


pls update soon

Thanks Roopali. The suspense will be revealed soon.

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