'!MY PRINCESS: Maanveer two-shot!' Part 2-page 3. - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MAHI1198

I'm glad u feel so... but u really r good in writing... 👏

Hayee, now i am really flattered, lolz... Thanks Mahima, it means a lotAwww, thanks again Mahima.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nash..

Thank you so much Navina, am not as good in writing as you but just thought of giving a try. I am glad that you liked it.

It was an awesome try ... and your writing is better than mine 😳.
Looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...


It was an awesome try ... and your writing isbetter than mine

Looking forward to the next part!

Its not like that, i know.(likes of this ts and the likes for my ss,which i am writing, tells it clearly :-D) but still saying such kind words are really very sweet of you. Thanks a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nash..

Hayee, now i am really flattered, lolz... Thanks Mahima, it means a lotAwww, thanks again Mahima.

no thanks in friendship
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum start...
D girl will turn out to be Manyata na...????😉
Do cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

Awesum start...
D girl will turn out to be Manyata na...????😉
Do cont soon...

Thanx Sonia!

I will reveal the suspense soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot to those who liked and commented! It really means a lot to ME. So here is the second as well as the last part of this TS

PART II

Sleeping on that king size bed, the only thing she could do was to twist and turn. The every word that escaped his luscious lips were making her blush like the rising sun. She knew that he loved her, he loved her like nobody had, noone has and she was confidentially sure that nobody ever WILL.



Oh god! How hard it was for her to hear his magical words and still prevent herself from holding him close enough to never let him go but... Then would she enjoy the game of love like she was doing now. She smiled at her own antics only to make a promise to herself that now she was not just a princess but only HIS PRINCESS!

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Here, Uday was terribly confused. If his mind said yes then the heart would say No and if the heart said yes , then the mind used to back off to whether she would accept or reject! Struggling between his two organs, he suddenly remembered,"oh no, i did not ask her name.", he smacked his forehead. ANOTHER CONFUSION

NEXT MORNING

Uday was restless and the reason was not in sight. She didnt even come to the garden and that was creating havocs in his mind. A knock on the door,brought him back into the reality...


He opened the door, and his maid handed him a letter. Locking the door behind, his hands tore up the envelope and as he read the letter, his heart and his dreams came crashing down.

Dear Yuvraaj,

Well, what do i say? I really dont know but after everything, i have decided that some difference never be sorted out and as far as you said about convincing YOUR mali kaka, then am sure its IMPOSSIBLE. I dont how it goes to you, but the truth is that I am already betrothed to someone, whose LOVE for ME is one of the most beautiful thing in the world. We are getting married within two days and there is nothing more that i have to say. Please wish that his love for me always so pure and sacred like it is now ,for only your true wishes can bring colours in life.

UDAY was shattered! What a co-incidence that here whom he loved was marrying someone whom she worshipped and he who worshipped her was also marrying but to someone whom he had never seen, FORGET OF LOVING HER!
He held the letter close to his heart, feeling her presence. He stood in front of the mirror and wiped off the tears that had just left his corner eye," its ok Princess ! I am happy if you are." .

Within two days, by the wishes of both the families., the crown Prince of jaigarh,'UDAYVEER SINGH' and the crown princess of Devgarh,'MANYATA KUMARI' were married to each other by all the rituals.

UDAY entered his room after the long tiring day as he found her sitting on his bed with her face being covered by the Goonghat. His heart craved for his dream Princess, whom he so desperately wanted to see in this way. Half heartedly, he just walked up to her, sitting beside her, he asked softly,"you should have changed"

She did not answer anything which made him feel Sorry for her. He removed her goonghat and there he got the SHOCK OF HIS LIFE!

"PRINCESS", He still could not believe his eyes while those hypnotizing eyes gave a sweet acceptance.

"NO her maid." , she smiled, putting her arms around his neck," See i made your work easier by convincing Mali kaka"

Now it was getting, she playing in the royal garden- on the day of princess return -he talking about differences-she getting confused-she marrying her fiance, everything was clear now. He held onto her waist and pulled her close to minimise the distance as he smirked,"SO MY PRINCESS played with the player haan.", Manyata nodded her head in approval and both of them bursted out laughing. They stopped as their stomach ached while Manyata said, " i am sorry Uday. I really was just joking with you. If i have hurted you then i am sorry but however you loved YOUR PRINCESS and she is here, IN YOUR ARMS and thats it. Please dont be angry with me."

Uday lay her down on the bed as he whishpered,"well, more than angry, am thankful to Mali kaka for his approval.", Manyata blushed at his remark while Uday smirked,"and for hurting me, you will pay till eternity sweetheart.", with that he placed his lips on hers.
AND THE NIGHT WENT ON WITH A BLISSFUL LIFE PROMISES THAT THEY BOTH MADE...

Thats it guys...the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww, that was amazing!

Such a sweet second part. Loved it completely. I loved the end dialogue where Uday said she'll pay for hurting him till eternity ... TOO CUTE😃! Awesome work Dear👏!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was an adorable chapter!Just loved it:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Hey! This is amazing👏
Loved it!😃

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