Pyar... my own sher...

hello guys..

here I am with another sher... hope u guys like it...

thanks to my Guru jee for always helping me😊

anyway here is my sher:

Yeh Pyar bhi bahut Ajeeb hot hai,

Khushi dene wala, dard dene lagta hai,

Aanson ponchne wala, rulane lagta hai,

Marham lagane wala, Zakhm dene lagta hai,

Aur Pyar karne wala, nafrat karne lagta hai....😭

Awww...so sweet di..very nice i really liked it!!

I'm soooo proud of myself today! Yipeeeeeeeeeee 😃

But on a serious note, you deserve it all Cheliji. It's really MAGNIFICENT!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Seriously yaar, you should post more. I'm waiting....

Cheers,

Anjali

Originally posted by: amisra

I'm soooo proud of myself today! Yipeeeeeeeeeee 😃

But on a serious note, you deserve it all Cheliji. It's really MAGNIFICENT!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Seriously yaar, you should post more. I'm waiting....

Cheers,

Anjali

thanks Guru jee...😃 I will try to write more...par I am usually in mood of writing shers when I am in sad mood😆

and Thanks Anji😊

wah wah kya baat hai, GuruJi SubhanAllah, CheliJi MashaAllah.

Great sher Sapna 😛 ..and the last line is so true..this happens so often in love :(

Gr8 sher sapu and guruji tumari excellent too and sapu all true but kisiki majboori bhi hoti hai karne ke liye.

anyway sapu keep writing dear and hamesha khush rahena 👏

Originally posted by: pinkykhan

wah wah kya baat hai, GuruJi SubhanAllah, CheliJi MashaAllah.

thank u jee😊

Originally posted by: datspreets

Great sher Sapna 😛 ..and the last line is so true..this happens so often in love :(

thanks Preets...and yep usually these things happen in love😭

Originally posted by: sweetsapna

Gr8 sher sapu and guruji tumari excellent too and sapu all true but kisiki majboori bhi hoti hai karne ke liye.

anyway sapu keep writing dear and hamesha khush rahena 👏

arre Taru di...kabhi kabhi its not even majbori...log just like to play with ppl's feelings...

thanks Taru di😊

Originally posted by: Khushiyana

hailaaa... cute poem Sapna...
Great mind yaar!!
👏

thanks Khushiyana😊