Swaron OS: When Pappa plays cupid ;) [part 2 updated pg4] {No PMs}

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

khoobsurat update vandhana.

love ---love and love.

swaron reconciliation was brilliant.

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

AWESOME two shot!!👏
the update was superb..the whole pehla nasha dance with swayam imagination of sharon was beautifully written..bringing his true feelings out
and his concern for sharon was good to see..oops read..😛
sharons hypothermia can be declared hero of the day along with swayam's dad of course..😉
he unintentionally sent the gang for a wild goose chase..😆
loved the reconcilation part..
dont ever ever stop writing..
thanks for the PM

P.S. sorry for not commenting on the first part but loved it too..

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Res

Unres

Vadu 🤗

Thank u so so so much for such a lovely OS yaar 😊

I wish tu he swaron ki story likh te 🥱

I have read many of ur works...

N trust me this one was the best 😃

Love

Nancy 😃

Edited by nancynnv - 12 years ago

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

it was wonderful and fantastic and perfect ending... loved it

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome os..👏

totally loved it...😃

great work..👍🏼

keep it up..

Thanks for the pm!!😊

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

res

unres

i luved this os so much vandu

i so wanted to see papa playing cupid in swaron's relationship

tat i actually visualized the whole os

as a writer yu never fail to surprise me

the bike ride was so romantic n the rain dance was really touching

luved the part where they had a heart to heart conversation ,

i also luved the way sharon was worrying about the first kiss 😆

do write more lookin forward to ur updates

Edited by rosyrkohli - 12 years ago

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

okk so i start karing
vadhana 🤗
it was awesome
lovely concept "When papa plays cupid" 😎

my personal fav is the 2nd part which u said its long 🤢 but it was not 😛
Sharon's Asthma always patched up b/w them..their kiss
which was not technically but still bolne me kya jaata h 😛
Swayam piking sharon on his arma
i loved the doctor's dialogue
Swayam taking care of sharon was just beautifully described...
Papa's dialogue was awesome
loved their confession
in short loved the whole story

Edited by Muskan_SwaRon - 12 years ago