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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys,
I am back with another poem but with a twist its not based on PaYa this time but on Rubal and Payal. 😳😃I really love their Jodi and I am feeling the pain their love story has bought. Rubal is heartbroken so this one is for his feelings for Payal! Here is my first attempt on their Jodi so apologies! Enjoy and leave your comments and likes!

||Rubal and Payal- Pain of Love||

Blood drips from my broken heart
I never thought we would part
When you held me I thought you meant forever,
Now I know you meant never.

Saying you love me, respect me with that look in your eye
I thought it was the truth
but it was nothing but a cold hearted lie
Your tender touch, that glistening smile,
Two things about you I will forever miss.

As I sit here thinking about you,
My face is wet with tears.

I should've cried a long time ago
But the love for you in my heart never let these tears fall.

They say love is blind,
But I never knew the pain of love.

A pain so deep it pierces like a needle
My wound will heal with time
But my soul will never forget to love you
Until my last breath.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww this was such an emotional one, I really liked it!

Thanks Sonia! And keep writing, you write fairy well :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Awesome poem!! I loved it!! You're a great writer! Totally an awesome writer!! I loved you're poem :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first time visiting to this forum
loved our poem love to visit more
plz make something more for rubel and payal like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome poem! You are great! The feelings were so very well depicted. My favourite are the last four lines. Keep writing forever!
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Glad you enjoyed reading it! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NISHADEEP

aaw...awesome poem...touched my heart...

Thanks for reading my work! 😃 Happy you liked it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Predator.

Awww this was such an emotional one, I really liked it!

Thanks Sonia! And keep writing, you write fairy well :)

Thanks a lot Sonia for reading my work and enjoying it a lot! Yeah needs improvement but will keep working on it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rainbowcatxo

Wow! Awesome poem!! I loved it!! You're a great writer! Totally an awesome writer!! I loved you're poem :D

Aww thank you very much and I am not the best but improving with time! Really glad you loved my work! 😃 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenu0701

first time visiting to this forum
loved our poem love to visit more
plz make something more for rubel and payal like this

Aww welcome to the forum firstly! 🤗 Hope you remain here it is a little quiet but I am sure if you added to the discussions it will be a more lively forum! Thanks a lot for loving my work and I will try my best to create more on Rubal and Payal but also continue with Adi and Pankhuri! 😳 😃

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