After Three Years..(an PariJat TS)CHAP3(LAST ONE) UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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update plz...m liking dis...diff story plus modern one!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Renu darling is the response good enough ???
Will you continue it ??? ❓
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Are pagal continue kyun nai kia...dhat teri ki...left me on edge yaar...tu bhi na...

Fab yaar...jaldi next chap bhi add karde meri jaan

meney wahi katam isliye kyu ki muje lag ki yehi bohat zada hogai hai ..and you guys may get bored ...

Thank you ...😃😆

okay madam ji jaldi he update karungi...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Renu darling is the response good enough ???

Will you continue it ??? ❓

hmm...chalo i will update it for you people ... will give the update in few hours...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Renu...

hmm...chalo i will update it for you people ... will give the update in few hours...😃


Oh thank you !!! Love you so much for continuing this TS !!!! 🤗 ❤️🤗❤️
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Originally posted by: indudolai

update plz...m liking dis...diff story plus modern one!!

Thank you and will update it few hours...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne


Oh thank you !!! Love you so much for continuing this TS !!!! 🤗 ❤️🤗❤️

Ur welcome ..and love you too...🤗😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CH2:I LOVE YOU DAMM IT

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The car stop in front of the mansion and she didn't find the watch man so she walked all the way and opened the gate and finally got rajat out of the car.

She took his arms and placed them around her neck, trying to make him walk.

He stumbled throughout his way falling on her frequently...

"Rajat careful..." she hissed with care..

"No am fine" he said trying to control himself

She opened the door and the house was dark with just a dim light on...She started taking him upstairs when he pulled her to the guest room..

"Nahi..." he pouted..."mera kamara yeh hai.." he pointed to the guest room and smiled at her childishly...

"per aapka room tho upar hey"she replied as per her knowledge

"nahi neechey hey meri room"rajat said in the same tone

"nahi upar.."she said in commending voice

"arey ... ye ghar mera hai yah tera??" he asked her unable to open his eyes completely

"Fine as you wish.."she said

and finally she successfully took him to the room him and both of them fell on the couch...his eyes met hers...And their lips dangerously close to each other ...He gently rubbed her cheeks and enjoying its warmth...She closed her eyes for a moment unknowingly feeling his warmth..well i think the nature didn't like to see them romancing ..gave an loud cry which made pari to come out the trance...she made him sit on the couch moving away from his embrace...She moved towards the windows and closed them...Later she went to the kitchen and made some lemonade for him,she went near him and handed him the glass of lemonade and indicate him to drink it ..and he became an good child start following her instruction and started drinking in .she sat beside him and started reading an magazine.he stop in between

"Am sorry..." he gently whispered moving close to her ears making her jerk for a moment...
looking at her confused expression he continued ."Waise mera kamra upar he hey.." he giggled as if this was the best joke ever ..

She was totally surprise after witness the child in him for the first time...She had never seen this side of Rajat. All that she knew about him was a responsible smart guy...But the rajat at moment with her is totally different .but still not paying any attention to her he continued..

"Tumey pata hey...woh mera aur pari ka kamara hai...sirf humara...mein tumhe woh nahi dikha saktha...isseliye meney joot bola sorry " he said happily starring at the roof...Unknowingly a smile appeared on her face admitting so many worries she has ...Even though she could convince herself with 10000 reasons that Rajat would have a better future with Lavina...But in deep of her heart she always craved for his love...

"hmm pari ???"she asked him curious to know about her...

"Woh meri wife hey..Pari ..Paridhi Rajat Tokas...!!!!" he smiled and took an sip of lemonade

"aur?" she ask eagerly to know more what he think about her ...

"aur kya???mera sar dard ho raha hai..." he replied suddenly frustrated...

"okay fine aap rest karo..i will cook something for you "she said and moved to the kitchen ..sorry sorry her kitchen...

she started cooking noodles for him and while cooking he went down her memory lane remember her past expression in that kitchen ...the first time she step into this kitchen ..she know absolutely nothing about cooking ...her first food experiment and how rajat praised her food inspite of it been an worst one and then how rajat taught her cooking ..and then how she mastered it ...unknowingly an sweet smile was form on her lips..soon the noodles were ready and she took the plate and went to the living room...She found him sleeping like a kid...She was about to wake him when she heard a heavy thunder and turned around...She switched on the lights and was about to turn when she noticed their picture neatly laminated hanging on the wall..She was rooted to the place for a moment...She had dreamt of doing it long back since their marriage but still chose to keep quiet as she wanted him to initiate certain things...but her happiness did not remain for long...Due to heavy lighting sound he woke ..he opened his eyes and found her infront of his eye..first of all he thought it was his hallucination..he rubbed his eyes and saw her again ..this is was not an dream ..she was really here in front of his eye..

"Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho??" he shouted.she was startled..She turned and looked at him..

"Rajat ..woh mei...actually aap behosh tey tho...main bas aapki help kar..."before she could complete he roared at her

"Oh really?? Thank you soo much madam...Thank you sooo much for the pains you have taken...acha laga aapse milke...warna aaj kal kahan aise achey log milthe jo apne se zyaada doosron ke baare mein sochthe hain..." his words were sharp...They didn't seem to praise her...rather his words reflected pain, and anger.

"Rajat meri baat tho suniye..."she tried to explain

"Mujhe kuch nahi sunna...Leave...Right now" he shouted.

"Rajat why don't you listen to me..." she said and made an biggest mistake by moving near to him .

"Kya tumne meri sunne ki koshish ki??? Apna decision lene se pehle tumhe ek baar bhi mujhse baat karne ki baare mey nahi socha??"

"Rajat muje lag tum lavina se pyaar karate ho"

"I don't Love Lavina ..I Love you damn it..." he held her shoulders tight and hissed in anger..And finally the words which she was craving to hear from him came out in anger..Tears were the language to be heard at that moment...

She slowly broke the silence whispering.."mujhe laga agar Lavina aapke saath rahegi tho aap khush hojangey aur apni profession mey successful hongey "

His grip on her shoulders grew tighter and she suddenly hissed in pain as his nails pierced to her soft skin...

"Shut up!! Aur tumhe aisa kyun lagtha hai ki sirf Lavina ki hone se main apne profession mey successful rahunga??? just because she is of my profession and your not??? "he pushed her forcefully and turned back and continued..." Agar baat isa hi ho tho more than half of the people would lead an unsuccessful life today..."

Tears rolled down her cheeks...Finally the truth that she had taken the most stupidest decision hit her hard straight on her heart...she wiped her tears and moved closer to him and placed her arm on his shoulders...

"Rajat you mean a lot to me...Meney bas aapko khush dekhna chahthi thi...Issiliye maine aapko aapki pyaar lotane ka..."

"oh ya..tho tumey meri pyaar lotana hey ..??"he cut her in between...
"Tho ah ..jab mei 6th grade mey pad tha tha mujhe meri best friend ki behen jodha se crush tha..I had even promised to marry her..."he moved closer to her and placed an arm around her shoulders and continued..."aur haan jab mei 9th grade paad raha tha mujhe meri arts teacher bahot achi lagthi thi...unka naam shilpa thi ..waise tum tho bahot smart...Ja abhi ja aur unhe sab ko doond kar lavo ja..." he held her wrists and dragged her to the main door..."Trust me Pari..agar woh mere life mein wapas aayenge tho mujhe bahot acha lagega..." he said in a sarcastic tone and closed the door right on her face...

It looked like even the nature turned upset and started shedding tears in the name of rain...He knelt down on the floor and unable to stand anymore...He closed his eyes and remembered every moment that he had spent with her...

On the other hand, she stood there soaking in rain unable to understand what was going on...she was numb...what was she supposed to do...he had loved her and she had no slightest idea about it??

"I don't Love Lavina ..I Love you damn it..."

"Tumey pata hai...woh mera aur pari ka kamara hai...sirf humara...mein tumhe woh nahi dikha saktha...isseliye meney joot bola sorry "

His words were resounding in her ears...

Her pain and tears were soaked in rain...she stood near car..She slid down near the wheels and sat on the ground hiding her face in between her legs and cried her heart out trying .He saw her from the window of the living room and clutched the window panes tight in anger..

"Rajat You mean a lot to me...Mein bas aapko khush dekhna chahthi thi...Issiliye maine aapko aapki pyaar lotane ka..."

Her words were resounding in his ears

He couldn't take it anymore...he opened the door with force and moved out in the rain. He found her crying near the car ..he moved towards her pulled by her wrist...She stumbled for a moment and landed crashing her chest with his...Both of them were soaking in the rain...

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Pheww katam hogaya hey ...i know it is just an piece of shit ...i suddenly wrote it...ye tho hona hi tha but i promise next chap..achi aur full on romantic hone wali hey ..and next chap will the last chap of this three shot ...i hope you people will enjoy this...please give your feedback please do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...ignore typos ,criticism and suggestions are most welcomed ..Happy Reading..!!!!!
Love,
Renu

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the second part Renu! Wonderful. Update soon👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update love it plz plz plz continue soon

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