Arhi~I Want You!~FF*Thread 14*Part 98 p127 21/4 - Page 90

i missed your updates.
as your back now i have to catch up with 3 updates

read the updates

khushi is pregnant and that too with twins. loved it

loved her late night craving of jalebbis

aryan is the one who is more eager to meet his siblings

please continue soon

Awesome loved it when's the next update coming

heyy ok so im one of your new readers and let me just tell you...I LOVE THIS FF so much so that this is the FIRST ever ff ive commented on. But i just have a few criticisms to give you. please do not take them in the wrong way...i just wanna clear it up. ok so the john/sonu/sia track...that was really bad no offense because ok why was khushi so foolish? and it actually really seemed like she WANTED relationship with stupid john...it just doesnt make sense that she would push arnav so far out of hrr life. and then another thing that really bothered me was that if Arnav knew the whole issue why didnt he tell khushi??? didnt he already know it must be hard for her??...and then to rub it in her face and get a fake girlfriend. SO IMMATURE. i mean he KNEW! at least you shouldve made it that he didnt know the truth when khushi told him cuz if he really loved khushi then he would never have hurt her that way just to get her to confess something THAT HE ALREADY KNEW. im sorry ok im ranting now...but yea that track seemed very poor oh and also the climax...the meeting between sonu and arnav was SOOO underwhelming. like it was NOTHING. NOTHING HAPPENED. To think that if they had made such a beig deal about it...the face off wouldve been more sinister or something. idkk...so yea sorry but very poorly done... i feel like your getting bored with the ff...if thats the case please move on and write another one and leave this one be...because it was sooo good until all that stuff happened. But still..sorry if i sound mean or rude, i truly dont mean to but yea

oh and guys i started a collection of my own ff's on them. im still starting out...go check it out PLEASEEE..trust me theyre nott that bad 😛