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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi all, I suppose I'm new here. This is the first time I'm posting some lines in this forum, hope I don't make a fool of myself!😆 Thanks to Taniaji for the invitation!

Jeevan ke dariyan main chale teh jawab dhoondhne,

Aa kar kinaare par, lehron ko chodhne.

Ye kaunse dagar hai jispe larkhara rahe hai kadam,

Milna saath pheron se, toh par kyun chotah par raha hai ye janam.

Kaanch ke jaise bikhre huay hai rang,

Saath reh kar bhi hai doori sung.

Dhundhla hua sa hai karam ka roop,

Jal rahe hain hum, kaisi hai ye dhoop.

Jab dekha sheeshe mein khud ko rhootah,

Jawab toh kya, ayeena bhi sawal banke toota.

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wah wah...AWESOME DC!! Excellent poem! 👏 👏 👏

Btw, welcome to the forum!! 👏

Cheers,

Anjali
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: amisra

Wah wah...AWESOME DC!! Excellent poem! 👏 👏 👏

Btw, welcome to the forum!! 👏

Cheers,

Anjali

Shukriya jaaneman😉

And thanks for the welcome!😛

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: guru12

very nice 👏 👏 👏

thanku😛

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was VERY well written! 👏

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