ZaYa FF- A Beacon of Hope Ch6 (Updated 15/05/14)

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ZaYa FF: A Beacon Of Hope


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Characters


Aliya Ghulam Haider


Zain Osman Abdullah


Ghulam Haider


Shabana Ghulam Haider


Ayat Ghulam Haider


Osman Abdullah


Suraiyah Osman Abdullah


Fahad Osman Abdullah


Nafeesa Fahad Abdullah


Aarub Fahad Abdullah


Sara Fahad Abdullah


Saif Fahad Abdullah


Rizwan Yusuf Khan



Chand Bibi


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Zeeshan Mohsin Ahmed


Asmita Mohsin Ahmed

Mohsin Ahmed



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Prologue

Osman has offered his son, Zain to go his hometown of Bhopal, in which he has set him the challenge of persuading his aunty to accept money for the expenses of Aliyah's wedding and he must also visit Bhopal. In return he would receive 5 lakh from his father as his first wage.
This is also the first time Shabana (Zain's aunty and Aliya's Mother) and her family will see Zain in 10 years. Aliya's family is unaware Zain will be coming to stay with them.



Note:
In this FF, Zeeshan and his family are not gold-diggers, instead they are people who are kind and well-respected in society.



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This is my first ever dedication.
I would like to dedicate this chapter to aNkItA.C for creating this amazing banner for this FF👏😊.


Okay, this is my first ZaYa FF. Hope you like it!

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Chapter 1
As he stepped out of the plane he noticed how dull his surroundings seemed, how it varied from the locations he had visited throughout his life. It wasn't like the bustling city of London, nor was it like the the night life in New York, yet it somehow made him feel comfortable,. All he wanted to do was to complete the task his father had set him so he could get onto the first flight for Bangkok where he would happily party away.

The only benefit from this was that his father had allowed his best friend to accompany him.

"Zain, come on let's get a taxi." Rizwan said bringing Zain out of his thoughts.

"No, I was thinking we could walk the 2 maybe 3 miles to their house. Zain replied sarcastically with a grin plastered on his face.

"Maybe we should, it'll help you lose some of that fat you call muscles." Riz retorted with a smirk.

"My friend, I know you don't have any. So stop being so jealous."

Rizwan glared at Zain.

"Okay, okay. Calm down. I'm sorry." Zain laughed. "Come on, we better find out where we're going. I certainly don't want to sleep under the stars, here."

Zain sat in the taxi and gave the driver the address.

"How long will it take to get to the address?" Rizwan questioned.

"At least 30 minutes,sir."

"Ok, thanks."

20 minutes later they were stuck in traffic. Rizwan was tapping his finger to the rhythm of the music he was was listening to through his earphones. Zain was fed up of checking his twitter account and playing temple run on his iPad. He locked the iPad and took in his surroundings. Cars were surrounded by numerous cyclists and motorists. He found his eyes wandering off towards a cyclist positioned to the left of the taxi. His eyes were captivated as he looked at the girl, her face was barely visible yet for some reason he felt a very strong connection to her. He was about to step out of the taxi and move toward the girl but the traffic lights had changed.

Even though the girl was no longer in sight his mind kept wondering towards her for some reason.

What wrong with me? She was just a girl riding a bicycle, he thought shaking his head.

Another 15 minutes later they arrived at the address like the driver had previously stated.

"Let's go and get this over with. I don't want to be around my cousin anymore than I need to. You know she was lethal when we were children. She was more dangerous than a rattle snake and that is putting it lightly."

"Yeah. I totally believe you. A girl could be so dangerous." He laughed. "What did she exactly do to you?"

"Not going to tell you. All you need to know is she is the devil in disguise."

"Yeah. I'm sure she is. That's why she's getting married to someone." Rizwan chortled.

"Shut up, Riz. Come on."

"Asalamu alaikum. Can I help you, beta?"

A woman asked looking at the two boys who looked slightly out of place.

"Walikum asalam. Of course you can, phups. You seem more beautiful than the last time I saw you."

"Zain, is that you?"

"The one and only."

"You grown up to be a very handsome young man."

"Thanks phups."

"It's phupi, besharam." She smiled whilst jokingly pulling his ear.

"Phups, this is my best friend, Rizwan."

"Hi." Rizwan greeted Shabana.

"Beta, are you a muslim?"

"Yes." Rizwan said. His expression displayed confusion, not quite understanding where this was leading.

"Then give salaam." Shabana told him.

"Oh, sorry. Asalamu alaikum." Rizwan said with a cheeky grin.

"Walikum asalam. Let's go inside. I'm sure both of you are tired and hungry."

"Phups, I have missed your food a lot, 10 years without it was a mission. Have you made kheer-"

"I haven't made it yet. I was just trying to find Aliya."

Shabana led the way into house followed by Zain and Rizwan.

"I haven't been here for two minutes and that girl is already trying to ruin me." Zain murmured.

"Did you say something, Zain?" Shabana asked whilst Rizwan tried to cover his laughter as a cough.

"No phups."

"You two sit, I'll go and bring some food."

Zain took out his phone to check for any message. He saw the 7 missed calls from his mother.

"Riz, I need to call my mum. Stay here."

He walked towards the direction Shabana headed towards, in the hope of finding her.

"Phup." He called out. Hoping she would hear him.

"Zain, what's the matter?" Shabana enquired, coming out of, what seemed like, the kitchen.

"Nothing. I was just wondering is there anywhere quiet where I could answer a phone call?"

"Yes, the roof. I don't think anyone is up there."

Shabana led him towards a staircase.

"Walk up the three flights of stairs, it'll be the door at the end." Shabana smiled.

"Thanks, phup." Zain said as he made his way to the roof.




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Plz do continue it..would love to read the next update 👍🏼
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Loved the plot
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I would like to dedicate the 2nd chapter of this FF to Ani---Anisah for being the first person to comment on this FF. Thankyou, Ani---Anisah 😃

Here's Chapter 2




Shabana led him towards a staircase.

"Walk up the three flights of stairs, it'll be the door at the end."

"Thanks, phup." Zain said as he made his way to the roof.


Chapter 2
Zain reached the rooftop to see flower and plant arranged neatly around the roof. In one of the corners clothes were hanging on a washing line to dry. Zain rung his mum, telling her he had reached Bhopal and was currently at Shabana's house. He quickly told his mum he would ring tomorrow and hung up. On the other end of the line Suraiya was fuming. All she could think was her son had never hung up like that before, why the sudden change now?

As Zain was about to make his way downstairs, a melodious laugh dispersed around the rooftop. He walked around trying to find the source of the laugh, behind the clothes on the washing line he heard a girl talking on the phone.

"Your family seem to be very intriguing" She laughed once more."I have to go now. I will talk you later. Khudafiz."

After hearing the reply from the other end the girl put down the phone.

Zain walked back towards the stairs, berating himself for eavesdropping on someone's conversation.

As Zain entered the room where he had previously left Rizwan, his phone began to ring. He picked up the phone straight away after seeing caller I.D- Darling.

"Hi dad."

"Hello, mere laal. How are finding Bhopal?"

"It seem ok."

"Mere laal, you should know better than to lie to me."

"Sorry, dad."

"Zain bete, you may not be enjoying yourself right now but believe a time will come when you will change your view."

"If you say so, dad." Zain said, hoping to keep his dad thought in mind. But he couldn't understand what could possibly change his mind. What did Bhopal have that Bangkok didn't?

"Bete, I'd like you to do something for me."

"Of course dad, anything." Zain replied without missing a beat.

"I would like you to visit the Dharbar. It should be approximately 15 minutes away from Shabana's house by foot but then you'll have to travel across the river by a boat to get there. Go there and do dua, bete. Will you go there for me, mere laal?"

"Dad, your desires become my fixations and you know that I will fulfill them for you no matter what. I am going to the Dharbar right now and I'm dragging Riz with me too."

"Thank you, mere laal."

"Okay dad. I'll talk to you later. Bye."

"Khudafiz, bete."

Zain put down in phone, just as Shabana entered the room with a tray filled with delicious looking treats.

"Phups, the food looks amazing but me and Riz need to go." Zain informed his auntie.

"Why?" Rizwan and Shabana echoed their thoughts simultaneously. Zain's aunt had asked this out asked out of curiosity. Rizwan however, had dejectedly asked for an entirely different reason. He wanted food, 6 hours of no food seem harder than running a marathon for him. It wasn't helping that appetizing assortment of food was placed right in front of him.

"Because dad asked me to visit the Dharbar, which we are going to do now." He pointed out to Rizwan.

Zain asked Shabana for direction and set off with Rizwan soon after toward the Dharbar.

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Back at the house on the rooftop, Aliya was sat on the swing, where she had been talking to Zeeshan on the phone for the first time. Although, it seemed slightly awkward conversing with Zeeshan at the beginning, they got along better when they started talking about their families. Aliya didn't think he was her prince charming, the one that she dreamed of marrying but he seemed like a nice enough guy. And if her parents had chosen Zeeshan as her suitor they must have done so after much deliberation. She truly felt really stupid for even thinking there would actually be a guy in the world that would fit her checklist. A checklist she had made just before this marriage proposal.

What did she say to her mum when she asked what qualities must her future husband have?

Oh, yes.

The guy:
  • must always be smiling
  • must be smart and intelligent
  • must be able to handle any problem easily
  • must be well-cultured, respects elders, happily interact with children and make sure family comes first
  • must be able to laugh himself and makes others around him laugh too.

That was what she imagined her prince charming to be like. Aliya gently hit the side of her head for being so stupid. She knew there was no such thing as love at first sight, that only happened in movies and if you were very lucky, then maybe, just maybe, in real life. She was lucky to be brought up by such loving parents, who trusted her and allowed her a degree of freedom. But what if her life didn't turn out like her parent? What if there was no love? Even though she was very close to her mother, she didn't think this was something her mother could help her with.

Inshallah, I will be fine. Allah Ta'alah will help me, Aliyah thought.And with that Aliyah got up and went downstairs, leaving her problems behind. For now.

"Ammi." Aliya called out, hoping her mother would be inside. "Ammi."

"Where were you? Wait a minute what's the matter Aliya?" Shabana asked Aliya.

"I just thought I'd tell you I going to the Dharbar. I will be back soon."

"Aliya, wait. I need to-" Before Shabana could finish off her sentence Aliyah was rushing out of the house.

"What am I going to do with this girl." Shabana said shaking her head.

The house phone suddenly began to ring and Shabana went to answer it.

"Assalamu alaikum."

"Wa alaikum asalam, Shabana." Usman replied.

"Bhaijaan,How are you and why did you not tell me Zain was coming to Bhopal?"

"I am fine and I wanted it to be surprise for you. I hope, mere laal hasn't trouble you."

"Nahin, bhaijaan. Of course he hasn't. Nobody except me knows Zain is here. Ghulam Saab is at work, Ayat is at school and I didn't know Aliya was at home."

"Well, then it can be a surprise for the rest of them, then." Usman smiled at the other end of the line. "Is Aliya there?"

"No, bhaijaan. She just left to go to the Dharbar."

"Mashallah, I wish I had a daughter like Aliya, who would go to pray without be told and at her own will. I hoped that my son would choose to go to the Dharbar at his own will instead of me telling him to go."

"Bhaijaan, she has probably gone to pray for you and Zain has gone to the Dharbar regardless of whether you told him or not."

"That is true. You know I hope Aliya live happy and peaceful life."

"And I too pray that Zain will soon finds a wife."

Link ---> Chapter 3

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