Arakshi: EK DOOJAY KAY LIYAY update part 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just one thought comes and my hand start ache to
Pen down this story
Don't know it's one short
Two short but I try to satisfied you all by completing this
In good manner, as usual I humble request to reader
Feed me with your comments
I hope just like you like my other story
You like this as well
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PART 1

This is very dark and quiet night, Arjun drives SUV in safe speed... He feel a bit tired... He is heading to Mumbai, as he goes another city to help his friend to solve the case... After finishing the case his friend insist him to stay with him tonight but he refuse and start journey... Unaware of this fact that this journey change his life.
Arjun down his side window to get some fresh air, then he hear gun shot... He slow his SUV and try to understand situation... He is still in thinking process then he hear again gun shot and he press the brake hardly... Stop vehicle he comes out... Look here there... He go near the edge of road to check but find nothing... he is standing on road middle in the dark forest... cloudy weather stop moon light... It's all dark and quiet even no voice of any insect and animal... He stand for some minutes then go back to his SUV... Sit and start drive again... He drive little far than suddenly harsh braking.
He stop the vehicle and come down to check who is fell on front of his car? He quickly go and try to hold that body, then relies that she is a girl... Girl look him and try to say some... He try hard to listen and understand words... Danger, leave, jungle, quickly, without stoping, ET and she get unconscious
Arjun surprise but soon he feel coldness through his spin... His gut feeling start indicating him something wrong... Without further delay he scoop her in his arm... Then feel thick liquid in his hands... He see his hand in car headlight... His goosebumps arise knowing that is blood... He rush to scoop her and lay down on SUV back seat and rush to sit front of wheel... Close his window and zoom his vehicle fast.
His gut feeling right, one second difference... Air fill with many gun shoot... At same place where he stand just a second ago...he press his accelater down and car speed up quickly...he feel some shot comes on his vehicle but thanks it not much damage... He speeding up way to go city... Full car head light open... With maximum speed.


That's it I type on phone
I am lazy to open laptop and write on it
But next I thing I do it on that so find any error sorry in advance
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...
plz continue it soon...

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Nice and lovely start
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Interesting start. Plz do continue
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Very good start...
Please continue...👍🏼
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here is another part of this story
let me know its good or not
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Part 2

Arjun do rash driving...he want leave that place as soon as possible...whole area covered with dark...vehicle full light on...he is worried about that girl...her blood is oozing...her clothes is worn badly...this time only one thought lingering in his mind that he could be able to save that girl or not...he never look back...drive madly...

Soon, he enter in city...reach on hospital he park on front on main entrance...open door go back and hold that girl in his arms and go inside...placing her on stretcher he shout...doctor...nurses comes...see that injured girl...she quickly call doctor...doctor come and see her then said: I am sorry I can't treat her...this is police case...she been shot...he turn to his staff and instruct them...call the police.

You don't need to call police...voice comes and doctor turn to arjun side and rudely say...then you take her back I can't treat her...this is police matter...

arjun shook his head in disbelieve and take out his card...seeing his card doctor shock...he quickly said: sorry, sir...main aap ko pehchana nahi...then he instruct his staff to take that girl inside.

It's been one and a half hour gone when doctor comes out...arjun patiently wait outside...looking doctor he stand for his place.

Doctor: sir, she is out of danger...she shot two bullets...one in her arm and other just touch her shoulder and pass through...here is arm bullet (he give arjun a bullet in small plastic pouch) she lost blood dangerously, we put one bottle of blood...amazing thing is this...that her stomach is empty...like she eat nothing for last 48 hours...not a single morsel.

Arjun: (shock to hear) what? 48 hour she eats nothing.

Doctor: yes sir, not even a drop of water...her clothes is worn out badly that we think maybe she is the victim of sexually or physically abuse...but no...there is no sign of such a kind of abuse...her eyes and face swollen...I find some bruises.

Arjun thinking something and ask: what is her age?

Doctor: Hardly 19 years...one thing more sir, are her toes injured...she is wearing not shoes...just barefoot...its look like she is walking thorns and harsh floor.

Arjun sinking in deep thought...then he snap...doctor talking with nurse...she give on packet to him.

Doctor: sir, these are her clothes...and some jewellery she wear...he give that packet to arjun...and about to go...when arjun stop him.

Arjun: can you tell me when she gains conscious?

Doctor: I think within two hour...are you staying here?

Arjun: yes, I am here waiting for her coming back...in sense.

Doctor just nodded...tell him to her room number and goes in his office...while arjun goes to her room unaware of two pair of eyes...how follow him until he enter a room...those eyes wait for while ...then message to someone.

Arjun enter in room...girl cover in blanket...he look her angelic face for some minutes...creamy skin look pale because of lack of too much blood...her eyes and face look swollen...some bruises...her hair is all muddle up...

Arjun sit on coach...sinking in deep thought...then one doctor enter in the room...his mouth cover with mask (doctor use at during operation) he look arjun and said: patient ko injection daina hay...arjun nodded and stand to go out...he decide to go out and make a call to sameer...he just about to go out...when one nurse enter in room...she give arjun a professional smile and look girl side...

arjun is just stepping outside when he hear nurse scream...she shout...hey, kaun ho tum or yeh kiya kar rahy ho?...he rush to go back...that doctor see him back and try to escape...arjun jump to catch him...doctor throw side table his side...arjun take a side to save him...he nearly catch him then suddenly, that man push nurse to his side and she bump him badly...arjun hold her to safe fall on floor...nurse manage to stand on her feet...arjun quickly go outside...then turn back to that nurse side and bark on her...stay here and not allow to anyone comes here...he zoom out behind that man.

That man is disappear in air, arjun check on main gate, no security guard there, he go to the road side but nothing happen...that man is vanish...he look right left then back inside...he see security guards come...

Arjun: where are you? Your duty on gate but you is not here...he shout on him.

Guard: sorry, sir...one man come and tell me that doctor call me inside immediately...I go inside but doctor said...he didn't call me...he lower her gaze...arjun just give him a look and go inside.

Nurse and doctor check that girl throughout again...arjun stand silently...doctor finish and turn to his side.

Doctor: (take deep sigh) thanks to this nurse, (he pointed at her) she just safe...look sir, this is poison...he show him injection...arjun take that injection from his hand and look...

Doctor said again...but who want to kill her and Why?

Arjun also in deep thought...that he decides one thing and comes out...he make call to sameer and discuss with him whole situation...after sometime they finalize their plan and he hang up his phone with relief.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ketakee

Very good start...
Please continue...👍🏼


thanks dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurpreetasi7

Nice and lovely start
Continue soon



thanks 😃
i hope you like this as much as you like other
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing
full of suspense
w8tng 4 next part
& thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 strt.. intrstng cncpt.. wndring who dt grl ws..
continue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm 😊

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