Arakshi: EK DOOJAY KAY LIYAY update part 18

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

super awesome n interesting start
eager to know about this mystery girl
thanks a lot for pm
don cont soon plz

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anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

so glad you made another arakshi😳

i always love ur work u r very talented,

i loved it..

is the girl sakshi?😕

cant wait to find out what arjun and sameer's plan is👏

continue soon

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angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

great update...

arjun save that girl..

but u left us with lot of ques..so its ur duty to update it soon...😉

just kidding...😆

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Ayushi Patel

@arakshi_16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Such an good start would like to read more do send PMs...

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Shezi19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: arakshifan
so glad you made another arakshi😳
i always love ur work u r very talented,
i loved it..

is the girl sakshi?😕
cant wait to find out what arjun and sameer's plan is👏
continue soon

JUST KEEP READING

YOU FIND SOON

THANKS DEAR LIKING MY STORIES😃

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Shezi19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: angle1shanu
great update...
arjun save that girl..
but u left us with lot of ques..so its ur duty to update it soon...😉
just kidding...😆

DON'T WORRY YAAR

I TRY TO FULFILL MY DUTY😉

AND TRY UPDATE DAILY😊

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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

read both parts in one go.

very nice concept.

do cont soon.

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

nice start is that girl sakshi who was shot ans was she saying etf

continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

sorry didnot read second part now only i read

so someone is after that girl's life and followed arjun

but hope arjun will safe her and guess she is sakshi

pls continue and do pm me for all parts

Edited by sisodia_shefali - 11 years ago

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Part 3
After talking sameer Arjun feel a bit relax, he like sameer idea, he quickly go to doctor office and speak with him... He just approach there... When he saw him coming out in hurry.
Arjun:what happen doctor?
Doctor: patient condition is worse... I just go and check her( he rush to go her room)
Arjun enter behind him... He freeze to see that girl body shock...her body shaking very badly... Machines make noises...doctor check the machine reading and start instruct the other nurses... All are sudden busy...giving some injection... Put oxygen mask on her...one nurse request Arjun to go out...he nodded and out.
He is waiting till doctor comes out... He look exchausted and tired...he comes and stand quietly nearly Arjun... He look him and nodded negatively.
Arjun:what happen,doctor why her body shake badly?
Doctor: her brain is in shock, I don't know she go through with what kind of trauma, which is badly effected on her mind, I tell you...how it's work...when you sleeping your mind still working... Her mind during her unconscious period working same and effected on her mind she is weak... Her mind can't resist that memory and not able to throw out that painful memory from her mind... When brain not able to hold that pressure... It start effecting on her body and body weakness(as you know she eat nothing for last 48 hours)make her body shocks...(doctor take deep breath and said) she goes in temporary coma.
Arjun: what? Did you say coma? He in shock hearing this... Doctor just nodded and remain silent.
Arjun think for sometime than say.
Arjun: doctor, I want shift that girl from an army hospital... What you think is her condition is reliable for shifting.
Doctor: but why you want her to shift?
Arjun: first, this hospital is on the end of the city and far for my place... Because that time her condition is not well...so, I came here...but as you tell me her situation...I want shift her in near my place as I keep on eye her condition...secondly, two attempt of murder on her already done... I don't want to take other risk... In that hospital they take care of her and by the time I check her whereabouts...it's easy for me.
Arjun finish his talk and doctor agree with him... He go to ready her all document, medicine, test report etc...that easy for other hospital doctor to understand her problems... By the time Arjun call and give green signal to sameer...tell him to sending ambulance with security guards.
Soon, arrangement complete and ambulance comes to get that girl...Liza comes with some guards...Arjun explain things her and she goes in ambulance with that girl...Arjun way to go ETF.
He take nearly 45minutes to arrive in His house...it's nearly dawn...he straight goes to his room and change before hit the bed...he is in shallow sleep when his phone start ringing...he quickly take a call.
Sameer: Arjun, some people attack on ETF ambulance and take that vehicle with them.
Arjun got shock to hear this bad news...he jump out from the bad and said:I am coming ...just tell me the location...after disconnecting he zoom out and rush to go...crime scene.
His mind is in full occupied with different thought... He scold his in mind continuously...he knows that already two attempt of murder her done... And he realy on those guards why he is not going with them?
This question make him restless and first time in his life he feel guilty himself.

Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Arjun arrive with in10minutes on crime spot...he shock to see Liza injured...one peramedic taking care of her wound...sameer,Ayesha and shree check the area very keenly...chotu speak with security guards...
Sameer briefly tell Arjun that what happen... As he told him that one vehicle standing in middle of the road blocking the way and other comes behind and block the way to go back... That one mask man open the back door...shout at security guards with Liza to come out...Liza try to call office then he throw gun on her head and injured her...when guard try to protest...some other mask man comes to help him and drag those guards out and beat them brutally... Liza got injured because of that hit and blood oozing...they drag and throw the driver out and set himself on driving seat...one man sit behind and close the close ... He move the vehicle and gone.
Arjun check for some clue...he is busy looking surrounding area and soon find out that the one vehicle oil is leaking...he follow the trail of oil...telling sameer he move his SUV slowly follow those oil marks...little far Arjun see the big amount of oil on road...he understand that the vehicle must stopped here...he check around and go to tea stall...on the road corner.
One man working, look coming him... He give attention to him and ask: ji, babo ji chai banaoon..
Arjun: nahi, kuch poochna hay.
Man: ji, poochiay.
Arjun: (show him his ETF card) Abhi kuch dair pehlay ya haan koi car ruki thi...
Man: ji sahaab ek car aai thi... Kuch kharab ho gai thi... Use nay start honay main time lagaya...bulkay main nay aur ek do logoon nay dhaka lagaya tha...phir who start hui thi.
Arjun: in ko pehchan lo gay jo drive kar rahay thay.
Man: think little and said: haan ji pehchan loon ga.
Arjun take that man with him...go to office and call his artist to come and make sketch... Artist busy with that...Arjun discuss with others member every single detail he have.
Soon, sketch complete and chotu bring that sketch and show everyone...Arjun ask, shree to check if this detail available in his database or not.
Shree take sketch and go to his work station...after ten minutes he enter with excitement and tell him that he find that man... He tell that his name is rakah and he is in wanted list...Arjun pass this information to chotu and ask him to check with his informers...chotu take sketch with him and go out.
It's nearly 9am in the morning when chotu receive call for one of his informer...he quickly come in hall and tell Arjun...
Sameer: Arjun, you and chotu go and get that man here.
Arjun: yeah, it's ok...that is very dangerous area...so, we go in disguise.
Chotu and Arjun goes in that place...that was a local pub full with goons and criminals...one side have boxing ring and two people fight...some gathers around and make noises...Arjun and chotu sitting there...having tea looking if find their man but couldn't ...they are sitting almost one hour...Arjun feel some suspicious gaze on them...he decide to take part in one of activity...chotu ask him to go and play boxing with one man...soon, he knock out that man...suddenly, one Man enter in ring and challenge chotu...Arjun and chotu look that man and recognised him as rakah...chotu see Arjun side and he give him signal...go through...getting his signal chotu active...
Fight start, in beginning rakah beats chotu badly...but soon he manage himself and start beating rakah...chotu is a very good fighter...Arjun has no doubt on him...he keep on eye in pub atmosphere...chotu beat badly rakah at last he knock out and chotu win the fight... Some man comes and gathers around chotu...now, this is Arjun turn to enter and save chotu...he catch rakah and said chotu to go out...but rakah man around them...stopping them to take rakah out...they don't know who's in front of them?
After sometime they all laying on floor...chotu and Arjun take rakah with them at ETF office...putting him in interrogation room...
.Arjun said: chotu, you go and clean your wound...take medicine and bandage your wound.
Chotu nodded and go... While sameer and Arjun start interrogation.
Rakah has no strength...chotu already beat him badly...he start giving them all answer rightly...Arjun and sameer shock to listen all detail...looking each other they decide to take action soon...after hearing all detail he knows that girl life in danger...he have to take action now.
They rush to come out and make plan to raid on that place...they take not much time and soon leave the office and way to go that place where they know she kept... They arrive and gather around that place from all side...they all connect with microphone... Before they enter inside...shree scream on micro phone...sir, they escaping... And then they hear gun shot and shree scream in pain...ETF freeze on their step...try to understand what just happen? Their heart skip beats...their body sweating...their mind stop working and remind them something bad happening.

Part is finish here
Sorry I write this on phone
If find any error please forgive me
Do comments
Thanks
I know all you waiting for sakshi entry
Just wait soon you see her
Rehana25

Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago

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