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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone hope all of you'll are doing super awesome..😉. I'm here with an SS ofcourse on the couple which practically rules my heart but this SS is a birthday gift for my 3am friend Kri(SanskritS)..😃. A very very very happy birthday to you kri hope you like this SS and it manages to make you smile on your special day..🤗 😊-

Part 1
Swayam's POV
Five years, it had been five long years since I had first seen her beautiful face, she had changed quite a lot in the five years. Time had taken a very sweet revenge on her making her even more beautiful and resplendent then before if it was possible. The sight of her drove me nearly mad as I saw her enter the cafe near my office where I had come with my buddies over a cuppa coffee. I stared at her shamelessly taking in all of her through my eyes at one time, lost in her staring at her like an idiot. Back then when I had seen her in college she was healthy and her cheeks a little plump and full. She had been a very lively soul, a bit tom boyish when I had first seen her but I had yet been smitten by her in the first look.. She had worn ragged light blue jeans a white tee under a checkered dark blue shirt folded upto her elbow but she looked pretty to me even in that attire..

Her physical appearance had changed completely she was leaner and slimmer on the whole, compared to before her cheeks not so plump and full now her cheekbones more prominent, her delicate skin as spotless as it ever was, her neck long and graceful as a swan, collarbones sticking out making her look breakable. Moving down I took in her flat stomach and to die for curvy waist. She was clad in a simple white salwaar kameez and a chiffon dupatta and had accessorized with small silver jhumkas dangling on her ears. She had left her hair open and taken them on one shoulder which only intensified her beauty. Dark black kohl lined on the exterior of her eyes increased the beauty of her slight greenish orbs. She had grown from being a carefree college going girl to a beautiful and graceful lady. She defined beauty and perfection for me..

She was with friends talking animatedly with them, her eyes widening, her eyebrows moving up and down in sync with the conversation, munching on a packet of chips, she was moving her hand while talking a chip clasped between her fingers and once she was done talking she popped it inside her mouth satisfied. I smiled seeing this gesture of her's adoring her mannerisms to the extreme. Though she had changed by physical appearance from the inside she was yet the same person with whom I had been smitten by. I went back to observing her face and it was then I noticed that she looked tired and sleepy and had slight bags under her slightly greenish orbs which would sparkle and shine out when she was excited or she would smile.

Those eyes had the capability in them to commit literal muder,one look and it would make the opposite person's thoughts become incoherent and scattered in a jiffy with their beauty. The world then stopped for me she smiled her million dollar smile showing off her perfect white pearlies, if her eyes alone were'nt doing the job of slowly and seductively intoxicating me her smile did the rest to daze me out. She then started heartily laughing on a joke she cracked making the others laugh as hard as she did, the sound of her tinkling laughter reached my ears making me realize I had never encountered something so melodious and beautiful in my 24 years of life.

Yes,I was 25 years of age. I was Swayam Shekhawat, a simple decent lad now working at a top managerial post for a MNC. I was super satisfied with the life I was currently living. I would slog in the day doing work and party hard tri-weekly with my set of buddies which included Vicky,Nil,Bharat,Amar,Simmi,Rinni,Vishakha and Neha all doing good in their respective lives and fields.. I was in my trail of thoughts when I received a slap on the back of my head from Nil who obviously saw me ogling at my girl.

What?? My girl?? I asked myself surprised at my thoughts when did that happen?. She isn't seeing me hell she does'nt even know if someone named Swayam Shekhawat existed on the face of this planet and here I am claiming my right over her. Though internally I wished she would know me, I would'nt waste a single second in claiming my rights over her and making her mine forever. I received a blow harder then the previous time from Nil which snapped me out of my thoughts and I cried out loud in pain,"Owww" and that very precise moment she raised her eyes and they met mine looking deep into her orbs I then knew that I was a goner.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okayy guys done posting the first part could only manage so much kri net problems as I said..😔. I know this part is quite short compared to my other works hehehe saving you guys from a neck seizure..😛.
Hope you'll like it please please please do read, hit the like tab and definitely drop in a comment it really makes my day..
Thanks that's all from me now..😊.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗
Edited by sweet16cash - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
edited
Thanks for this beautiful gift
Nice start 😊
Swayam reminiscing his early meets with Sharon n in present getting lost in her
Beautifully penned every detail👏
Waiting for Sharon's reaction
Edited by SanskritiS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES😛

UNRES

The Majnu is BACK in TOWN 🥳
But seriously this was a brilliant start to a brilliant SS
It will be quite interesting to read how things follow
Like Sharon to know about Swayam and you know
'Idhar Udhar ki baatein vagera vagera' 😆
Great start Kashmi dear 😉
Seriously can't wait to read ahead 😃
Please update soon!!!!!


P.sThanks for the PM 😳
Edited by Tan.vish.K - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Kash...thats so nice that you put up such sweet story on SwaRon for sans birthday...

Happy Birthday Sans...god bless you...

Now this ss is very nice dear...a perfect ss where i get finally to see the tyipcal majnu boy Swayam and his love story...thank you for making this story...you fulfilled my long time desire such kind of story where we have a majnu boy and his dreammy love story...

Thank you for pm Kash and Happy Birthday sanskriti again...

Pratik...
Edited by pratik54000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😲 😲itna small update from u its a shock ur famous for giving long updates 😆 😆

Cash a new ss from u wow u know na how much i luv ur writings toh new ss Sunke hee am super excited. .
Maza aata hai tere write ups padna. . It makes me feel happy from within. .
U know na how much i hate reading so dat is a big complement for u 😆😆

Well chapter one was brilliant. .
D first 3 to 4 paragraphs were swayam has described sharon from his point of view my god dat was so perfectly penned. .
Anyone would fall for a gal just by reading aisa description 😆
Every detail every bit of it was written so beautifully ki i could visualize ki how sharon would be lookin n all dat. .
A really great start to an amazing ss. .
I know ur gonna rock with dis one too. .
So am excited for dis now. .
My gal 😆 😆 haha dat was funny. .
Lookin forward to dis. .
Jaldi update karna 😃
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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happy budday sans
tis was 1 hell of a work kash
sharon's description from swayam's pov
was very beautifully penned
looking forward to ur update 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a fabulous and amazing chapter...
both are seeing each other after a long ... and there are a change in lot...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really beautiful for a gift
too gorgeous
i am waiting eagerly for this one..
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!
Unres only after exam 🥱
But I knw beforehand that it's going to be fun reading it 🤗

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