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So the phone call is from karthik..!! 😉

Originally posted by: Suha95

So the phone call is from karthik..!! 😉

@Sweety:Idhu bongu...I cant wait until new year😳😳😳😳

Sweety, superb pa. appadiye kannu munnadi nadakura maadhiriye irrukku pa. Idha mattum oru director padicha kandippa neenga dhan scrip writer avaroda next projectuku... andha alavu ungaluku thiramai irrukku pa. Kandippa idha use pannite irunga. Congratz... 👏 👏 👏

@Sweety...

Sweety amazing.. This situation was handled very well. I was worried how this case would be handled but u clearly explained that part and cleared my thoughts too.. But im confused about Kaushik's reaction 😕 Is there something behind that?? I loved Lakshmi's counter to Kaushik he deserves all slaps.. Waiting for the new year special update.

Pl.. update asap.. waiting fr NYR treat

Thats a very nice update sweety...

You have purely differentiated Vishnu-Lakshmi love and karthik-raji love..I really admire it..

If vishnu and lakshmi love is fast pacing , practical and cute one and light one..Karthik-raji love is definetly deep , intimate , magical and they are like living as husband-wife..I can say..Love it

Waiting for next update..Thanks again for long update

Happy New year 2014..Sweety

CHAPTER 53

Karthik comes to his room and finds vishnu playing with his mobile...
Karthik: enna daa... innum thoongalaiyaa?
Vishnu: illa machaan... thookkam varalai...
Karthik: Lakshmi OK aayittaangalaa?
Vishnu: mmm... OK... Raji?
Karthik: innum time aagum daa...
Vishnu: mmm...
Karthik:edhaavadhu pannanum daa... ippadiye vittaa rendu perume yosichikitte iruppaanga...
Vishnu: enna pannalaam daa?
Karthik: machaan... sir naalaikku leave eduthukka sonnar illaiyaa?
Vishnu: aamaa... adhukku enna ippo?
Karthik explains him a plan...and vishnu feels excited...
Karthik: eppadi?
Vishnu: super mama...
Karthik: aanaa maranthuttu kooda olari vaikkaadhe...
Vishnu: illa daa... matten...
Karthik: sari Good Night daa...
Vishnu: Good Night...
Both of them sleep off.


NEXT DAY MORNING:

Raji as usual gets up in the morning, makes coffee and calls Karthik.
Karthik: hellooo...
Raji: Good Morning... Coffee ready... keezha variyaa?
Karthik: Please Raji... ennai innum konja neram thoonga vidu...
Raji: innum thoonganumaa? Office ku late aayidum...Karthik...
Karthik: innaikku Office ku leave...
Raji: edhukku?
Karthik: Viswanathan Sir nethu sonnaaru illaiyaa... leave eduthukka solli... please Raji... ippadiye pesittu irundhaa thookkam kalanjidum...
Raji: OK...Ok... Sorry... nee paduthukko...
Raji cuts the call and Lakshmi comes there.
Both of them have coffee and Raji informs Lakshmi about the leave. Lakshmi too agrees that at this point of time, a break is definitely needed.

Both of them keep talking, sharing sweet memories, and after an hour prepare breakfast together. Arranging breakfast on the dining table, both of them take a shower, dress up elegantly and wait for Karthik and Vishnu...
Karthik and Vishnu wake up, get ready and come downstairs. All of them have breakfast.

Karthik: Lakshmi... Vidiyalai Nokki poganum nu ketteengale innaikku polaamaa?
Lakshmi: mmm... polaame...
Karthik: enna Raji?
Raji: mmm... polaam...
Karthik: sari... OK... breakfast mudichittu kilambalaam.
Raji: OK...

Half an hour later, Karthik asks Vishnu to take Raji and Lakshmi there and he will finish some work and come and join them. Karthik gets on his bike and drives away.
Vishnu takes Lakshmi and Raji in his car and drives to "Vidiyalai Nokki".
When they reach the place, Raji fondly remembers her first visit and explains Lakshmi about the organisation, its mentors,etc... .Lakshmi is very much impressed with the beautiful ambience... They go inside and meet Mr. Rajasekar.

He welcomes them with so much warmth and introduce them to his wife sangeetha. Raji and Lakshmi start a casual talk and within sometime feel some togetherness with sangeetha. Raji and Lakshmi help the small children with their drawings.
Rajasekhar explains Vishnu the new tasks they are planning for the benefit of the children.
It's almost lunch time and Karthik reaches there finally.
He is happy that Raji and Lakshmi have mingled with the children there. All of them have Lunch with them and start from there.
When they come out of the building,

Vishnu: machaan bike ingeye irukattumaa? varumbodhu
eduthukkalaamaa?
Karthik gives a furious look at him.
Raji: enga porom Vishnu...
Vishnu: theriyalainga ... Vidiyalai nokki poyittu... ange irundhu vera oru edathukku poganum nu sonnaan... enge nnu enakkum theriyaadhu...
Lakshmi: enna Karthik?
Karthik: vaanga solren... dei... naan bike la varen... neenga moonu perum vaanga...
Karthik Kick starts his bike and Vishnu follows him...

After an hour's drive, they reach a resort on ECR road.
Karthik is already there and waiting.
Lakshmi: enna Karthik idhellaam?
Karthik: Change of atmosphere... unga rendu peraiyum relax panna ...

He gives a key to her and says ... "naanga reception la wait panrom . Neengalum Rajiyum room ku poyittu fresh up aayittu vaanga... room no.203... lift intha corridor end la left la irukku..."
Raji: neenga ?
karthik: neenga poyittu vaanga... appuram naanga porom.
Raji: sari...

Raji and Lakshmi leave to the room. Karthik and Vishnu sit on the couch in the Reception.
Vishnu: ellaam Ok vaa daa?
Karthik: Pakkaavaa ready...
Vishnu: mazhai mattum varaama irundhaa sari...
Karthik: dei... abasakunamaa pesaadhe...
Vishnu: oru pechukku sonnen daa...
Karthik: sari silent aah iru... thaniyaa pesumbodhu Lakshmi kitta olarne nna paaru...
Vishnu: illa daa... avalukkaana surprise illaiyaa...
Karthik: sari OK...
Vishnu: machaan.. avanga varaanga daa...

Raji and Lakshmi come to them. Karthik asks them to wait there itself and along with Vishnu he goes to the room. ten minutes later, they come down, handover the key at the reception and all four of them go inside the resort.

The resort was beautifully maintained and as they reach the sea shore it was very calm and serene. Nothing other than the sounds of waves was audible.

Karthik: innum konja dhooram nadakkareengalaa illai rest venumaa?
Raji: konja neram ukkaaralaam Karthik... manal la nadandhu kaal valikkudhu...
Karthik: sari OK... neenga ukkaarunga... naanga ippove varom...
Raji: enga ? adikkadi escape aayidureenga rendu perum?
Karthik: pch... engayum pogalai Raji... two minutes... idhukku appuram ungalai vittuttu polai... sariyaa...
Lakshmi: vidu Raji... naama ukkaaralaam vaa...
Raji and Lakshmi sit on the sands & Karthik and Vishnu go somewhere near the resort.
Raji: Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: enna Raji...
Raji: manal la veedu kattalaamaa?
Lakshmi: (smiles) mm.. OK...
Both of them start building ... first they make a heap of the sand and then they raise walls and build a palace.

By the time Karthik and Vishnu come back they're almost done with it. Karthik and Vishnu are very surprised with this act and they shower appreciation on Raji and Lakshmi...
Karthik: Raji... enna idhu? chance eh illa ... kollai azhagu nnu solluvaangale appadi irukku...
Vishnu: Lakshmi... intha maathiri talent ellaam irukkaa? sollave illa...
Lakshmi: nee ennaikku ketta? naan sollaama irukkarathukku...
Vishnu: adhu sari...
Karthik and Vishnu take snaps of the sand castle and ofcourse of their darlings too...

Karthik: mudinjidhaa?
Raji: en?
Karthik: kadal la nikkalaam vaa...
Raji: mmm... sari...
Vishnu: vaa... lakshmi...
Lakshmi: Kaiyya kudu...
He gives his hand to her to get up.

Karthik looks at his watch and says... Coffee edhuvum venumaa?
Lakshmi replies... venaa Karthik innum konja neram pogattum.
Vishnu...appo vaanga polaam...
All four of them hold each other's hands and stand in the waves. After sometime they start splashing water on each other and start playing and have fun...
After an hour or so... they feel enough of it and come to the shore. Karthik calls the resort and asks for coffee.
within five minutes a waitor comes there with coffee.
Once they finish it, he takes the empty mugs and leaves.

Karthik asks Raji to come with him.
Raji: enga?
Karthik: vaa polaam naa pesaama varamaattiyaa? en edhukku nnu kelvi kettutte irukke...
Raji: sari... kelvi kekkalai... kochikkaadhe... vaa polaam...
Karthik: machaan ... naanga appadi oru walk poyittu varom...
vishnu: enjoy daa...
Karthik whispers 'all the best' in his ears and moves from there. Raji follows him.

Vishnu turns towards lakshmi who was looking at the sand castle and says 'vaa Lakshmi... naamalum polaam'
lakshmi: enge?
Vishnu: avangalai maathiriye... oru walk...
Lakshmi: unakku sonthamaa yosikka theriyaadhaa?
Vishnu: indha idea ve ennodadhu dhaan...
lakshmi: sari OK...OK... kochikkaadhe... vaa polaam...
Both of them walk in the opposite direction.

KARTHIK & RAJI:

Once they start walking, Raji holds karthik's hand and he smiles.
Raji: enna sirippu?
Karthik: modhal thadavai naama outing vandhappo naan vaa polaam nu unakku kai kuduthaa oru badhil sonniye adhu nyaabagam vanduchi... adhaan sirichen...
Raji: oh adhuvaa?
Karthik: mmm...
Raji: Karthik...
Karthik: mmm...
Raji: intha ulagathula unakku romba pudichadhu edhu?
karthik: unnoda peyar...
Raji: en appadi?
Karthik: en peyarai yaarum azhaithaal en thalai mattum thaane thirumbugiradhu... un peyar kaadhil vizhundhaal en ullamum allavaa aavalaay thirumba seigirathu...
Raji: Super... azhagaa irukku...
Karthik: nee azhagaa irukke... roja poo maathiri... naan thaan un pakkathula mullu maathiri irukken...
Raji: oru kanamum ennai vittu piriyaadhe... unnaal thaan en azhagirku paadhukaappu ... nee illai endraal ennai kasakki vida karthirukkiradhu indha ulagam endru kenjiyadhu roja poo mullidam...
Karthik: Raji...
Raji: I LOVE YOU...
Karthik kisses her hand and says ME TOO...


VISHNU & LAKSHMI:

Vishnu and Lakshmi walk through the sands ...
Lakshmi: Vishnu...
Vishnu: enna Lakshmi?
Lakshmi: unga amma appa kitta pesittaangalaa?
Vishnu: innum illai nnu nenakkiren...
Lakshmi: naan amma kitta sollidavaa?
Vishnu: un ishtam... unakku sollanum nu thonuchi nnaa sollu...
Lakshmi: sari unga appa othukkalai nnaa?
Vishnu: othukittaa kootu kudumbam... othukkalai nnaa thani kuduthanam ... avvalavu thaan... simple...
Lakshmi: enna daa ivvalo easy yaa sollitte?
Vishnu: aamaa Lakshmi... vishayathai pottu vala vala nnu izhukka koodaadhu... vettu onnu thundu rendu nnu thelivaa pesi mudivu pannidanum...
Lakshmi: parkaradhukku maida maavu maathiri irundhaalum unakkulaiyum moolai irukku pola irukke
Vishnu: aamaa Lakshmi... irukkaradhu oru moolai adhai anaavasiyamaa selavu panna koodaadhunnu adhigamaa use panradhille...
Lakshmi: adhu sari...
they keep walking for some more time and suddenly Vishnu goes behind Lakshmi and closes her eyes with his palms..
Lakshmi: ey... Vishnu ... enna panre...
Vishnu: pesaama vaa Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: hey... naan vizha poren...
Vishnu: onnum vizha maatte... naan koottittu poren illa ... vaa...
after coming further, he stops her.
He removes his hands and says "ippo kannai thara"
Lakshmi opens her eyes and the place was beautifully decorated with flowers and balloons... a table was arranged in the centre with a cake on it ... the sea breeze was flowing calmly and lakshmi is awestruck
seeing this...
Lakshmi: enna Vishnu idhellaam?
Vishnu comes near her, takes a small gift from his pocket and gives her.
Lakshmi: idhu enna? edhukku?
Vishnu: solren... pirichu paaru...
As Lakshmi opens the gift Vishnu gets behind her. He hugs her from behind , kisses on her cheek and whispers in her ears..."HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY LOVE..."
Lakshmi is completely bowled over by his gesture and more to her suprise appears a Diamond Ring in the gift.
Vishnu takes it from her and puts it on her finger. She turns her head and kisses on his cheek saying "Thank you so much Vishnu..."

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the celebration continues in next chapter...

Chapter 54... coming soon...


CHAPTER 54