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suhasini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

So the phone call is from karthik..!! 😉

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sweety

@sweety16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: Suha95
So the phone call is from karthik..!! 😉

SSSHHH...

Suhaaa...ITS SUSPENSE...😉

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anithu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

@Sweety:Idhu bongu...I cant wait until new year😳😳😳😳

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Devi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Sweety, superb pa. appadiye kannu munnadi nadakura maadhiriye irrukku pa. Idha mattum oru director padicha kandippa neenga dhan scrip writer avaroda next projectuku... andha alavu ungaluku thiramai irrukku pa. Kandippa idha use pannite irunga. Congratz... 👏 👏 👏

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Mathi

@mathimathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

@Sweety...

First of all Congratulations Dear for crossing 50 chapters... you have entertained us so much with your story..I am very much amazed by your writing skills..the way your dialgoues are written appadiye andha scenes-a kann munnadi kondu varudhu.. I used to watch old episodes of office earlier when im stressed out...nowadays hav added ur story also to that list 😃..

The last 2 parts have been very emotional.. Loved the reaction of K, V, L, their friendship and concern towards Raji and how Raji bursted out her anger on seeing Kaushik.. Kaushik deserves more than these slaps..

Keep rocking 👍🏼..

Waiting for new year special

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Sweety amazing.. This situation was handled very well. I was worried how this case would be handled but u clearly explained that part and cleared my thoughts too.. But im confused about Kaushik's reaction 😕 Is there something behind that?? I loved Lakshmi's counter to Kaushik he deserves all slaps.. Waiting for the new year special update.

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ababab

@ababab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Pl.. update asap.. waiting fr NYR treat

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sweety

@sweety16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

CHAPTER 52

Raji's mobile rings ...
Raji opens her handbag and takes her mobile out and it stops ringing.
Lakshmi: yaaru Raji call panradhu?
Raji: theriyalai ... cut aayiduchi...
The mobile rings again...
Raji looks at it and it stops again...
Madhan finds something fishy and looks at Karthik.
Karthik was standing calm with his hands folded behind.
Madhan comes to him and says " appo naan kilamburen daa..."
Karthik: Thanks daa...
Madhan: Bye Vishnu...
Vishnu: Bye... machaan...
Madhan leaves...

Raji's mobile rings again...
Lakshmi: yaaru Raji? eduthu pesu...
Raji: edukkarathukulle cut aayidudhu Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: neeye thirumba call pannu...
Raji: mmm... sari...
Raji tries back the number... It's engaged...
Raji: engage varudhu...
And it rings again... Raji answers immediately... but the call is disconnected...
Lakshmi: enna nadakkuthu? vaa.. Raji ... ippove poyittu
Mahesh sir kitta complain pannalaam...
Vishnu: Lakshmi... oru nimisham iru... Raji indha number yaarukkaavadhu kudutheengalaa?
Raji: illaye...
Raji's mobile rings again...
Vishnu: inga paarunga ... naama ivvalo padhattamaa irukkom... oruthan sambanthame illaame eppadi silent aah ninnittu irukkaannu...
Raji & Lakshmi: adhaane... enna Karthik??
Karthik: enna?
Raji: enna vilayaaduriyaa? yaaro enakku continuous aaah phone adichitte irukkaanga... kandukka ve maattengare?
Karthik: yaaru panna poraa?
Raji: theriyalaiye...

Lakshmi: ore kozhappamaa irukku...
Vishnu: iru... Raji... intha phone no yaar yaarukku theriyum?
Raji: Karthik ku mattum thaan theriyum...
(while saying this something stikes her and she looks at him and he winks at her and smiles...)
Lakshmi: adappaavi... idhu un vela thaanaa?
Raji: naanga inga ippadi tension aagittu irundhaa ... silent aaah intha velai panriyaa nee? unnai...
She raises her hand to beat him...
Karthik goes a step backward and...
Karthik: ey... chummaa unga ellaarudaiya mood konjam maathalaam nu play pannaa neenga ennadaa nnaa idhukku innamum avvalo tension aagareenga... adhaan ellaam nalla badiyaa mudinji pochu illa... free yaa irunga...
Vishnu: kedi daa nee...
Karthik: Thanks for the compliment ... machaan...
All of them laugh...

Vishnu: dei... neenga ingaye irunga... naan vandi eduthittu varen...
Karthik: OK daa...
Vishnu brings the car and all of them get in.
Vishnu: Raji ... Karthik , Lakshmi ya first drop pannittu, appuram on the way ungalai drop pannittu naa nveettukku poren... OK ... vaa?
Raji: modhalla saappida edhuvum vaangi kudunga... enakku romba pasikkudhu... appuramaa veettukku polaam...
Lakshmi: hey... nee lunch saappidalaiyaa?
Raji: break fast kooda saaappidalai...
Vishnu: ayyayyooo...
Karthik: edhukku saappidaama irukke?
Raji: kaalaile 6 manikkellaam kilambitten... bus vazhiyile engeyum niruthalai, sari chennai ponadhum lunch saappidalam nu nenachen... inga vandhu unakku call pannen, neenga vandhadhum neraa inga vandhttom...
Karthik: sorry Raji... Mahesh sir sonna time ku reach aaganum nu yosichikitte irundhadhula.. ...unnnai saaptiyaa nnu kooda kekkale..pch...
Lakshmi: aamaa Raji... enakkum thonalai... sorry...
Raji: ippo edhukku sorry ellaam... Karthik vandhadhum saappida polaam nu sollanum nu dhaan bus station la wait pannumbodhu nenachen... aanaa Mahesh sir vara sonnaaru nnu sonna udane ... enakku vera edhuvume thonalai...
Vishnu: adadaa... enga poganum nu sollitteenga nna naan paattukku drive pannuven... neenga porumaiyaa discuss pannitte varalaam...
Karthik: aamaa illa... enna saappidare Raji?
Raji: edhuvaa irundhaalum Ok... bayangaramaa pasikkudhu...
Karthik: dei... appo pakkathuleye edhaavadhu restaurant irundhaa polaam daa...
Vishnu: done...

Vishnu starts the car and within twenty minutes he drives into a restaurant.
Karthik orders food for Raji and some lighter bites for rest of them. They chit chat and eat happily.

Finishing the lunch, they get into the car and Vishnu drives to Karthik - Lakshmi's residence... On the way...
Lakshmi: Raji... nee ippo kandippaa veettukku poganumaa?
Raji: ennaachu Lakshmi?
Lakshmi: innaikku oru naal engaloda irundhuden please...
Karthik: athai kitta enna sollanum nu yosikkiriyaa?
Raji: illa... paravaa illai... sollikkalaam...
Karthik: ennna sollikkalaam?
Raji: illai ... eppavume oorukku ponaa...madhiyam
saaptadhukappuram thaan kilambuven...innaikku kaalaile kilambanum naa edhukku nnu ketta appa kitta office la velai irukku... vara solli phone vandhuchi nnu sollittu dhaan vandhen... adhanaale athaikku call panni office la work mudiyalai... night shift continue pannanum nu sollidalaam..
Karthik: mmm... appo OK...
Lakshmi: neeyum iru Vishnu...
Karthik: aamaa ... daa...
Vishnu: sari... unga ishtam...
They reach home and get inside. All of them settle in the living room feeling extremely tired.

Karthik: Raji... modhalla athai kku call panni sollidu...
Raji: sari...
Karthik and Vishnu go to his room and after freshing up come downstairs. In the meantime, Raji calls her athai and informs her that she'll not be coming home in the night. Lakshmi gets freshed up and makes tea. Raji takes a shower and feels a bit relaxed after that and comes to the living room. All of them have tea.
Vishnu: machaan... enna pannalaam daa?
Lakshmi: edhaavadhu movie parkalaama?
Raji: enna movie?
Lakshmi: edhaavadhu... light hearted aah... some feel good movie...
Raji: appadinna???
Vishnu: adhu onnum illa Raji..Comedy movie ngrathai thaan Lakshmi style aah solraa...
Lakshmi: adappaavi...
Karthik: Lakshmi... unga viruppathukku yetha maathiri oru movie irukku... aanaa old movie nnaa OK vaa?
Lakshmi: no problem... enakku nallaa relax aaganum...
Karthik switches on the TV, inserts a DVD and plays it...

Vishnu: machaan... enna padam daa?
Karthik: Kaadhalikka neramillai...
Vishnu: dei... semma padam daa...
Raji: muthuraaman nadichadhu thaane? enakkum romba pidikkum...
Lakshmi: aamaa... enakkum pidikkum...
Karthik: appuram enna? play pannidalaamaa?
Vishnu: ready... one... two ...three... start...
The movie starts and all four of them watch it so interestingly enjoying the funny sequences, dialogues, songs, romance, dance, and cracking jokes and counter dialogues along with the characters of the movie...
Three and half hours pass just like that and by the end of the film... everyone is tired but relaxed... their cheeks are aching due to the laugh riots but have tears in their eyes for the overwhelming feel the journey of watching the movie created.

karthik goes into the kitchen and gets coffee for everyone. He finds only Lakshmi and Vishnu in the living room.
Karthik: Lakshmi... Raji enge?
Lakshmi: maadikku poyirukkaa...
Karthik: inthaanga coffee...
Lakshmi: thank you...
Karthik: you're welcome... vishnu... coffee daa...
Vishnu: thanks machaan...
Karthik goes upstairs with two mugs of coffee.

IN THE LIVING ROOM:

Vishnu is browsing something on his laptop. Lakshmi comes and sits beside him.
Lakshmi: hey... enna daa panre?
Vishnu: chummaa thaan... facebook updates...
She moves closer to him, holds his hand and puts her head on his shoulder. Vishnu gets amazed by her act, but feels happy too... he smiles and...
Vishnu: ennaachu Lakshmi?
Lakshmi: onnum illai...
Vishnu: padam parthu sirichittu irundhaa... maranthutte nnu nenachen...
Lakshmi: edhai maranthutten?
Vishnu: innaikku Mahesh sir office la nadandhadhu...
Lakshmi: mmm...
Vishnu: naan ninaikkave illa... nee kaushik ah adippe nnu...
Lakshmi: enakkum puriyalai Vishnu... en enakku avvalavu kovam vandhadhu nnu...
Vishnu: enakku theriyum...
Lakshmi: enna theriyum???
Vishnu: antha idathula Kaushik ku badhilaa unga appaa vai partha maathiri unakku thonuchi thaane?
Lakshmi: (exclaims) eppadi daa?
Vishnu: ennamo thonuchi...
Lakshmi: adhaan eppadi nnu kekkaren?
Vishnu: intha maathiri ladies matter la edho thappu panni thaane avarai unga amma pirinjittaanga?
Lakshmi: nijamaave unakku appadi thonuchaa?
Vishnu: aamaa...
She hugs him and says..."I LOVE YOU VISHNU..."
Vishnu: I LOVE YOU TOO Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: enakku thookkam varudhu...
Vishnu: sari... paduthukko... Good Night...
She kisses on his cheek and says "Good Night"
Vishnu is very happy and Lakshmi gets up.
As she leaves to her room, he calls her...
Vishnu: Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: enna?
Vishnu: idhukku peru dhaan Good Night kiss aah?
Lakshmi: dei... adangu daa...
Both of them laugh and she goes to sleep.

IN THE TERRACE:

Karthik comes with the coffee and sees Raji sitting in their favourite place. He comes and sits behind her. Both of them have coffee quietly... Finishing it, Raji looks at Karthik and asks him...
Raji: Karthik... naan konja neram un madiyila thalai vachi paduthukkavaa?
While she asks this Raji looks like a child to him which is longing for arms to cuddle and embrace to feel safe and secure.
Karthik is very much moved and gets very emotional...
He becomes speechless, nods a yes, stretches his legs and makes her lie on his lap comfortably.
Raji holds his hand and closes her eyes.
Karthik bends and kisses on her forehead and gently embraces her. Few minutes later...
Raji: Karthik...
Karthik: sollu... Raji...
Raji: enakku manasu sangadamaa irukkumbodhu ...enga amma... enna velai senjikittu irundhaalum avangalai koottittu vandhu ...enga veettu mutrathula ukkara solli ippadi thaan avanga madiyila paduthukkuven... pathu nimusham appadi irundhaa...manasellaam ilagi, baaram kuranji... oru maathiri santhoshamaa aayidum...
Karthik: sari... amma nyaabagamaa irukkaa?
Raji: mmm...hmmm...
Karthik: vera enna?
Raji: ippo unnoda madiyila paduthukittu irukkumbodhum adhe maathiri manasellaam lesaana maathiri irukku...
Karthik smiles...
Raji: I LOVE YOU KARTHIK...
Karthik: I LOVE YOU TOO...
Raji: Karthik...
Karthik: nadanthadhai marakka muyarchi pannu Raji... adhu avvalo easy illa... but...you should try to overcome... illennaa adhu manasai kolavi maathiri arichikitte irukkum...
Raji: naan adhai pathi yosikkalai...
Karthik: vera enna?
Raji: Kaushik oda wife ah nenachaa kashtamaa irukku Karthik,.. avangalukku evvalavu kashtamaa irukkum ivanai pathina unmai theriyumbodhu...
Karthik: mmm...
Raji: Financial aah Kashta paduvangalo?
Karthik: adhellaam illai... avangalum work panraanga... enakku therinji ... unmai theriyumbodhu intha maathiri aal kooda irukka venaam nu yosippanga...
Raji: appo avanoda kuzhandhai...
Karthik: innoru Lakshmi yaa valarum...
Raji: innaikku ava Kaushik ah appadi aranjiduvaa nnu naan ethirparkave illai...
Karthik: Lakshmi kku antha edathula avaloda appa therinjiruppaaru.. intha maathiri edho thappu panna poyi thaane thannoda amma divorce vaangi thani aalaa vaazhndhukittu siramapattu thannai valarthirukkaanga nnu thoni irukkum... adhaan avvalavu kovam vandhuchi avalukku...
Raji:mmm... puriyudhu...
Karthik: thookkam varudhaa?
Raji: aamaa...
Karthik: sari vaa keezha polaam...
Both of them get up and come downstairs...

Chapter 53... NEW YEAR SPECIAL... SCROLL DOWN...

CHAPTER 53

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Thats a very nice update sweety...

You have purely differentiated Vishnu-Lakshmi love and karthik-raji love..I really admire it..

If vishnu and lakshmi love is fast pacing , practical and cute one and light one..Karthik-raji love is definetly deep , intimate , magical and they are like living as husband-wife..I can say..Love it

Waiting for next update..Thanks again for long update

Happy New year 2014..Sweety

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#330

CHAPTER 53

Karthik comes to his room and finds vishnu playing with his mobile...
Karthik: enna daa... innum thoongalaiyaa?
Vishnu: illa machaan... thookkam varalai...
Karthik: Lakshmi OK aayittaangalaa?
Vishnu: mmm... OK... Raji?
Karthik: innum time aagum daa...
Vishnu: mmm...
Karthik:edhaavadhu pannanum daa... ippadiye vittaa rendu perume yosichikitte iruppaanga...
Vishnu: enna pannalaam daa?
Karthik: machaan... sir naalaikku leave eduthukka sonnar illaiyaa?
Vishnu: aamaa... adhukku enna ippo?
Karthik explains him a plan...and vishnu feels excited...
Karthik: eppadi?
Vishnu: super mama...
Karthik: aanaa maranthuttu kooda olari vaikkaadhe...
Vishnu: illa daa... matten...
Karthik: sari Good Night daa...
Vishnu: Good Night...
Both of them sleep off.

NEXT DAY MORNING:

Raji as usual gets up in the morning, makes coffee and calls Karthik.
Karthik: hellooo...
Raji: Good Morning... Coffee ready... keezha variyaa?
Karthik: Please Raji... ennai innum konja neram thoonga vidu...
Raji: innum thoonganumaa? Office ku late aayidum...Karthik...
Karthik: innaikku Office ku leave...
Raji: edhukku?
Karthik: Viswanathan Sir nethu sonnaaru illaiyaa... leave eduthukka solli... please Raji... ippadiye pesittu irundhaa thookkam kalanjidum...
Raji: OK...Ok... Sorry... nee paduthukko...
Raji cuts the call and Lakshmi comes there.
Both of them have coffee and Raji informs Lakshmi about the leave. Lakshmi too agrees that at this point of time, a break is definitely needed.

Both of them keep talking, sharing sweet memories, and after an hour prepare breakfast together. Arranging breakfast on the dining table, both of them take a shower, dress up elegantly and wait for Karthik and Vishnu...
Karthik and Vishnu wake up, get ready and come downstairs. All of them have breakfast.

Karthik: Lakshmi... Vidiyalai Nokki poganum nu ketteengale innaikku polaamaa?
Lakshmi: mmm... polaame...
Karthik: enna Raji?
Raji: mmm... polaam...
Karthik: sari... OK... breakfast mudichittu kilambalaam.
Raji: OK...

Half an hour later, Karthik asks Vishnu to take Raji and Lakshmi there and he will finish some work and come and join them. Karthik gets on his bike and drives away.
Vishnu takes Lakshmi and Raji in his car and drives to "Vidiyalai Nokki".
When they reach the place, Raji fondly remembers her first visit and explains Lakshmi about the organisation, its mentors,etc... .Lakshmi is very much impressed with the beautiful ambience... They go inside and meet Mr. Rajasekar.

He welcomes them with so much warmth and introduce them to his wife sangeetha. Raji and Lakshmi start a casual talk and within sometime feel some togetherness with sangeetha. Raji and Lakshmi help the small children with their drawings.
Rajasekhar explains Vishnu the new tasks they are planning for the benefit of the children.
It's almost lunch time and Karthik reaches there finally.
He is happy that Raji and Lakshmi have mingled with the children there. All of them have Lunch with them and start from there.
When they come out of the building,

Vishnu: machaan bike ingeye irukattumaa? varumbodhu
eduthukkalaamaa?
Karthik gives a furious look at him.
Raji: enga porom Vishnu...
Vishnu: theriyalainga ... Vidiyalai nokki poyittu... ange irundhu vera oru edathukku poganum nu sonnaan... enge nnu enakkum theriyaadhu...
Lakshmi: enna Karthik?
Karthik: vaanga solren... dei... naan bike la varen... neenga moonu perum vaanga...
Karthik Kick starts his bike and Vishnu follows him...

After an hour's drive, they reach a resort on ECR road.
Karthik is already there and waiting.
Lakshmi: enna Karthik idhellaam?
Karthik: Change of atmosphere... unga rendu peraiyum relax panna ...

He gives a key to her and says ... "naanga reception la wait panrom . Neengalum Rajiyum room ku poyittu fresh up aayittu vaanga... room no.203... lift intha corridor end la left la irukku..."
Raji: neenga ?
karthik: neenga poyittu vaanga... appuram naanga porom.
Raji: sari...

Raji and Lakshmi leave to the room. Karthik and Vishnu sit on the couch in the Reception.
Vishnu: ellaam Ok vaa daa?
Karthik: Pakkaavaa ready...
Vishnu: mazhai mattum varaama irundhaa sari...
Karthik: dei... abasakunamaa pesaadhe...
Vishnu: oru pechukku sonnen daa...
Karthik: sari silent aah iru... thaniyaa pesumbodhu Lakshmi kitta olarne nna paaru...
Vishnu: illa daa... avalukkaana surprise illaiyaa...
Karthik: sari OK...
Vishnu: machaan.. avanga varaanga daa...

Raji and Lakshmi come to them. Karthik asks them to wait there itself and along with Vishnu he goes to the room. ten minutes later, they come down, handover the key at the reception and all four of them go inside the resort.

The resort was beautifully maintained and as they reach the sea shore it was very calm and serene. Nothing other than the sounds of waves was audible.

Karthik: innum konja dhooram nadakkareengalaa illai rest venumaa?
Raji: konja neram ukkaaralaam Karthik... manal la nadandhu kaal valikkudhu...
Karthik: sari OK... neenga ukkaarunga... naanga ippove varom...
Raji: enga ? adikkadi escape aayidureenga rendu perum?
Karthik: pch... engayum pogalai Raji... two minutes... idhukku appuram ungalai vittuttu polai... sariyaa...
Lakshmi: vidu Raji... naama ukkaaralaam vaa...
Raji and Lakshmi sit on the sands & Karthik and Vishnu go somewhere near the resort.
Raji: Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: enna Raji...
Raji: manal la veedu kattalaamaa?
Lakshmi: (smiles) mm.. OK...
Both of them start building ... first they make a heap of the sand and then they raise walls and build a palace.

By the time Karthik and Vishnu come back they're almost done with it. Karthik and Vishnu are very surprised with this act and they shower appreciation on Raji and Lakshmi...
Karthik: Raji... enna idhu? chance eh illa ... kollai azhagu nnu solluvaangale appadi irukku...
Vishnu: Lakshmi... intha maathiri talent ellaam irukkaa? sollave illa...
Lakshmi: nee ennaikku ketta? naan sollaama irukkarathukku...
Vishnu: adhu sari...
Karthik and Vishnu take snaps of the sand castle and ofcourse of their darlings too...

Karthik: mudinjidhaa?
Raji: en?
Karthik: kadal la nikkalaam vaa...
Raji: mmm... sari...
Vishnu: vaa... lakshmi...
Lakshmi: Kaiyya kudu...
He gives his hand to her to get up.

Karthik looks at his watch and says... Coffee edhuvum venumaa?
Lakshmi replies... venaa Karthik innum konja neram pogattum.
Vishnu...appo vaanga polaam...
All four of them hold each other's hands and stand in the waves. After sometime they start splashing water on each other and start playing and have fun...
After an hour or so... they feel enough of it and come to the shore. Karthik calls the resort and asks for coffee.
within five minutes a waitor comes there with coffee.
Once they finish it, he takes the empty mugs and leaves.

Karthik asks Raji to come with him.
Raji: enga?
Karthik: vaa polaam naa pesaama varamaattiyaa? en edhukku nnu kelvi kettutte irukke...
Raji: sari... kelvi kekkalai... kochikkaadhe... vaa polaam...
Karthik: machaan ... naanga appadi oru walk poyittu varom...
vishnu: enjoy daa...
Karthik whispers 'all the best' in his ears and moves from there. Raji follows him.

Vishnu turns towards lakshmi who was looking at the sand castle and says 'vaa Lakshmi... naamalum polaam'
lakshmi: enge?
Vishnu: avangalai maathiriye... oru walk...
Lakshmi: unakku sonthamaa yosikka theriyaadhaa?
Vishnu: indha idea ve ennodadhu dhaan...
lakshmi: sari OK...OK... kochikkaadhe... vaa polaam...
Both of them walk in the opposite direction.

KARTHIK & RAJI:

Once they start walking, Raji holds karthik's hand and he smiles.
Raji: enna sirippu?
Karthik: modhal thadavai naama outing vandhappo naan vaa polaam nu unakku kai kuduthaa oru badhil sonniye adhu nyaabagam vanduchi... adhaan sirichen...
Raji: oh adhuvaa?
Karthik: mmm...
Raji: Karthik...
Karthik: mmm...
Raji: intha ulagathula unakku romba pudichadhu edhu?
karthik: unnoda peyar...
Raji: en appadi?
Karthik: en peyarai yaarum azhaithaal en thalai mattum thaane thirumbugiradhu... un peyar kaadhil vizhundhaal en ullamum allavaa aavalaay thirumba seigirathu...
Raji: Super... azhagaa irukku...
Karthik: nee azhagaa irukke... roja poo maathiri... naan thaan un pakkathula mullu maathiri irukken...
Raji: oru kanamum ennai vittu piriyaadhe... unnaal thaan en azhagirku paadhukaappu ... nee illai endraal ennai kasakki vida karthirukkiradhu indha ulagam endru kenjiyadhu roja poo mullidam...
Karthik: Raji...
Raji: I LOVE YOU...
Karthik kisses her hand and says ME TOO...

VISHNU & LAKSHMI:

Vishnu and Lakshmi walk through the sands ...
Lakshmi: Vishnu...
Vishnu: enna Lakshmi?
Lakshmi: unga amma appa kitta pesittaangalaa?
Vishnu: innum illai nnu nenakkiren...
Lakshmi: naan amma kitta sollidavaa?
Vishnu: un ishtam... unakku sollanum nu thonuchi nnaa sollu...
Lakshmi: sari unga appa othukkalai nnaa?
Vishnu: othukittaa kootu kudumbam... othukkalai nnaa thani kuduthanam ... avvalavu thaan... simple...
Lakshmi: enna daa ivvalo easy yaa sollitte?
Vishnu: aamaa Lakshmi... vishayathai pottu vala vala nnu izhukka koodaadhu... vettu onnu thundu rendu nnu thelivaa pesi mudivu pannidanum...
Lakshmi: parkaradhukku maida maavu maathiri irundhaalum unakkulaiyum moolai irukku pola irukke
Vishnu: aamaa Lakshmi... irukkaradhu oru moolai adhai anaavasiyamaa selavu panna koodaadhunnu adhigamaa use panradhille...
Lakshmi: adhu sari...
they keep walking for some more time and suddenly Vishnu goes behind Lakshmi and closes her eyes with his palms..
Lakshmi: ey... Vishnu ... enna panre...
Vishnu: pesaama vaa Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: hey... naan vizha poren...
Vishnu: onnum vizha maatte... naan koottittu poren illa ... vaa...
after coming further, he stops her.
He removes his hands and says "ippo kannai thara"
Lakshmi opens her eyes and the place was beautifully decorated with flowers and balloons... a table was arranged in the centre with a cake on it ... the sea breeze was flowing calmly and lakshmi is awestruck
seeing this...
Lakshmi: enna Vishnu idhellaam?
Vishnu comes near her, takes a small gift from his pocket and gives her.
Lakshmi: idhu enna? edhukku?
Vishnu: solren... pirichu paaru...
As Lakshmi opens the gift Vishnu gets behind her. He hugs her from behind , kisses on her cheek and whispers in her ears..."HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY LOVE..."
Lakshmi is completely bowled over by his gesture and more to her suprise appears a Diamond Ring in the gift.
Vishnu takes it from her and puts it on her finger. She turns her head and kisses on his cheek saying "Thank you so much Vishnu..."

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the celebration continues in next chapter...

Chapter 54... coming soon...

CHAPTER 54

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago