FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106

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anithu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Sema quick and fast sweety..

Love their resort plan too..Hope in reality if it happens..it will be gr8..

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Mathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Sema update sweety

2 chapters on the same day..thank u ..🤗

Loved their plans...

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sukanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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omg sweety u r jst awesum..wish u a happy new year...i hav becum ur fan..wattta storyline...n d way u write n present t...hata off sweety, luv u, keep up ds gud wrk...vcan visualise each n evry scene...lov all d chapters n nw canttt wait fr d nxt part...kr treat...plzzz update soon...😉😆😊😛

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Ramya05

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Understanding, touching, romantic... Adjectives fail me... Love the story line and ur clear thinking...

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Smiles-20

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thanks for the New Year treat Sweety, both parts were amazing to read. Love how the friends are spending their time together.

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Devi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Super sweety. Nijamave idhu new year gift for us... Innum niraiya yedhir paarkirom pa... good keep it up...

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

lovely updates Sweety...thanks for the new year treat...

loved to see Vishnu and Lakshmi 's cute romance...Karthik has arranged really a sweet surprise...

Karthik mischievously calling raji to change her mood was cute...

thanks for the double treat...sweety...

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sweety

@sweety16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

CHAPTER 54

ON THE SEASHORE:

VISHNU & LAKSHMI:

Lakshmi is very happy and is full of tears. She turns towards vishnu and says..."thank you so much" and bursts into tears...

Vishnu hugs her and says..."azhaadhe Lakshmi... nee santhosha paduve nnu parthaa ippadi azhare"

He wipes her tears and asks... "pidichirukkaa...illaiyaaa?"

Lakshmi...romba pidichirukku...

Vishnu... appo vaa... polaam...

Both of them go near the table.

Lakshmi is very happy with the arrangements and she says the same...

Vishnu takes the champegne bottle and asks... celebration start pannidalaamaa?

Lakshmi nods a yes and says "mmm..."

Vishnu tries to open it but Lakshmi interrupts saying..."hey... Vishnu... Karthik, Raji ya kooppidu daa ..."

Vishnu calls Karthik...

KARTHIK & RAJI:

Karthik and Raji are walking on the sands holding hands.

Raji: Karthik... romba dhooram vandhuttom pola irukke...

Karthik: enna? bayamaa irukkaa?

Raji: bayam ellaam illai... thirumbi avvalavu dhooram nadakkanum illaiyaa...

Karthik: aamaa... pesikitte nadandhadhula gavanikkalai... vaa polaam...

They turn and start walking towards the resort...

Raji: Karthik...

Karthik: enna?

RAji: Karthik...

Karthik: enna raji?

Raji: onnum illai...

Karthik: ennamo kekkanum nu nenakkire... aaarambichitte ille... kelu..

Raji: adhu vandhu... nee ennai thappaa ninaikkadhe...

Karthik: build up podhum... point ku vaa...

Raji: illa... venaa...

Karthik: adi venumaa unakku? ozhungaa enna nnu sollu...

Raji: kaalaile enga pone nee? engala mattum anuppittu lunch time ku dhaan vandhe...marubadiyum nee thaniyaa inga vandhutte...ingeyum adikkadi escape aayidare... enna pannittu irukke?

Karthik laughs at the way she asked very innocently...

Raji: enna sirikkare? solla koodaadhu nnaa solla venaa...

Karthik: appaddi ellaam onnum illai...

Raji: illai... kekka koodaadhu nnu dhaan nenachen... aanaa...

Karthik: enna vishayam nu mandaikkulla kolavi arichikitte irunduchaa?

Raji: mmm... aamaa...illai..illai...

Karthik: (laughs) aamaa vaa? illaiyaa?

Raji: idhukku thaan neeyaa solra varaikkum kekka koodaadhu nnu nenachen...

Karthik: aanaa kekkaama irukka mudiyalai ... appadi thaane?

Raji: mmm... ivvalo neramaa neeye solluve nnu wait pannittu irundhen... nee enna daa nnaa ... adhai pathi ye pesalai...

Karthik: solla koodiya dhaa irundhaa naane solli irukka maattenaa?

Raji: appadi nnaa?

Karthik: inga paaru Raji... naan edhu senjaalum un kitta sollittu dhaan seyyanumaa enna?

Raji: appo... solla maattiyaa?

Karthik: therinjikittu nee enna panna pore?

Raji: ayyaa... saami... thappu dhaan... nee sollave venaa... inime naan edhuvume kekkamaatten... aalai vidu...

Karthik: illai.. poru... naan sollidaren...

Raji: venaa... enakku thevai illai...

Karthik: appadi sonnaa... vittuduvomaa?

Raji: nee onnum solla venaa...

Karthik: naan solradhai kelu Raji...

Karthik's phone rings...

Karthik: enna daa? mmm... pakkathula dhaan irukkom... sari... vandhidarom...

Raji keeps quiet and Karthik also remains silent...

In few minutes, they reach Vishnu & Lakshmi and Raji is very surprised to see the party like arrangements. she turns towards karthik to ask but again keeps quiet. Looking this, Karthik smiles.

Seeing them, Lakshmi comes and hugs Raji... , turns towards Karthik and says "THANK YOUU SO MUCH ... KARTHIK..."

Karthik shrugs his shoulders ... and simply smiles

Raji is completely clueless of her surroundings and doesn't understand a bit.

Looking at her ... Vishnu asks Karthik : enna machaan Raji ippadi oru shock reaction kudukkaraanga.?

Karthik:adhu vandhu...

Vishnu: sari.. iru... naane sollidaren... Raji... innaikku Lakshmi ku birthday...

Raji is very surprised as she didn't expect this...

Raji: ennadhu? Lakshmi oda birthday vaa? en yaarume enakku sollalai???

She hugs Lakshmi and says "HAPPY BIRTHDAY LAKSHMI..."

Lakshmi smiles and says Thank you Raji...

Karthik also wishes ... "HAPPY BIRTHDAY LAKSHMI..."

Lakshmi smiles saying..."Thank you.. Karthik..."

Vishnu: celebration start pannidalaamaa?

All of them gather at the table, Vishnu opens the champegne bottle, Karthik lights the candles on the cake, Lakshmi blows them and cuts the cake... Raji, Karthik and Vishnu sing birthday song for her.

Lakshmi gives the cake to all...

Lakshmi: Thank you Karthik...

Karthik: edhukku Lakshmi?

Lakshmi: illai... kaalai le irundhu ivvalavu arrangements panni irukke... adhukku thaan...

Karthik: idhula naan arrange pannadhu edhuvume illai Lakshmi...

Vishnu call panni sonnadhellaam correct aah irukka nnu just supervise pannen avvalavu thaan... unga thanks ellaam Vishnu vukku thaan...

Vishnu takes his mobile and calls the resort...

within a few minutes... two waitors come and arrange dinner on the table... and leave...

All of them sit around the table and serve each other and start eating...

Lakshmi: innaikku ennoda birthday nnu eppadi kandu pidicheenga?

Vishnu: nee sollalai nnaa ... engalukku theriyaadhaa?

Lakshmi: adhaan eppadi?

Vishnu: nethu night facebook la parthen...

Lakshmi: appo yen nee enakku appove wish pannalai?

Vishnu: ippo wish panni surprise pannanum nu thaan appo sollalai...

Lakshmi: adhu sari...

Karthik; en Lakshmi? naangalaa kandupidikkalai nna neenga solliye irukka maatteenga thaane?

Lakshmi: mmm... naan ennoda birthday celebrate panradhe kidaiyaadhu karthik...

Vishnu: En Lakshmi .. enga kitta atleast solli irukkalaam illai?

Lakshmi: mmm... ennoda oru birthday party la dhaan periya sandaiyaagi, appavum ammavum pirinjittaanga... correct aah adutha varusham ennoda birthday annaikku thaan court la divorce kuduthaanga... adhanaala naan ennoda birthday celebrate panradhe kidaiyaadhu...

Tears roll down on her cheeks.

Raji wipes her tears and says "sorry Lakshmi... unakku kashtamaa irundhaa adhai nyaabaga paduthikkaadhe..."

Vishnu: azhaadhe Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: idhellaam eppadi arrange panneenga? bayangara surprise enakku...

Karthik: adhaan Vishnu... utkandha idathuleye phone adicha ellaam ready...

Vishnu: machaan...

Karthik: naan unakkaaga indha help kooda pannale nnaa appuram namma friendship ku arthame kidaiyaadhu...

Lakshmi: Thank you so much...

Raji: sari ... saappidum bodhu azha venaa... saappidu...

They continue to have dinner.

It was full moon day and the entire ambience was so serene and romantic, they were enjoying the waves and the food together.

Suddenly, the level of waves started raising...

Vishnu: dei... machaan, ennadaa alai ellaam thideernu adhigamaagura maathiri thonuthu...

Raji: innaikku pournami illaiyaa?

lakshmi: adhukku?

Karthik: Enna Lakshmi? We have high tides on full moon day and new moon day appadinnu 7th std EVS la padichirukkom illai...

Vishnu: dei... pona varusham padicha engineering eh nyaabagam illai... idhula 6th, 7th la padichadhai enga nyaabagam vachikkaradhu?

Lakshmi: adhaane...

Raji smiles listening this...

Lakshmi: en Raji sirikkare?

Raji: onnum illai...

Lakshmi: sonnaa naangalum sirippom illai...

Raji: enga amma idhukku oru kadhai solluvaanga...

Lakshmi: hai... kadhaiyaa sollu sollu...

Raji: Paarkadalai Vaasuki ngra paambai vachu devargalum, arakkargalum kadaiyumbodhu amirtham kadaisiyaa thaan

veliyaachaam... adhukku munnadi niraiya porulgal veliyaachu... adhula onnu thaan chandiran adhaavadhu nilaa..

adhanaalai nilaa vai samudra raja oda pillai nnu solluvaanga... paarkadal le irundhu veliye vandha nilaavai maha vishnu vaanathula irundhu oli veesa solli utharavittaaraam... Azhagaana than kuzhandhai theyaradhum, valaruvadhum aah irukkaradhai parthutte iruppaaraam avaru... Pournami naal le muzhusaa azhagaa theriyara thannoda kozhandhaiya konjanum ngra aasaiyaala vaanathai thoda muyarchi pannuvaaraam... adhaan alai ongi irukkum nu solluvaanga...

Karthik: appo new moon day???

Raji: amaavasai annaikku nilaa vaanathula theriyaadhu illai? adhaan than kozhandhai kaanume appadinnu vaanathula theda muyrachi pannuvaaraam... adhaan annaikku alai adhigamaa irukkum...

Lakshmi: nallaa irukke kadhai...

Vishnu: Lakshmi birthday ... unexpected aah sea shore la moon light dinner with grandma stories aah amainjiduchi...

Lakshmi: idhellaam naan chinna vayasule irundhu miss panna vishayangal ...

Karthik: kavalai padatheenga lakshmi... ini vara birthday ellaam amarkalamaa kondaadidalaam...

All of them laugh...

Chapter 55... coming soon...

CHAPTER 55

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago