'Afsana' (poetry) Anupam ke naam

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys... Yep, me again.😳 Well I always had the hint that Anu was paralyzed or handicapped or something, and today they indeed made it so. I'm rather disappointed as Anu was a very lively character and I loved his presence on the screen. Hopefully we'll see him more and it won't be ghitii pissi rone dhone wali shayari from him as he feels defeated or what not. Hopefully he finds a good doc who can help him (its a K-show ahem). A few lines for him... Play it in any context you feel. (btw, this is ghitti pissi too, so watch out)

"Afsana"

Lafzon ke sahaare banae chale teh ek nayi duniya...
Kya pata tah saath chodenge woh bhi.
Banane chale teh ek ashyana khushiyon ka...
Kya pata tah bikhar jaayega yoon hi woh fasana.
Udne chale teh asmaan ki gehraayion ko choone...
Socha na tah kabhi zameen ko bhi tarsenge.
Kis maukaam par le ayi hai ye zindagi...
Chalte chalte hi kahin tham sa gaya hai jeevan ka ehsaas.

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 Absolutely wonderful wording DC.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 Neetu! my babes....awesome....huge jhappi to u huni...

but yes, i wish they had not taken this track for anupam. 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow, dc wonderfulll amazing as usual.. 👏

will come and read 😳 😆 🤣

amu~
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks sweetie!😛

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

👏 Absolutely wonderful wording DC.

Thanks meri Jennu!! *mwuaah*

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Good one Neetz! 😊

Thanku Di!... I am nothing next to u, but your words are precious gems!😳

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: h&g is my life

very very vey good job yaar 👏 Thanks yaar!!😃
oh my poor anupam 😭 ,i feel very bad for my anupam 😭 Uff tell me about it... I want my old Anu back!! Roh mat yaar, warna apun ka toh pehle se hi dimaag ka circuit nikla ha re....

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hansam

👏 👏 👏 Neetu! my babes....awesome....huge jhappi to u huni... Hai meri affat ki goli... main sadke!! Thanku Di... very cozy jhappi si😳😛

but yes, i wish they had not taken this track for anupam. 😭 😭 😭 I know... I'm rather disappointed as well... I loved his andaaz... the shayari, the music... his optimism... etc...

*sighs*

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: yamulya1

Wow, dc wonderfulll amazing as usual.. 👏 Thanks "sweetie"😉

will come and read 😳 😆 🤣 what?... tu mujhe ye confuse kyun karti rehti hai... what do u mean?😕 aur itni hassi kyun ah rahi hai tujhe?

Cheers,

dc

amu~

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