ABCD Drabble OS by Anjori_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey everybody! I'm here with the challenged OS 😊 well, early isn't it? 😛 Obviously yes, seeing the speed of my other works 😆
Anyways, I hope you enjoy the OS.
I have added two of the keywords i got, wasn't able to add the third one according to the story. it's based on the current track of D3. And it's A KR OS. Enjoy!

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Key Words - *Abhor* *Kiss* *Mystic*


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He hated her. He absolutely loathed her. She was becoming a problem for him these days. Getting on his nerves, was her favorite time pass, it seemed. But he had to perform with her. He had no other option.


He remembered when there was a time when he had longed to dance with her, touch her, kiss her and feel her in his arms. But things have changed, people have changed, situations have changed and most importantly she has changed. She is no more the cute and bubbly girl she used to be back then. She is mature now. And maybe even this is one of the reasons why he despised her.


He used to love her, but not anymore. This is what he tries to make his heart understand but somewhere deep inside he still holds feelings for her. Somewhere in his heart he knows that he still loves her. There is still that special place which is reserved only for her.


He was angry. Damn angry on Kria. She had not come for the group rehearsals and nor for the Duet dance practice. Where the hell is she? Is she alright? Has something happened to her? These kinds of thoughts were revolving in his mind but he brushed them off and looked at his watch. Time to go back home, he thought. He picked up his things and started going to his car.


He was lost in thoughts, when he heard someone sniffing. He looked around to find the voice was coming from the Store room. He opened the door and shouted, is anybody in here? She looked up and he was numb. But how did she get locked, he thought.


He went and forwarded his hand. She held it and tried getting up but failed. He saw that she had got her leg injured. He bent down to her level and watched her serene face. She was damn scared.


Oh f**k! How could he forget that she was scared of the dark and she was sitting her all alone. He immediately hugged her and rubbed her back to sooth her. She was still sobbing while hugging him. He made her look at him. His full concentration was on Kria. He wiped away her tears with his thumb. Their faces were just inches apart and both were staring into each other's eyes. He went forward and kissed her forehead to calm her. She was just staring at him. His lips slid down her forehead to both her eyes. He travelled down and pecked her cute little nose gently. He reached to capture her lips. He looked at her face. She had her eyes closed and her lips were trembling. She opened her eyes to see him staring at her.


I love you rey, she said and what followed was a deep, passionate kiss. They both kissed as if there was nothing else in the world to care about. Forgetting everything that had happened in the past he pulled back gently and whispered I love you too.

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It's Done! Hope you liked it 😊

Do give your reviews 😳



- Anjori 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres..

wow anji...

this is realy awsum OS

loved it alot..

haye kaash esa saach me hojaye..


Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res...
Unres...
Massstt os tha anj...
Haiiyyye soo cute n sweeettt..
Mazza aa gaya read kerke :D
Edited by Madhu_ArSha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope something lyk this happens in tomorrow's epi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I seriously want somthing like di <3
dis is sooo awesum i loved it :-*
bt i knw aisa hone se raha bt still n expectng a hug n forhead kiss
*Fingers crossed
super yaar loved it muhaaa :-*
Edited by preeti_kreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reshhh
unres...
hayeee cute OS...
rey's feeling for kriya were written well...
rey found kriya in store room..
he still remember every little thing abt kriya...
hug n passionate kiss ☺️
confession bhi hogayaa
hope ye aaj ke epi mai hooo,but aisa nahi hoga ...
amazing one dear 👍🏼
Edited by Princess_Devil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow.. anji...
the emotions are described so nycly...
kal aisa kuch ho jaye...

well it was awsome
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww... lovely os dear ..😃

No wonder.. he's trying to stay away from her... 😳

He still have feelings for her... but the anger n betrayel's pain overpowered it...

But everything takes a backseat when he saw her in a vulnerable state .. locked in a dark space... crying to its worst... 😛

Loved the way he consoled her... & they finally accepted their feelings... 😊

Hayeee... show me kaisa hoga ye scene...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay so I read d thing..
And I find it pretty good. U depicted the emotions well, but the sudden change of emotions could have done better. I mean right at start u told that he hated her and things. But dheeme dheeme u made it transform into lost love. But it was written beautifully.
I don't get to watch d3 these days, so I actually just knew she was locked baad me ye kissing part dekh ke I was like 'esa b hua!?'
Fir yaad aaya.. KRians ki imagination 😛
But it was really good. I mean it.
The words and vocables were impressive
And each and every scenes were well plotted.
I liked the way u made dem kiss and the best part was that confession.
At least that is what I felt 😛
"The Falling in Love" segment was done well. U know what I mean.
Awww... he pulls back and says 'i love u too' how cute!
I loved it sacchii..
And as per now. Message me the other links too.
Either on FB or on IF
How come I missed a great writer like u!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

Okay so I read d thing..
And I find it pretty good. U depicted the emotions well, but the sudden change of emotions could have done better. I mean right at start u told that he hated her and things. But dheeme dheeme u made it transform into lost love. But it was written beautifully.
I don't get to watch d3 these days, so I actually just knew she was locked baad me ye kissing part dekh ke I was like 'esa b hua!?'
Fir yaad aaya.. KRians ki imagination 😛
But it was really good. I mean it.
The words and vocables were impressive
And each and every scenes were well plotted.
I liked the way u made dem kiss and the best part was that confession.
At least that is what I felt 😛
"The Falling in Love" segment was done well. U know what I mean.
Awww... he pulls back and says 'i love u too' how cute!
I loved it sacchii..
And as per now. Message me the other links too.
Either on FB or on IF
How come I missed a great writer like u!


I would have written it in a little detail or would have added a few more scenes if it wasn't a drabble OS, which has to be written within 500 words.
hehehe ... humari iagination toh pata nahi kaha kaha tak pahauch jati h :P :D
Thanku ^_^
okkk .. i will do that for sure :)

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