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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

@muskurana: well I guess, theres also a need for being realistic as well. Let the characters be reel.

Was Swayam into a relationship with Sharon when she had insulted him. The dialogue was when she had humiliated him in the canteen, right? That time the two weren't dating. So logically. He couldn't ask for a clarification back then.

But now she was into a relationship, not even a trial. And she denies for the same. After being with him for months together. Proclaiming her love all the time. Assuring him. And then with a thud, gets him down to the earth.

Is that fair? NO.!

Well people take years together to rise over a heartbreak. Here its only been months. But though, considering the fact that its a fiction. We may have it sometime soon.

@Priya: Well I would just say. He still loves her. There's no doubt to it. And I did mention they are talking too much about others.

Well, Sharon earlier couldnt ever stand Kria. But now she is being friendly to her. Which possibly reflects her as a more sorted person. And thats the change he wanted. Prioritizing her relations above her ego and reputation.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan

Sanchi, the word change is irritating me now. 😵

I wont say anything about the CHANGE jaap.I am officially allergic to the word CHANGE.One single word is successfully working as a slow poison for such a beautifully written character.

I agree to all the points Mihi stated.

@shenz..His calmness or rudeness ,anything towards Sharon need to be shown.When the screen play is so flat,how viewers will understand his POV.Apart from CHANGE dialogues again and again we didnt see any POV from Swayam.Swayam never wanted Sharon to change her basic nature.He has stated it hundred times in past.Yes,Sharon's mistake of rejecting him in front of gang was very very wrong.Swayam lost trust on Sharon's love.Even if he wants her to change,how her behavior towards Kriya can rebuild the TRUST factor on their relationship.

All we are asking for is few monologues to know what is going on in their minds.

Edited by _Deepika_ - 12 years ago

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LiveEatLove

@LiveEatLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -shenz-
@muskurana: well I guess, theres also a need for being realistic as well. Let the characters be reel.

Was Swayam into a relationship with Sharon when she had insulted him. The dialogue was when she had humiliated him in the canteen, right? That time the two weren't dating. So logically. He couldn't ask for a clarification back then.

But now she was into a relationship, not even a trial. And she denies for the same. After being with him for months together. Proclaiming her love all the time. Assuring him. And then with a thud, gets him down to the earth.

Is that fair? NO.!

Well people take years together to rise over a heartbreak. Here its only been months. But though, considering the fact that its a fiction. We may have it sometime soon.

They were shown in a relationship barely a week, is that realistic either?

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awsm post... u said it all... 👏

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: muskurana

They were shown in a relationship barely a week, is that realistic either?

Exactly. The problem is that the relationship phase was too short lived. When SwaRon became a couple, Taani's exit was given preference, after which we got a jogging date and then Vrushika had CP. After she came back, Aditya's track was given more preference and Swayam and Sharon started to have misunderstandings. Before that only one day, the chai date was shown beautifully , and according to me the rain wish and the camping wish were very hurriedly done. It was not actually exclusive. But anyway that's about the dates. The point is that their break up phase has been explored more than their relationship phase. I wouldn't have minded if break up phase had been explored in its limits, only for sometime, but this is getting on my nerves ! It's so unrealistic. I don't understand which couple solves their misunderstandings only by a break up and so much of problems! Are the cvs trying to tell us that their bond is the weakest bond and nothing can sort them out? Huh?

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I guess it's high time, a few meaningful monologues of Swayam are shown to really make us peep and understand what exactly is going on in his head. I don't think any of the SwaRon fan would mind a monologue, which is of more importance as of now for around 10-15 minutes. I can even spare a few episodes for monologues rather than casual SwaRon.

I guess only this can help us feel that it s the same Swayam we had once loved, as a character. And relate more to the story.

Because as of now, I am just consoling myself that this might be the reason, that might be the reason. But I never know what might be the reason.

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yasri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -shenz-
I guess it's high time, a few meaningful monologues of Swayam are shown to really make us peep and understand what exactly is going on in his head. I don't think any of the SwaRon fan would mind a monologue, which is of more importance as of now for around 10-15 minutes. I can even spare a few episodes for monologues rather than casual SwaRon.

I guess only this can help us feel that it s the same Swayam we had once loved, as a character. And relate more to the story.

Because as of now, I am just consoling myself that this might be the reason, that might be the reason. But I never know what might be the reason.

This is not the essence of the problem... Monologues r not what attract audience to SwaRon coz SS during many times their body language spoke volumes, please re-watch some old Shantanu scenes... The real issue is that the new cvs don't understand the essence of SwaRon love story...SwaRon relationship... Yes, they r professional writers and cvs but this can't hide the fact that good number of members who write in IF had the ability to understand the equation of SS better than our new cvs... just coz u have a job doesn't really mean u r more talented than others who haven't!!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: yasri

This is not the essence of the problem... Monologues r not what attract audience to SwaRon coz SS during many times their body language spoke volumes, please re-watch some old Shantanu scenes... The real issue is that the new cvs don't understand the essence of SwaRon love story...SwaRon relationship... Yes, they r professional writers and cvs but this can't hide the fact that good number of members who write in IF had the ability to understand the equation of SS better than our new cvs... just coz u have a job doesn't really mean u r more talented than others who haven't!!

@bold+underlined:sorry, but I don't agree to this. As of now. His character needs justification. His thoughts need to be put forward. e never know what turmoil had he face all these days due to the break up. His ignorant behavior towards Sharon, would also have an effect on him. All these things need to be showcased. If the CVs need the viewers to relate to the character, make us understand what he has actually gone through, and what's in his mind.

Its not like I am new to this field of watching SwaRon. I know their charm but we need to look in a way for approaching the problems and getting the solutions rather than revamping the whole thing from start.

And of course, there are brilliant writers on IF, no doubt. I know many who write exceptionally well, than may it be any couple. Of course, SwaRon has it's own baggage of outstanding writers. But we never know the trick to handle the scrip when in their place. It's quite easy to say that the job can be done easily but it's tough to get into it and experience it. There it's just not writing but executing as well. Putting it on screen with the effect that the write-up should create. So definitely if there's any writer on the forum, who can do that for SwaRon on screen with all these professional technicalities kept in mind. They can try and approach the channel.

And I never said they are more talented just because they have a job.