Thousand Shades ..a fanfiction.. - Page 71

Created

Last reply

Replies

744

Views

76.4k

Users

112

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

zona_malik thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome

Ahmazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Loved it

Read last 2 chaps together

i so knew it

it whud be virali

b/w rey as kuru was a surprise

Update Soon :)
Meesocute thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
In last update i gussed rey would be kuru...
Thnk god finally d MU btw kriyaansh is cleared...
I really hope kriyaansh kisi problm mein na fase...
I loved the tunnel wala scene
preciuspearl thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
wowww...what an amazing ff...
i read all the parts in one go...
loved it totally...
u know what i really really wish some one -i mean some director gets inspired by your story and directs this story, ofcourse with rey and kria..
(hitting my head) i mean,amar and shakti... and ofcourse wid u as the writer.
bcoz it is just THAT aweosme... totally in love wid ur story and writing...
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

btw thank alot for the pm... do continue to pm me plzzz...
Edited by preciuspearl - 11 years ago
TenTinyBreaths thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
sunday end hone mein bas one hour hi bache hain.. :(
Arya.100 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago


When I reached the palace, Taani and Neha came running. "Where is he?" Neha cried. I thought of Reyaansh bleeding inside the tunnel with no one to help him and did my best to look unconcern. About whom you are talking?'

Taani gave a long look before whispering "Reyaansh" I leaned closer, "How do you know?"

"We both were involved in it when Kuru first appeared. Who do you think posted the scrolls when he was on wars? Is he safe?" she said quickly. I told her what had happened, and their faces went pale. "Kria stay here and say absolutely nothing."

I panicked, "But where are you both going?"

"To find Vikrant and help Rey" I entered and tried to avoid Mritunjay's interested gaze. "Where have you been?" Sharon asked. "I was caught up in the rush." I lied hoping to be a good actor if Mriyunjay got a bit hint of Reyaansh being Kuru then everything would end. The minor chances of his survival would be shattered, he'll kill him.

Mritunjay studied me. It had been a year since he had last seen me. "They thought you'd been crushed" he said. "Of course not, I escaped. I'm not feeling well" I lied again and hurried to my room.

I spotted something dark peeking from beneath my pillow. It was a small black box, I opened it and took out my mother's diadem with a letter.

In case tomorrow never comes... My dear Princess, I wanna confess all I had in heart... I had seen you for the first time in your palace. You stood near the door trying an escape from situation with your mother and brothers. Soldiers from Kalpi descended the stairs with me. You were too lost in the situation that you didn't notice me but my eyes were only on you. I couldn't blink neither could look away, taking few steps further I came close and held you by your waist. The tip of my sword was at your neck but trust me it never meant to hurt you. "Can you loosen your grip on my waist? My brother is scared." Were your first words to me though I wanted to hold you closer I had to leave you. When we returned back to palace after a visit to city, your mom was already gone and unknowingly you hugged me. I couldn't describe what I felt. We had many encounters on the journey from Vardha to Kalpi, I tried to maintain a distance from you. You must be thinking it as your dream but I was really there that night when you were sleeping in your carriage while coming to Kalpi. In Kalpi I increased my try to stay away from you but couldn't keep myself away from you for long. My feelings came out when I found you trying to leave with the help of priest. The reason for staying away was I had a task in my mind to end slavery, Taani and Neha were involved in it and always pulled my leg about you. They could never imagine me falling for someone. You lost your kingdom, parents, Ishaan and all you had once all because of Kalpi and never cried neither said a word about it to me. I too had a similar story like you so I had soft corner for you. I lost my parents and little brother in a war and was brought up by Mritunjay, he's like a father to me but I couldn't tolerate slavery so I take to take this action. I was pretty sure you won't accept my feelings but you did reciprocate though never named it and I too never confessed it that I love you and will always do... Rey

Tears blurred my vision as I out on that diadem. He must have left that in the morning, not knowing that whether he would survive the day. And now his fate was up to Shiva, I would never weep for myself if he was granted life.

I paced the room desperate for any news. In evening when I came out of my room to the hall where everyone was there. Adhvrushya came with a smile, "Excellent news" he said triumphantly. "Had the Kuru been caught?"

"Even better, he's dead"

I felt my heart stop in my chest, but Adhvrushya went on. "Two men caught him attempting to escape. He was already hurt and was shot." Suddenly the world was spinning, I held the pillar for support.

I could feel throat beginning to close, and the world growing dark around me. Nothing made sense anymore, I shut myself in my room. With everything I had once I lost Reyaansh, the one who cared for me all along.

It no longer mattered to me whether I lived or died. I lay down and closed my eyes, hoping that someone would take me to world where Reyaansh had gone.

Akhiyan nu rehn de

Akhiyaan de kol kol

Chan pardesiyaa

Bol bhawe na bol

I could clearly see myself in Vardha's palace (Pic), where I (her look) had met him for the first time. Moonlight made its way through the windows present around. I stood near the window looking at moon. He came closer and kept his eyes close to mine.

Vekhan da chaa sanu

Mukh partaawi na

Naire naire wass dhola

Door door jaawi na

Naire naire wass jive

Door door jaawi na

I looked at him, he looked away from my sight. With my left hand I turned his face towards me, he pressed mouth to mine and I panicked. I did not know what to do, how to breathe but I did not want to reveal how much I did not know. I tightened my lips and kissed back.

Door da khayaal chad

Wass akkhiyan de kol kol

Chan pardesiya

Bol bhawe na bol

I lay near the window under the blooming moonlight, the sky colored in a brilliant black. Reyaansh smiled at me and leaned over to kiss me. I closed my eyes, his skin was so warm so smooth. His hands travelled from my waist to the threads of my choli.

Akkhian nu rehan de

Akhiyaan de kol kol

Chan pardesiyaa

Bol bhawe na bol

I pressed myself against his bare chest, shocked to discover my chest was bare too. I surrendered to the sensations, the feel of his warm lips, the pounding of his heart as I caressed his skin, his soft kisses along my neck. How much I had longed for this!

"My Queen" he murmured, I kept my head on his chest. "My King"

But it was all a dream, no one had come to murder me in my sleep. I woke up to realize that he isn't with me now, he's gone. I went to take the bath, the water droplets brushed across my cheeks, shoulders, hollow of my neck. I shivered imagining the soft kisses of Reyaansh's mouth in those places.

My eyes flew open reminding myself he won't ever come back to my arms. Whole day I (her look) was in my room, I didn't speak to anyone neither allowed anyone to meet me. In evening I stepped out of the room. There was a noise when I opened the door.

Sharon was around, "Mritunjay wants to see you." she said.

"Really, is he angry?" I asked intentionally. She was on verge of tears, "He asked us to bring you to him. I don't know whether you'll be able to accept it? Preparations are being made."

I nodded, we walked to his room. "Do you know why he has called? And preparations?" I no longer cared what happened to me. "I think you're going to be married." She said. When I didn't react she left me on the door and went away.

I opened the door, he was lying on the bed a bit ill with fever. With a hand he offered me a seat on the chair next to his bed. "Princess Kria" he said.

"Mritunjay"

"Do you know why I've called you here?" he asked, I didn't lie. "Sharon says it has something to do with my marrige"

"Yes, you have grown beautiful in my absence." He said. "Many things have happened in your absence." He raised his brows but instead of getting angry on me he composed himself to speak. I dug my nails into my palms to keep myself from weeping.

"I brought you here to give you a new life. I've understood that I won't survive for long, before I die I wish to see that change. I wish to make you Queen of Kalpi." He said. I bit my lower lip and gripped the sides of my chair.

"I don't understand... you... I thought that... Reyaansh" I whispered.

"Is ill? Yes, but he's young and very strong. Men like him recover quickly, I know you both don't like each-other much but you'll turn out to be a great couple. I have faith he'll efficiently rule Kalpi. He's waiting for you." He said.

I got up so quickly that my seat nearly toppled over. Mritunjay smiled, "He's in his room" I don't remember whether I ran. I must have when I opened the door and Reyaansh took me in his arms, I was breathless.

Immediately, I inspected him for signs that he'd been wounded again. "I don't understand... I just don't..." was all I said. He put his finger on my lips, "The men who shot were my men. There was no attack."

"But the mess" I whispered. "It was bull's blood. I think I'm going to survive."

And your shoulder?'

He pushed his tunic away so I could see where Vikrant had neatly stitched him closed, and in the bright light of settling sun, I knew there'd never been a more handsome man. From the time I'd been taken from Vardha, he must have known Mrityunjay intended me for him that's why in beginning he was so rude as he didn't want to lose his focus in bringing slavery to an end.

Then I thought of times he'd seen be cribbing for Vardha, and the many times I goaded him for being nasty when all of it was simply been an act to keep me away from the suspicion. My eyes began to burn. "I hope you're crying with happiness and not with disappointment." He said.

"How can I be disappointed?"

"But you wanted Vardha." I ran my fingers through his hair. "No, I want you." I searched his eyes which were filled with love. "Me or Kuru?"

"Perhaps both"

"But I'm afraid, I guess Kuru is dead. I've done what I wanted to do with Neha, Taani and Vikrant. There would be no more rebellion, no more daring acts of kindness." He warned. "You mean we won't get to run through the burning buildings?"

He wanted to laugh but instead he watched me intently. I drew my fingers over contours of his face. He held my limp body closer but wasn't looking at me. He eyes were facing the ground, I moved forward and placed my lips on his.

Deepening the kiss I walked back till my hand hit the vase on the nearby table. It fell and broke making a loud noise. I heard faint and panicked voices. "Mrityunjay needs to change his decision Kria can't marry Rey, They won't be able live together." I guess it was Asva Maa. "Mrityunjay has sent Kria to meet Rey, and I heard something breaking from his room. I just hope they both are safe."

The voices became clearer, I opened my eyes and everyone stood behind Reyaansh. I tried to push him but he to too busy. I again pushed him, harder this time. Everyone who stood behind had their jaws dropped on floor.

"Kya hua?"

I made him turn towards them and hid behind him wrapping my hands around his chest. According to my thoughts he had to be embarrassed but his reaction was completely opposite. "Can you all leave us alone please?" he said sternly.

"Yaa"

"Sure"

"Take you sweet time"

"Yup" Taani and Neha smirked but everyone else had got the unimaginable shock, they left taking that shock. Being a shameless creature he continued from where he had left. He placed on his couch and held me close. His hand moved up to my back as his lips danced across mine, soon I slept.

When I got up evening had turned into a dark night. He was sleeping by my side holding my lehenga tight on my waist with his face was covered with my dupatta. I removed my dupatta from his face, he nuzzled on my collar bone in his sleep.

He looked like a kid who had slept peacefully after a long time. His eyes opened few minutes later and watched me intently. "What? Why are you staring?" I said.

"I'm not staring. Im observing"

He brushed his lips against my ear, "A Strong girl who couldn't return to land of her birth but is welcomed across seas to rebuild Vardha in Kalpi. Will you my Queen?"

"Yes"

"Just yes?" he pouted, I kissed his cheek. His face gave a smirk and hands loosened the threads of my choli. Covering both us with blanked he made love to me.

The End


So here ends this FF... i'm gonna miss this alot.. as it was my fav..

P.S. Sorry guys... Mado ji, Abhi, Sanju di, Sargam di, Akanksha Bhardwaj di... the story was always meant to be happy i was just irritating you all. Akanksha di.. uh almost guessed me right yes it was fishy and tried to cover it up and a special Thanks to Riya to keep it a secret as she knew the story...



Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago
shelly_Arsha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
unres

YAAYY mee firstt!!
First off all Well Done arya for this Amazing story and for making it come upto this much!
The last chapter off this and it was awsome
I'm glad this had a sweet happy ending
Hehe rey is so besharam 😛 "Would u please leave us alone"
Haye im soo gunna miss this!!
it was one off my favourites!!
Well done though And hope to see writing many more 😉
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 11 years ago
TenTinyBreaths thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
RES

unres...

aryuuu ki bachchi.. di ko hrt attck deke bada maza aya,na??
gosh.. i still cnt believe .. it was juz a prank??
badmash aryuu.. :P :P
but i'm hppyyy dat it was prank only..
nd rey survived
nd they got their hppily ever after..
hayyee.. superbbb ending dear..
so so so sooo loved this story of urs...
u knw na how much i luv TS..
nd now i'm gonna miss it like hell!! :( :(
plz come bck wth newer ssn soon.. ;) :P

u r an amazing writer aryu..
i'm glad dat i was prt of this wnderful stry..
really would hve missed a brilliant piece of writing if i had had not found it.. :)

take care aryuu..
love uu..
-di.. <3



Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago
Cieli.Santi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Res..
Mujhe. 1st res chaiye tha...:'(
unres..

haye dii aap hume jaan buj kar irritate karing me aapko chodongi nhi..😡

haye dii mast update tha...

haye kriya ka rey ke liye tadping haye..

nd haye rey survived..😃

haye rey kriya marriage nice..

😆😆 shamless rey 😉

sab ke face dekhne jese honge..

aww..haye awsum ending dii..

loved it alot..

haye m gonna miss this ff..😭
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
Madhu_ArSha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Arya u kamini...
Hume jaan bujh k irritae ker rahi thi.. Huh.. Itna tadpaya hume.. Ufff
bt OMGGG... i so loved dis chappy..
Kria ka Rey k liye tadap den So many truths finaly Out..
Nice n super HAWTT Song Sequence...Haiyyyee...
N finaly Tharki Rey ko uski Queen mill gayi n hume humare KriYaansh...
Uff... M so gonna miss dis story...
My fav story cums to an End.. ;( bahut yaad ayegi mujhe yeh story...
But Arya as promised u r gonna cum up with a brand New story.. So zada dukh nahi hoing but ya M so gonna miss it...
Superb End behna...
Awsmmm update
shalini_arsha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
this commnt is going to be small frst nd last comment... Dobara typ krna is boring frst tym wala post hi nhi hua... :( bt apart it... I loved dis stry way too much... I read all d chapters in one go... I would lov to read more bt only completed ones... :p nd kill me for that bt i nevr knew that u r a writer as i didnt knw abt rashi... :p that's y nevr opend the pms too as idk ur user name too... :p bt glad i read dis stry either frm fb... Bt glad i did... This is one of d beautiful stry i read before.,. U r an amazing writer... Nd this concept is totally differant... All thanx to fb i read i m able to read dis stry otherwise 600 pms m read krna nxt to impossible... Loved the stryy to the core... Nd this is my frst nd last cmnt on this stry... :p nd can v expect an epilogue...????? It'll be amazing one... :D

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: themasked

1 months ago

A SCANDAL IN THE MAKING-KZK2 FANFICTION

Hi,I recently started watching Kasauti Zindagi Kay 2 and fell in love with it and got introduced to so many characters.I started playing around...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

8 months ago

|| FanFiction Book Cover Shop #26 ||

Welcome to the Fan-Fiction Forum's new Book Cover Shop, fellow FF-ers! 3 This is the place to request if you want a banner or signature for your...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".