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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

hmm so to hai...check your eyes nd ur head too...😃

ETF will be in action..wait for the right time...eise hi kumfu karate to practice nehi kar sakte na?😆

thanks payal...stay tuned...😛

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rimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Shravani / Arohi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome update
loved it
It was amazing
waiting for the next part
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rimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
loved it
It was amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Superb update Rimi...

first read it last night...& now twice again (total 3 times)...it's well written indeed.

Sushma's escape plan was awesome...blast crating smoke screen & then escape in firemen's disguise... ETF faced someone very cunning.

& what was in that cell??

dying to read more.. do continue.

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rimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shamsad1607
Superb update Rimi...
first read it last night...& now twice again (total 3 times)...it's well written indeed.
Sushma's escape plan was awesome...blast crating smoke screen & then escape in firemen's disguise... ETF faced someone very cunning.
& what was in that cell??

dying to read more.. do continue.
Thanks for PM.

after reading it 3 times...still you telling me its well written???atisha u r such a sweet heart...i confuse you and you encourage me to confuse you more...😕😕😕

well next update will clarify everything...would have in this but then my hands were paining suddenly...🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱

stay tunedd...thanks for your comment...😳😳😳😳

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rimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Thanks everyone here come the next update...

Chapter 14:

'sameer meri baat suno,wo mera dost hai,hum pehele ek case mein sath kam kar chuke hai,use subah kisine mail kiya tha ki eisa ek blast hone wala hai.Usne yakeen nehi kiya.Fir jab sach mein pata chala to wo waha aya aur dekha sach mein blast hua hai aur kuch kaidi mare bhi gaye hai.Maine use wo mail hame bhejne ko kaha tha aur wo mail address bhi.Ye dekho usne mujhe bheja hai.Mail address wahi hai jisse Mahesh ko order bheja gaya tha,some anurag.Aur ye mail parho.'Sakshi forwarded the phone to sameer,

'security custody mein aj fir dhamaka,agar cover karne ka maan hai to chale jana,bohot kuch milega waha'

'matlab ye sab planned hai..koi chahta tha press waha pe aye,lekin kiyu?'Arjun took the chair.

At the moment Shree came in,

'Sir wo sare kaidi o ki files aa gayi hai,'

'thik hai sab conference room mein aao,'

Everyone assembled in the conference room.Rathore informed them about the mail from anurag that sakshi had got.Shree again tried to find the location but he couldnt,it took up some fake ip address and he got lost.

'Ayesha jo kaidi mar gaye hai,unke bare mein kuch pata chala?'Arjun asked sitting on his chair,

'haan sir,pehela hai Chandan.Chandan pehele ek computer spare parts ka business chala tha tha,gurgaon mein,computer hardware aur hacking mein mahir.Internal details yahi nikalta tha.

Dusra hai Ahmad,goa mein reheta hai,hamesha nasha karke para reheta hai.Per uske khabri charo taraf hai,17 bhasay bol sakta hai aur disguise expert.Kehete hai uska asli chehara kai saal to kisi ne nehi dekha.Hamesha ek alag get up mein ata hai.

Thesra hai lala,illegal ammunition smuggle karta hai.Iske pas har tara ka hatiyar milta hai.Underworld me har kam ke liye hatiyar isike pas se kharida jata hai.

Ye teeno 8 saal pehele Goa mein hue attack mein pakre gaye the.8 saal se custody mein hai.Inhe bohot torture kiya gaya tha,per kuch nehi kaha kisine bhi.Teeno anna ke khas admio me se hai.'

'hmm lekin inhe churwa sakte the,mar kiyu dala gaya?wo foot prints?kuch pata chala?'

'nehi sir,mein gaya tha fire brigade ke office puch tach karne,un logo ka kehena hai,jo log ko bheja gaya tha wo sab wapas agaye the.shayad koi pehele se us dress mein waha wait kar raha tha.Firemen ke sath ghus gaye andar.'chotu replied,

'post mortem report kaha hai?'

'Sir,yaha hai,maut gun shot se hi hui hai,back of the head,instant death.Aur wo jo ashes mile the,bomb blasts ke jaga pe,liza has given a report on that.According to the chemical analysis the ashes show the bomb was an ordinary remote bomb.zada damage nehi hoga bas smoke bohot dense aur bohot dur tak pehelti hai.'Ayesha started,

'smoke was created intentionally.Gate ke pas ek blast hua tha,most probably uske bad hi wo false fireman andar gaya hoga,fir smoke ki wajah se kisi ko zada shaq nehi hua,fir sushma ko churaya aur in kaidio ko bhi.fir jab wo bhagne lage to mar diya.ye sare log ek kari se jurte hai Goa mein 8 saal pehele ki wo blast.Rathod,'

Rathore was looking in a file all this while though he was all ears,

'ye rahi file check karo,blast bohot bara tha,files ke mutabik ravi tha iske piche,but i am sure he is framed.Sushma is behind all this.Billa e bare mein kuch pata chala chotu?'Rathore asked,

'ji sir,ye raha Billa ka file.Billa goa mein ek circus mein kartoot dikhata tha.wo 5 saal se wahi tha sushma ke cell mein.Bomb banane mein uska koi duplicate nehi hai.Hamesha bomb ke bare mein hi sochta hai.Pagal hai ek tarah ka.Achanak 2 months pehele uski rihai ke orders aye the.kehete hai usne kuch cases mein madaat ki thi jiski wajah se criminals pakde gaye the.To uske performance se khush hoke use chora gaya tha.Uska behaivior bhi sudharne laga tha.'

'kause case mein kuch pata chala?'Rathore asked,

'nehi sir,koi undercover operation tha,koi official details to nehi hai,'

'aur kuch,'

'sir,mere informers se pata chala hai,billa goa mein hain.Yaha pe wo kuch dino ke liye hi aya tha,fir goa chala gaya hai,abhi wahi hai.'

'ek aur baat sir,'chotu continued,'meine custody mein billa ke bare mein pucha tha.Kehete hai wo jail mein bhi hamesha naya bomb design karta reheta hai aur uski ek backup apne paas rakhta hai.uski talashi li gayi thi,cell bhi dekha gaya,per kuch nehi mila.per iski koi official report nehi hai,'

'shayad wahi rakhta hoka wo backup,per usse nikalne ke liye khud sushma ayegi,thora ajeeb lag raha hai.'Arjun spoke up

'Jo bhi chal raha hai wo goa se related hai,ya fir goa mein operate ho raha hai,Rathore hume goa jana hoga,ab clues wahi milenge,'Arjun looked towards Rathod,

'sahi hai rawte,mein commisioner sir, se baat karta hu,Chotu,apne informers ko billa pe nazar rakhne ke liye kaho.Sushma bhi wahi jayegi.Apne informers se kaho koi bhi shaq ho to inform kare.Sushma ka photo har jaga bhej do.'Rathore walked out of the room to his cabin.

Everyone dispersed to their work.Arjun sat there at the conference room swirling his pen and looking towards the fact board.Sakshi came in with a cup of tea and put it on the table.Arjun came back to his table and found her standing there looking at the file in front,Sushma's case file.Arjun sat down on his chair and asked her,

'kiya hua?kiyu ghur rahi ho file ko?'

'ye ravi kaun hai?jise pakra gaya tha aur fir goli mar di gayi thi?'

'Sushma ka istamal kiya hua ek katputli,jise istamal karke usne fek diya,'Rathore's voice came from back.Both Arjun and Sakshi turned towards him.He entered without any futher word and took some files from the table.

'Rawte commisione office jana hai,chalo'

Arjun immediately left for the parking.Sakshi went out and sat with Shree.Ayesha came up with her coffee.

'kiya hua sakshi?'

She told them the conversation she just went through.Ayesha kept quite while others started voicing their queries.Everyone found ayesha silent and asked her but she just ignored and went down to work.

After about an hour and half Arjun and Rathore came back.They came to shree,

'Shree monday goa ke flights ki ticket book karo,and sabke sath see to all other arrangements,koi help chahiye to mujhse kehena.aur haan hum waha uncover jayenge so uske arrangements karke mujhe shyam tak report karo.'

'sir sham tak?kaise?'

'Plan karlo,fir discus karke final kar lenge,you have 2 days for the arrangements,will that be fine
shree?'

'yes sir,'shree replied happily,

Arjun,Rathore left for their cabin leaving all the others behind.

how was it??boring??confusing??tell me readers should i continue this stroy...cause i am getting very less response...so not getting a mood to continue...

leave behind your comments plz...😳

PRECAP: Goa,Rathore and sushma...(make out whatever you can from it)🤢

Edited by rimi_invisible - 12 years ago