A beautiful smile...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys, since Jas Di was in full mood to write so many poems for our beloved Gurmeet, I took inspiration from her and have penned down something for him... Here it is...


A dedication for my Gurmeet Choudhary

Smile... Your beautiful Smile... My treasure

I see you smile and I forget every problem of my life

Every week, I just wait for weekends to treat my eyes

With that mesmerising smile of yours

I watch you perform, dance and laugh

I watch you hug your wifey so dearly after the performance

That it makes my heart swell in pride for the loving husband that you are

Every week, I desperately want to help you

I try my level best to help you

And yet, I am never satisfied with my efforts.

And I wait for the next week to see if my help was enough

On weekends, when the anchors announce your name

And I see that beautiful smile of relief.

I am happy, I am satisfied but I want to help more

I do my best not because you are my favourite

I help because I want to be one of those tiny reasons

who could bring smile on your face

I love it when your eyes sparkle with happiness hearing your name

And it hurts when those eyes are upset over some comments

But then you wear that smile reassuring us that everything is fine

And I feel, its true.

You say, never, never, never give up

And I trust you

And I won't give up to be by your side. Always...

Its for that smile, your beautiful smile... My treasure


Love you so much Gurmeet... You are the best...

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jasraj123 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg pallu don't have words to express how much i love ur poem.

it is like a full picture of gurmeet life and what he does u put in ur poem
every single word speak of love for gurmeet.


way to go girl
u are rockinggg with ur poem and keep writing more
u have talent and explore it dear👏👏👏


hayeee gurmeet love him sooo much.
cant' wait to see his act
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woow Pallu dear its Beautiful poem⭐️👏
Loved it to d core❤️
tumne jis tarah GC ko describe kiya hai its really wonderful n totally agree wid u
Pallu jo kuch bhi tumne likha hai yahi sab reasons hai ki we all love GC soo much😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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title itself is sooo nice and then poem
i really loved it

is ko padh sab ki batti jag jayeegee😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasraj123

omggg pallu don't have words to express how much i love ur poem.

it is like a full picture of gurmeet life and what he does u put in ur poem
every single word speak of love for gurmeet.


way to go girl
u are rockinggg with ur poem and keep writing more
u have talent and explore it dear👏👏👏


hayeee gurmeet love him sooo much.
cant' wait to see his act

yup jas u r rite Pallu rocking d forum
soo happy jas dat we r online at d same time but don knw kab ye net dhokha de jaye😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasraj123

title itself is sooo nice and then poem
i really loved it

is ko padh sab ki batti jag jayeegee😆😆

totally agree wid u dear😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: poonamgarg

yup jas u r rite Pallu rocking d forum

soo happy jas dat we r online at d same time but don knw kab ye net dhokha de jaye😲



oh i didn't know that u are online too. chalo i will wait few more min before i go to sleep.
doctor ji se baat karne ka mauka mila hain
aise thode naa jane doonge😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: poonamgarg

totally agree wid u dear😆



dekho tumhara net bhi jaag gaya hain
yeh GC ki poem ka asar hain jo pallvi ne likha hain
ab to jo net kai dino se soya tha woh bhi jaag chukka hain😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasraj123



dekho tumhara net bhi jaag gaya hain
yeh GC ki poem ka asar hain jo pallvi ne likha hain
ab to jo net kai dino se soya tha woh bhi jaag chukka hain😉

tum bilkul sahi kah rahi ho jas ye GC ka hi jaadoo hai😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasraj123



oh i didn't know that u are online too. chalo i will wait few more min before i go to sleep.
doctor ji se baat karne ka mauka mila hain
aise thode naa jane doonge😆😆

haan haan mein yahi hoo sweety😆😉
aur sunao kya chal raha hai aajkal😆

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