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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm reading chapter 27, read till where shyam came to RM and kushi went along & my heart beats have increased rapidly. how can u do this to me with a simple story.

i dearly can't wait to read next part, but I'm so tensed too.

oh my! what do u do to me?
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Posted: 12 years ago
it seems all raizada siblings r destined to fall in love with gupta siblings n viceversa...hmmm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 33

why is shyam disgusted with anjali. the only explanation i can think of is she made shyam go away from her maybe when she got to know about her limp. can't decide whether he knew about her condition or not.

pls don't say arnav is angry with kushi for this all.
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 35

had tears seeing kushi in this state. she is even finding happiness in the illusion of arnav n he was not ready to properly talk to her n sort whatever is in his mind. because of the turmoil ing his mind he didn't think twice in hurting her. whereas wen she knew about her brother n his sister she thought of sconfiding in him n sort it. this is the difference between selfishness n selflessness. that makes a huge difference especially in a relationship.
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 36

i guessed right. it's not shyam but anjali who left the relationship without even working it out, and arnav also did the same thing with kushi. both the siblings never thought what if the positions were reversed, what if their loved one did the same thing, what if one of them decide for their relationship and did not have the courtesy to say it in person n the reason behind it. that is the biggest insult for their love n relationship one can do.

but as the saying goes "love is blind & has no reason."
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Posted: 12 years ago
i finished reading the ff. loved it so much. poor arnav was tortured so badly by not only shyam but by the rest of the family too and payal, anjali n shyam all act as they were very decent while their courtship.

loved payal's character so much. in this ff she really acts as an elder sister who is able to take care of her family. i like how u potray her n akash generally in ur works, other being Making Decisions. that is my favourite till now.

now to the next one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Once again I read the whole story & still it feels like to read it again & again. I loved the flow of the story, the romance & off course the suspense which you created here, kept me stick to the story till the end. It so connects with the real life except the secrets kept. That can only happen in shows & fictions😆 Wasn't it Ironic? Him being late lead him to know khushi though after a lot of problems, which later on transformed into something beautiful between them. And shyaam being late in coming to meet anjali led to the accident, causing a storm in their lives? I will never get enough of his story. I love this so much dammit. And the G thing, I had never thought it would be payal. I sometimes wonder how can you writers keep so much of suspense? Itna deemag chalate kaise ho aap log?😆 It made me cry when arnav said those harsh words to khushi. This is arnav's problem, never listens and draws his conclusions. Hmm, kya kar sakte hain iss arnav ka. But I am glad that, ant bhala toh sab bhala. Did I mention I loved the fact that shyaam was her brother here? Something I love to read in every fic😆

So over all, this story had the perfect mixture of humor, romance, drama, emotions & mostly Arnav-Khushi which made me fall more in love with this story, everytime I read it.

Since you are planning to quit IF & writing your last story here, I have a suggestion. Why don't you write novels? This way we will get to read your work without the plagiarism or copyright issues😉. And you will get the credit which you are worth of!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Z,
This is such a cute FF, loved every bit of it. Khushi and Arnav practically grew up in the FF and Khushi was such an innocent, she thought she will get pregnant by kissing 😆

Loved the fact that Shyam was Khushi's brother 😳

Khushi's anguish was so heart wrenching when Arnav breaks up with her, really thought he wanted to take revenge but Arnav being Arnav it was his true love that made him act that way !!

The ending was cute, poor Arnav got punished for 3 years and had to wait 2 hours for his SR😳

Enjoyed it ( I actually read it earlier before you removed it and now only commenting)

Please keep writing (ArShi stories only 😉)

Luv n Hugs
K


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Posted: 11 years ago


I'm very much late..
yes dear u removed this FF..now how can i read this story..
if u had reposts this story..please give me the link..i desperately wanted to read this story.

Edited by Chandni.. - 11 years ago

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