Secrets du coeur ||Kriyaansh FF|| Update 37

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Secrets du coeur

It means secrets of the heart


I know , i know i have many works , i am going to finish them . But this concept was ringing on my mind , since eternity!

The story is way different from what i usually write. Don't expect the sweet romance very soon. And yes! DON'T KILL ME AFTER READING THE PROLOGUE , You just need to wait and watch!

Adios! And scroll down .

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Index

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Prologue - Scroll down

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Prologue

"It was a mistake," you said. But the cruel thing was, it felt like the mistake was mine, for trusting you."

I was really excited . Finally! I was meeting her. After 3 freaking months. I don't know , how I have spent these days without her. I was so busy with work , that I hardly got time to speak to her. All thanks to my great dad! Who was so keen to make me work in his office for a while.

I was giving her a surprise. I bought her favorite bouquet and a box of chocolates. It was her birthday tomorrow and I was very excited to surprise her. I reached her home , surprisingly her room's light were on. I thought she would be sleeping.

I climbed the pipe with difficulty , as usual her window was open. So I came inside.

"Happy birthday baatcutter!"

It took a fraction of a second , for my smile to disappear . The bouquet from my hand fell down , I looked at the sight in front of me. Kria was with another guy , he had been kissing her before I entered and it did not seem forced by any means . My hand turned into a fist.

"Rey , you were going to come after a week ."

"Accha hua , I came early ,nahi toh I would have never seen this. Bloody bitch."

"Dude! Shut up. She is my girl."

The guy puts his hand around her waist .

"She was just using you for your money and fame . Humara bad luck tumhe bahot jaldi pata chal gaya.Anyways it's good , at least now kria wouldn't have to roam around with you."

My eyes were filled with tears of betrayal , yet I could read her eyes , which didn't want me to leave. Her face depicted pain. But the kiss and her reaction to it , I came to kria just to confirm.

"Kria? This a joke right?"

"No! I don't reyaansh singhaania. I don't , I never loved you. I love rohan , I have always loved him , I used you for your money and fame. Now please get lost , and don't spoil my birthday. Out of here."

My heart broke into millions of pieces , giving a very hard punch on the jerk's face. I went closing my eyes. I walked alone on the lonely road. For me , my life had ended. I just hoped this was a bad night mare , and I would wake up soon from it.


NOTE BELOW

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE
Before commenting , let me make it very clear , the story is not just about Kria breaking rey's heart . There is more to it.

I have the first part almost ready and i will post it after seeing the replies.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res😊
unres

haww wat s dis😲😲
kria cheating on rey😲😭
feeling bad for rey😭
i hope kria did t for some other reason and not for money
amazinggg start👏
wil b waiting for d 1st chappy😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept :)
WOW another story :D
I'm loving the prologue
Oh I feel bad for Rey I wonder what step he's going to take
I currently hate Kriya in this situation for using Rey
But why was there pain in her eyes?
Please continue soon and please pm me when you update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG ye kya thaa 😲
m sure kriya was forced to do it...
rey's baatcutter can never do this to him...
iss rohan ki toh maiii 😡
poor rey 😭
update soon...
thnx fr d pm...
Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue is good...
nyc concept...
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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love the pro
cont soon
waiting to know more

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Posted: 11 years ago
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interest concept ... do continue soon and pm me

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