Secrets du coeur ||Kriyaansh FF|| Update 37 - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update but isn't it short??!!
But itz getting more interesting now
waiting for next part

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Posted: 11 years ago
Rey ne toh apne admi kam pe laga diye... Abb rohan ki khair nahi...
Oh kriya was kept straving for 3 days...dat bas***d is gonna pay d price for it.
Loved sharona nd kriya...
Rey handeled so well..
Finally kriya will tell truth to rey
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva



Jab trko pata hain ki yeh aisi story hain..padha kyun? Mrko mat kosa kar...

kal tujhe bola tha ki i will read it pakka.. Isliye maine read kiya n now badly regreting it -_-
n ofcouse mujhe achha nahi lagega toh writter ko hi kosungi na... Huh
mujheapni koi aur story ka update de.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was so nice and wanted to know the true as well too...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...
i sooo loved kriyam bond...
rohan will pay for his deeds 😡
kria will reveal the truth 😭
she has suffered alot...
update soon...
thnxx fr dd pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Posted the story on wattpad as well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome!!! Mind blowing!!

In d first update i was lyk wth!! Bt den thot dat kriya is on her scrifice path once again!! N i was ryt!! 😭

N why does she have to bind sm1 or d oder wid a promise!!! Arrgghhgh!!! 😡

I m glad dat neither of d 3 hate her!! 😃

Poor kriya!! 😕 😭

Who d hell is dat b*****d??? I may kill dat person for dis!! Bt no worries! Reyam will do dat! 😊

Bt wat is dat truth?!! 😲

How cm dat guy b so heartless to do dis to such a doll?! 😡
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Bt i m just so impressed by ur writing skills!!
U made me cry! Literally tears dwelled up in my eyes while reading dis1!! 😭 😭 😭

I m glad rey didnt force shar to tell d truth!! N he even refused to hear it wen c insisted!!
N kriya is ready to tell it to rey!!! On her own!!

Hahahaha rey blurted out?!!! Rofl!! Kriya hugged him crying!! Level of comfort n trust has remained as it was! May b it has increased!!

Nw i m getting impatient!! Plz update soon!!

Btw a Q y do u keep kriya in a hospital or such vulnerable state?! In most of ur writings i noticed! May b i m wrong bt still!!

N update asap!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Banner credits - Anjori.

The update is late and short. Sorry! Exams are going on. And I am probably going to just pass in S.s.t . -.- And have i told you guys , i am a very big devil?

Part 6

Rey pulled back. He looked at her face , and at once he understood that she wasn't ready to say the truth , but just to clear his doubts she was going to tell him. And he didn't want that. It wasn't the correct time to make kria face her past. It wasn't the correct time for the truth to come out.

He cupped her face.

"Kria , not now."

"Don't you want to know the truth rey?"

She asked innocently. Rey smiled at her . He asked her.

"You love me?"

"Yes! I love you."

She replied honestly , looking deep into his eyes. Rey kissed her forehead , and whispered.

"Then I don't want to know it."

"But you have to rey , or else."

"Are you ready to tell me? Or are you forcing yourself kria?"

Kria became quiet. No she wasn't ready , she wasn't comfortable in telling him the truth as of now , but she wanted to remove all his doubts.

"My answer kria , are you ready?"

Kria looked down and nods in a no.

"You know I love you don't you?"

"Yes! I know rey."

Rey made her look at him.

"Then why do you think , I will want you to say something which you are not comfortable in sharing as of now."

Kria smiled at rey. It was just a smile , it didn't remove the pain in her eyes , but it did bring a new hope , a hope that she can live the life she wanted with him.

Rey did want to know the truth. But as of now , he wanted to build his relation with her first. He knew that if he gets to know the truth , he won't be able to trust himself about her , he won't ever forgive himself , and he didn't want to get weak right now , not when kria needed his support.

He could always know the truth later , but he didn't have any time to remorse as of now , cause he had to take care of his love , whom he knew , was broken beyond limits.

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Kria's Pov

One of the main reasons , I had ever fallen for rey was cause of his understanding nature. He could never make any person uncomfortable , never hurt them. Each second in his arm was a pure bliss for me. His each smile , made my pain a bit less . His love could remove all the haunting memories in my mind.

Rey had been a light in my dark life . He had been a ray of hope , life , love in my messed up life. Being with him had always eased my pain. Each moment I had spent with him , I had forgotten all about the scars in my life. And I knew that only rey could remove those painful memories from my mind , and it seemed he had already started with his magic.

He fed me with his own hands , I was lost in his eyes. He smiled at me , and wiped the small tear which had dropped from my eye without me even realizing it.

Pov Ended.

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Rey's phone rang. He excused himself , and went out. It was the detective.

"Yes?"

"Sir , rohan is the son of raj malhotra , the business man. Rohan has a lot of molestation cases up against him . His targets always have been girls from middle class families , as he knows his dad's power could crush the case. He went to delhi yesterday. Will return after a month."

"Thanks. Your money will be sent to you."

He cuts the call.

"Rohan malhotra , this time you won't get away with what you did. I will crush you and your dad bad. You are going to pay for your sins. Your ride to hell starts."

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The next day. Kria was getting discharged. Sharon , swayam and rey came.

"Guys! Kria will stay with me."

Sharon declared. The two boys look at her. Swayam replied.

"Better , why not we all stay at the work house?"

Sharon , rey and swayam had bought a house , where they used to work late nights. Kria came out after changing. She sat down weakly. Rey lifted her up.

"Rey?"

Kria was shocked.

"Pehli baar thodi na utha raha hun."

Kria looked down blushing. They went away.

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Kria was sitting in her room. Looking at a picture , it was with a girl.

"I am sorry Di. I disappointed you. I am a looser."

She cried. Sharon opened the door , and saw that. She hugged kria calming her down.

"Di , dekho na she will never change. Bas rona aata hain madam ji ko."

Sharon spoke , after taking the picture.

"Shut up sharon. "

Kria wiped her tears. And took the picture back.

"Di , I am not crying. Aapki champ nahi roti."

Sharon sighed. And took the picture.

"Sleep kria."

"I am , but I'll hug di and sleep. Photo do please."

Sharon sighed , and gave it to her. Kria hugged it , and slept. Sharon stroked her hair. And soon she slept , Sharon covered kria in the blanket. Sharon took the photo.

"7 years di. Saath saal ke baad bhi aapke bina jeene ki aadat nahi hain. We miss you."

Sharon hugged the photo and cried.

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Hope you liked it. :D Chota update tha , cause the length depends upon the likes and reviews :P.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ausum update!
time for payback to raj
loved KriSha bond!

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