Arjun Os: Flames Of lOve 'New'

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I wrote his Os on Arjun's mind peace and Pain...Hope You GUYS liKE it...

"Flames of lOve..."

Do you sometimes feel desperate... fade up of life... every one feels... but be hopeful... after cursing,crying and carving... A light of hope will shine for you...❤️

"Life is like a Pure Flame..."

There is a flame burning within you. Don't you feel it?

"Yes you do..."

Life is Cruel. It gives us rare chances to compensate its effects and who is going to know this better than Acp Arjun Suryakant Rawte.

He sat on the deck silently having the view of Calm River. It looks calm but when any stone will be thrown inside it no body will know how deep it goes... Same was the matter with his life... He gets Pain and no body knows how deep he feels it...

What I gained? And What I lost? The questions aroused in his mind.

Surely the things I lost are much than that i gained... The one who were near to me I lost them...

I lost you Roshni..

Tears brimmed in his eye... then "I lost you Riya..."

A lump strucked in his throat... He looked up at the sky calming his nerves down...

And Now...

I lost every one... I lost Sam, Aisha, Shree, Liza, Chotu and... He breathes and atlast thinks it "I lost you Sakshi..."

Am I that worst that one who get close to me goes away forever...

It Pained... Loneliness pains... Being alone is a toughest thing... Hundreds of people surround you and still you are Alone...

Tears left the eyes... Pain was hitched on the face...

"I wish the time could come back..." the heart cried out loudly.

"You said you will never leave me... Roshni..." his Heart Screamed...:"Now see there is nothing left..." a muffled sob escaped.

"I'am dying every next moment... I'm Alive just to gain justice for you My Love... Or else for me there is nothing left..." many sobs escaped.

Tears rolled down to the chin "For you I'm still alive... I don't let myself die till i avenge you..." He rubbed his face.

This was the point he realized that there are some people who stayed in his heart but not in his Life...

The flames were burning him from the inside and the Pain was unbearable... Helpless Soul that to alone...

He held his hands to his forehead... He was trying to hide his Pain... He was striving to keep it within himself... but that hards... How long you won't Cry?

Life was making him feel worse and he didn't have even a single reason to Smile at...

He sighed... He felt Pity on himself...


"Why me???" Tears again escaped.

He lay down on the deck watching the sky soon the sky thundered... The nature was feeling sad for him... Sky started crying... It started raining...

He got up... The Rain water tried to soothe him... but it couldn't...

"I asked you Stay away for me... You didn't... See you are away from me now... Forever... Why don't you people left me alone... why you cared for me..." He was screaming "I'm Cursed... I can't be happy neither keeps you guys Happy... You aren't saved with me... My curse snatched your lives... I lost you..."

He fell down on his Knees crying harder... Drenched in Rain water... Desperate Heart...

Alas he asked "Does Happy ending really exists?" or these are just a lines to keep people Happy... and if it exists then why Happiness don't knocks the door of his House... why he is left with all this sufferings...

Suddenly light shined over him... The Cupid of LOVE had mercy on him...

Some minutes were given to his loved ones to meet him... encourage him... lOve him...

He picked his head up and saw his love standing in front of him...


Roshni sat down and cupped his face she sweetly wiped the tears of his face... it was still raining but there wasn't even a single drop of water on her face... She was shining...

"You are not alone... I'm always with you... though whatever the problems are... you will find me by your side... we all are Proud of you..."

He tried to speak something but she shushed him "Ssshh...you aren't cursed... you aren't bad... it's just fate that we can't fight... we all are proud of you... even if we are not here we all still by your side always my Love..."

He turned his head and saw his entire dear one's surrounding him smiling at him... He saw Shree, Liza and Chotu standing together with shinning face encouraging him... He then turned and saw Sameer and Aisha lovingly pleading him not to break down and there in one side stood Miss Sakshi... she was looking beautiful she smiled at his look and teasingly blew a Kiss to him and laughed...

After all his sight fell upon Riya... she was looking at peace... so believingly she blinked her eyes at assuring him her company... assuring him he is not alone...

It was the most Beautiful scene ever depicted in his life... All was perfect all was purely Blissful...

He held Roshni hand's requesting her to be with him... She smiled at that "I'm not gonna leave you alone... just promise me..." She held his hands "Whenever Love will knock the door of your Heart you will open it... Let all the pain vanish away... put of all he flames only let the flame of love shine in your Heart..." She kissed his forehead lightly "Promise us you will be Happy..."

He closed his eyes and soothed his heart with all the scene he watched...It was Heart touching...

Merely a moments passed he opened his eyes only to be Welcome by a New scene...

They all vanished and the Rain had stopped... It seems like as he calmed down so the nature stopped mourning...

A new Bright Sun Shined up in the sky... A new phase of life welcomed him...

He could sense his heart at Peace... his soul was not that much distressed now... Life is worse but still it showers its mercy on the one who are suffering... Life goes on whether you choose to move on and take a chance in the unknown... Or stay behind locked in the past...

He stood up and ran his fingers through his wet hair... He welcomed he sun with open arms... if Destiny chooses life for him then he will live... for the sake of those that he love...

His phone rang "Chief where are you we are waiting for you... " it was karan on the other side..

"I'm coming..." he replied.

He had to reach there... His Duties are waiting for him...

Patience is he only thing he has to keep now and see what life plans for him now... New challenges new troubles...

Again in Rawte form he forgot that Almighty always Bless people what they need not what they want...

And what he needs the most now was lOve...

So wait for the new Phase of Destiny and hope for best...

"I will be waiting here...
For your silence to break,
For your soul to shake,
For your love to wake!"❤️

So how was it do let me know by leaving yourr views
If got chance next Os will be ON "MEETING"😉
Diya121


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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
Wonderful OS
Emotional & painful
Yet so beautifully written 👏
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was beautiful u know... yet very painful...
excellent writing 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya09

it was beautiful u know... yet very painful...

excellent writing 👍🏼


THANKX sherya😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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one of d best os i read so far..
beautiful
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome and touchy
Nice concept
But please do continue other story soon
And finish those
So we feel relax other wise feeling
Hanging in middle
Thanks yaar

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