OS-JALAL JEALOUS(epilogue-pg 78)

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Parijatrocks

@Peacefulmind

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

nice update now again

itni chotu update

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks
why cant u make it FF out of this pls contnue and PM it u are amazing

thank u.😊

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soumya vohra

@coolfizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

OMJ (Oh my jalal 😆 )!!!

This was sooo sooo soooxinfinite good!!!

I mean! Ugghhh!! Y cant they show sumthing like this in the show!!??

Or why cant they show jodha gtting all drunk n confessing her feelings? 😆 ok this is too much but still :P

I loved every bit of the 2 updates! ❤️

Loved how he described every minute detail of jodha... Sigh...reminded me of those olden golden days when jalal used to tease her...irritate her...push her n pull her ❤️

Then...his confession!!

Oh goddd!!!

How can a gal not fall for this guy after sucha a lovely confession!!!

I mean come on! Main to flat hogayi ❤️

Update it super dooper trooper frooper soon ❤️

And yes...PM me whenevr u do ❤️

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

jallal is so cute when he is jealous
awesome upt
cont soon

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Super super super super super cute OS anchal...absolutely loved it...😳

Till a moment before the MU, this is how jalal was...I desperately want something like this to happen in the show..😭

The entire twist with ranveer (his best friend) spotting Jo and falling for her made the whole thing quite interesting...you've cleverly crafted a script for something that would have been next to impossible in that era ...ie someone falling for the wife of the shehenshah!

Excellent work anchal...excellent read! 👏

Kudos to you girl! Loved the emotions you've used too...very rarely do I sit through a read mesmerised...this was one such (esp since it pertained to the current storyline!)👏

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow dear

this is amazing

love it 👍🏼

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SUMESHNI

@SUMESHNI

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awesome update just loved it .plz pm me

Continue soon

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maanluvsgeet

@maanluvsgeet

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

mind blowing part... 👏

Finally at least in ur OS Jalal spoke his heart out...thank god...

Hope u have more for us 😉😃

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: lashy
Super super super super super cute OS anchal...absolutely loved it...😳
Till a moment before the MU, this is how jalal was...I desperately want something like this to happen in the show..😭
The entire twist with ranveer (his best friend) spotting Jo and falling for her made the whole thing quite interesting...you've cleverly crafted a script for something that would have been next to impossible in that era ...ie someone falling for the wife of the shehenshah!
Excellent work anchal...excellent read! 👏

Kudos to you girl! Loved the emotions you've used too...very rarely do I sit through a read mesmerised...this was one such (esp since it pertained to the current storyline!)👏

wow shraddha this is one of the best complimets i have received so far for my writing...i know when i comment on other ff's i don't write long ones,but i love it when u guyz give me such detail analysis and compliments...this was originally a one shot,then it turned into a 2nd...dont know how long this will be esp when i wanted to update my other ff..lets see.😊

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Awesome OS...
Loved it...

Do cont soon..

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