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Posted: 11 years ago
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to increase forum activity here is a simple task

many have read OS of others but this time you have to write

very simple

sandy is going to leave for training right ( ignore the Heart attack incident)

just imagine how surya will feel after suraj drops sandy in the training academy and leaves for pushkar

your os can be funny serious sentimental anything

simply anything will do

but you have to write an :OS thats all

you are the director of that particular episode


dont shy feel free to write
anything written will be appreciated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sandya-she is thinking fr training and sharing each and everything(her fear and happiness) with suraj
suraj-suraj smiling at her and listening wt she says.and said now we have to go away from this academy. (but little fear in his heart)
sandya-tears r coming in her eyes. suraj ji itni jaldi?.
bhabho-suraj,sandya beendini, jaldi avv.
suraj,sandya-ayi bhabho
bhabho-chora,hum jaane ka samay ho chuke hi. beendini teri dyan rakhana. hum tho jaana hi
sandya-sandya taking asirvad from bhabhasa and bhabho. then looking at sooraj.
bhabho-teri dyan rakhana. chal chora!
bhbho bhabhasa sooraj leaving academy
sandya- aap subki bina 11mahine rehana padega
😭
suraj-bhabho me ek baath kehana hi sandya se. me ab aathe hum.
suraj running back to academy. it required 10 min
sandya-sandya thinking abt suraj and her sweet memories with him. sandya sitting on bench. and crying
😭
suraj-suraj calling sandya,
sandya-sandya see him. then cute hug. crying like a baby.
new friend from academy-put her hand on sandya shoulder. asking r u k. then sandya open her eyes. its imagination.
😉
sandya-ha,fine. pehali bar gar se bahar ayithi. isliye.
new friend-tike. me chalthi hum. jaldi ajaav.
sandya-tike. then she is thinking abt suraj.
suraj-he came nearer to sandya. calling sandya!!
sandya-she is looking at him. no response 😕
suraj sit beside her and then handlock. sandya realised its true. not her imagination.
small eyelock. then hug. aap ki bina ek pal bi nahi reha sakthi suraj ji.
suraj-mujhe bi. both r crying.
sandya- wo ai nee suraj ji.
suraj-wo ai nee sandya. aap ka dyan rakhana. har rath me phone pe bath karoonga!
me tho nikalana hi.
then suraj leaving the academy.


first time i wrote. please feel to criticise.
Edited by ksp9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sandya has left for training..its been a week since sandya left for training...suraj lost his mobile while on the way to training unknown to sandya...suraj is sad as he cannot communicate properly without bhabo interference and sandya misses suraj badly there..suraj decides to suprise sandy by visiting her in academy. But bhabo calls for angan drama..she calls everyone and tells that she cant see surya in pain so she bought shop for rent in Hyderabad so that suraj can be there and start his own sweet shop and be with sandya .this doesn't go well with others as suraj will have new shop.but bhabo takes vacham from suraj that he should be here twice a week to take care of family and family comes first ..once ips ove suraj should come back ..he's allowingonly this time..(she thinks in mind so that she can get tabaar and next time it will be easy for suraj)everyone reluctantlyv agree as they can't see suraj in pan.suraj is ectastic though he's little sad leaving pushkar..suraj reaches academy ans sees sandya training and becomes proud of her and plans Romantic dinner for them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I wrote what comes into my mind.hope it is readable. This is first time writing please frree to criticize😊
Edited by surya_dabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os preethi. romantic.
suraj new shop in hyd. 😊 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksp9

nice os preethi. romantic.
suraj new shop in hyd. 😊 .

I'm dreaming like this sp😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ayesha ramadi write one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow sp
never knew you could write so beautifully

👏
expecting more from you
thala thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice preethi
simple and superb👏

you can split the paragraph , it will look better

bhabo takes vacham from suraj that he should be here twice a week to take care of family and family comes first

🤣 vachan from suraj too


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Posted: 11 years ago
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there is no need for knowledge to write os

imagine how you want teh episode to be
and just write as though you are commenting with more lines
thats alll


this topic is only to bring out the hidden talent in our dabhily

dont worry
it will be awsm
best wishes
Edited by thala - 11 years ago

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