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@-LuvSiyaRam-

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: thala
VD
omg
what a first attempt

ooppa
awsm

plz do continue
a small suggestion

create a new thread and post this os and its updates too

thank u thala it means a lot to me😊

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thala

@thala

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

we have so many writers in our forum

wow

dont stop here

and keep writing more

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Bharathi

@b2011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Nice updates Hema.

Nice OS Vardhini.

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hema latha

@jhema

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

SurYa hugged each other. Others saw them with tearful eyes. Suraj caressed her hair and says" All the best ! Wo ai nee Sandhyaji! "She looks up to see him and says" Wo ai nee Suraji! " She once again saw them all and waves her hands to say bye. They all to say bye to her. She walks towards the hostel and others walks towards the gate. SurYa turns back again and again to see other till they disappear from their vision. When they are nearing the gate they came to know from others that as tomorrow is the first day for the candidates for their training , their visitors can see their training for one day only. After knowing abt this they all decided to come tomorrow too to see sandy's training. And they stay in a nearby hotel.

Sorry if there is no logic in this part

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.kat.

@.kat.

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Nice hema! Logic or not, good one! 👍🏼

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hema latha

@jhema

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

In hotel room, Bhabho and bhabhasa are taking rest as they are too tired because of long journey. Ankitha is putting chutki to sleep. Suraj is standing in the balcony alone and is lost in sandy's thoughts. On seeing him Ankur went near him and put his hands on suraj's shoulders. Suraj got back his senses and says" Ji". Ankur holds his hands says" Suraji! I have no words to thank you. ! I have repented many times for what I did for sandhya. But today I'm feeling happy for that. And I hope Our Parents too feels happy for that. Only Because of you Sandhya is now here. Without you she wont able to achieve this. I understand this separation will be paining for both of you. " Suraj cuts him and says" Not like that Ankurji! All this happening is already fixed by destiny. Sandhya's dream come to me from Sasurji's hands through that pen. Even before our marriage. All r already fixed. "

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hema latha

@jhema

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Ankitha heared all this and comes near to them, "Suraji ! Your are saying this because of your nature. But we know how much you struggled for her dream than her. " Suraj replies to her" Ankithaji ! Sandhya loves me a lot than I did. In the beginning she had many chances to break our marriage. But she never did. She never disrespect me because of my job or my education . She only recognized my talent and makes me to achieve something. She is always to ready to sacrifice her dream because of my sake. " Saying this he again lost in her thoughts. Ankur and Ankitha don't want to disturb him again and leaves from there. At the same time in hostel sandhya arranged all her things and went near the window and see the moon and think about suraj. Here Suraj too looking at the moon and thinks about SAndhya. It was like they are communicating through that moon. They stand like that without knowing the time