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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
finally ria out
continue soon
sorry for the late reply
thanks for the pm





thnx alot dear
its ok
ur wlcm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pt311288





thnx alot dear
its ok
ur wlcm



thanks😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Did you pm me this fF before??????????
No, i don't think so...😡
This was too good.actually i wanted n innocent story like this...
Loved it and please try to update soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Did you pm me this fF before??????????

No, i don't think so...😡
This was too good.actually i wanted n innocent story like this...
Loved it and please try to update soon...




i did pm you yaar 😃

updating 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter-5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98110036


Chapter - 6

(Boy friend, boy friend part -1 )

Shlok's room

Shlok was studying when astha came to his room she found him near the table and went straight to him.

Astha - shloky we need to talk its urgent

Shlok- astha tomorrow I am having my physics test can we discuss it latter I am really busy he said without looking at her , she got a bit irked because of his nonchalant behavior.

Astha - (pouted) shlok please listen na I need to talk its really very urgent , please it will take only 5 minutes I swear it will take just 5 minutes please shloky...

Shlok- ok tell me whats the matter he asked lookin at her?

Astha- ummm shlok wo kya hai na ? I mean I want to tell you that I need a boy friend and she blushed a little while uttering this and can u please help me get one?

Shlok- was completely flustered he stared at her and said Astha you are too young to have a boy friend and more over I am your best friend as well as a boy too on that note I m like your boy friend only so what is the need of getting new one

Astha - I knew this u will definitely say like this but I am not going to get carried away by your statement if I need a bf it means I need one that's it and if u are not going to help me I will manage on my own. it's just that even I Aai told me I am grown up now so I need not to take your permission but as u are my besty so I thought to tell to first . Moreover my every girl friend is having bf and they only told me besty and bf is two poles apart.

Shlok- ok kiddo we will talk about this latter right now can I study its necessary for me don't u want you're besty to get good rank in class? He said almost pleading because he was very clear that he can't make her understand now.

Astha - ok but you forgot something else too?

Shlok - (almost agitated) now what is that?

Astha - don't get pissed off its my good night kiss you moron and with this she pecked on his cheek and his anger vanished at that instant she was about to leave when he held her hand got up from his chair holding her face from both his hand , pecked on her forehead and said good night my doll. She winked at him and with a glee full smile went to her bed .

Next day at school canteen

Shlok and Raghav were sitting there when they saw astha and neha coming to them.

Astha - hi shloky and gave a look at Raghav

Neha - hi shlok, hello Rk how are u guys?

Shlok and Raghav in unison fine yaar

Then Raghav looked at Astha and said - look kiddo learn some etiquettes from neha .

Astha- almost fumed and said look u stupid dork don't call me kiddo only shloky can call me that u need not forget this. And shlok why the heck u carry your tail with u all the time? He doesn't even know how to address a grown up lady...

Astha ignored him and looked at shlok - "we need to talk shloky I hope you remember?"

Shlok- about what?

Astha- about boyfriend I need one I told you yesterday. And I am grown up lady now ...

Raghav- god! You need a bf or a baby sitter kiddo? But why u need one when u already have shlok by your side. Raghav started laughing hard in between this we said omg when does this happened? Are you serious I guess u must be kidding kiddo? You can never grow up little girl astha will always remain a kiddo...

astha is a kiddo she is a kiddo na na na na...

Shlok and neha looked at Astha they tried to stop to Raghav but he continued his blabbering when astha got up from her chair holding Raghav soldier from both her hand and gazed at him like a famished tigress.

Astha- you moron I am grown up now and I have proof of that even Aai said I am I am a young lady now.

Raghav - oh really kiddo when she said that I guess in your dream?

Astha - was really pissed off now she gave a hard smack on his nose and almost screamed you dirty lad she actually said that to me because now I to started getting my periods like any other girl do got that she jerked him away holding her hand as its started paining because of the hit .

She looked around found herself gazed by all she was actually confused then she looked at shlok and neha , neha gave her a look to accompany her and then she looked at Raghav who was actually looking awfully at astha holing his bleeding nose she gave him a I can't help it look and left from there taking astha by her side bearing all the embarrassment caused to all by Astha .

Shlok- looked at first at Astha in utter disbelief she never hit any one like this before he was actually shocked by her behavior and then he looked at Raghav who was sitting on his chair holding his nose he pitied Raghav went near to him they didn't exchanged a word . Shlok said come lets go for first aid. He was actually more embarrassed because of the last statement uttered by Astha in canteen almost everyone was looking at them when she said that thing to prove herself. God! This girl will make me crazy some day.

Raghav was brooding "She got really annoyed from me that she hit me even, I could see the trace of anger in her eyes. OMG those big doe like eyes were popping out of rage for me. I should not have made fun of her. I know her well she never hurt anyone, and if she hit me then it means she was really angry on me. What I will do now? how I will convince her as far as I know her she will definitely not talk to me any more god stupid me. I need to fix all this I hurt that poor soul again".

Neha took astha to GCR ( girls common room) she gave a look at astha .

Astha- what? Why you are staring at me?

Neha- astha yaar grow up sweety do you know what u just said casually in canteen about your periods stuff is not a matter to disclose publicly. Please from next time if you are to talk about your private stuff do tell me prior to make public announcement of that.

Astha- made a face and said I know I should not have said that even Aai also asked me not to discuss about that to any boy but I forgot. And more over I hit Rk so badly he was bleeding I shouldn't have done that I need to say him sorry she pouted again.

next part chapter-7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3820785/tere-liye-updated-chapter-12-page-42-date-25-01-2014?pn=19

sorry for any kid of grammar or spelling mistakes its just i didnt recheck it even once before posting

do hit like and do comment also

i know i write crap but cant help it 😭


Edited by pt311288 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Wow.got first place...great...
actually i was expecting such stuff from astha now.i was sure, she is about to shout about the periods stuff... somewhere, she is such a stupid one.i just hope neha really teach her some manners ad not shlok...
otherwise good update...
Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: jeenia123

<font size="3" color="#ff0000">Wow.got first place...great...</font>

<font size="3" color="#ff0000">actually i was expecting such stuff from astha now.i was sure, she is about to shout about the periods stuff... somewhere, she is such a stupid one.i just hope neha really teach her some manners ad not shlok...</font>
<font size="3" color="#ff0000">otherwise good update...</font>





awwe thnks dear actually i was waiting fr ur comments on my wrk
today i found them and m happy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Yayyy...you updated again. I am so glad and I am really enjoying your story. Your Astha and your Shlok are so so adorable. There's so much of innocence in your writing. Great going and do continue to update. 😊👏
And no you most definitely do not write crap 😊. I too wish Neha teaches her to be a lady and Astha wows Shlok soon.
Edited by ipkkndfollower - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower

Yayyy...you updated again. I am so glad and I am really enjoying your story. Your Astha and your Shlok are so so adorable. There's so much of innocence in your writing. Great going and do continue to update.😊👏

And no you most definitely do not write crap😊. I too wish Neha teaches her to be a lady and Astha wows Shlok soon.



awww thnks a lot
i know u are just cheering me up but i do love to read positive comments its like boosting ...
i will definitely try to update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pt311288





awwe thnks dear actually i was waiting fr ur comments on my wrk
today i found them and m happy


yaar i always read your work and checked it too as soon si got the pm...i m loving the concept...just make her a bit mature to know, what to speak t times...it would have gone well if only they four were there, but she made mockery of herself in canteen...that just didn't go well with me...actually no girls are so innocent these days...just my opinion being a girl/lady...no negativity...

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