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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

When is this 30 minutes wait goin to end...😔

wwaaaiiitttinnnggg...😊


going to end dear...
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Originally posted by: jeenia123

aa gyi main.updating...




main bhi aa gayi
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Hey guys, thanks for liking previous part...
First of all a request to all students here...
YEs, i Know these are exams days and you people are quite busy... i just request you to take care of your study first.because updates once posted here will be here only...you may read and comment later too but study, your career is always first except you are not willing to sit at home.so please don't write sorry for not commenting or not commenting long because of your busy schedule...The love i am getting here is more than enough for me...

So i think teaser will be on new thread today...if need one...As its Friday..
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Part-32

Ai jindagee yeh lamha jee lene de

pehle se likha kuchh bhee nahee

Roj naya kuchh likhatee hai too

Jo bhee likha hai, dil se jiya hai

Yeh lamha filhal jee lene de

Life was getting a bit fast for them these days, Shlok had started visiting his father's office for few hours in day and was taking medicines properly...while Astha was with him daily at day time as Aashka as his friend whom he could talk nonstop about Astha and at night in his dreams making him feel good and happy every morning...

Masum see hasee bevajah hee kabhee honto pe khil jatee hai

Anjan see khushee behatee huyee kabhee sahil pe mil jatee hai

Yeh anjana sa darr ajnabee hai magar khubsurat hai jee lene de

Yeh lamha filhal jee lene de

Shlok used to tell her old stories of Astha and his and Astha was smiling listening all those form his point of view...sometime smiling, sometimes, with tears...knowing or unknowing Aashka was a support for him...

Dil hee me rehta hai aankho me baheta hai, kacccha sa ek khwab hai

Lagta sawal hai shayad jawab hai, dil phir bhee betab hai

Yeh sukun hai toh hai, yeh junun hai toh hai

Khubsurat hai jee lene de

Whenever Astha felt low due to mood swings of Pregnancy.., she needed her Shlok...she wanted to keep her head on shlok's shoulder, wanted to hold him, wanted to hug him tight...but she knew it is not possible yet...More than Shlok, it was getting difficult for her to manage these days... For Shlok, she was Aashka just a friend... he had his limits as a friends, he never even touched her... But for Astha, he was his love, his life...at nights when she was with him, sometimes she wanted to crush herself into him... weakness of human nature...all want to be touched by their loved ones...but she could not, then she used to caress her stomach caressing her baby...and smiled with tears...just few days baby, then we will be completely with your papa...

Yeh lamha filhal jee lene de...

pehle se likha kuchh bhee nahee

Roj naya kuchh, oh likhatee hai too

Jo bhee likha hai, dil se jiya hai

Yeh lamha filhal jee lene de...

It was one fine day when Shlok was at home as it was his chemo session one day before...he was feeling weak so he had not been to the office...while Aashka went there at his home, ...she went to Shlok's room who was sleeping on the bed without blanket...she slowly moved closer looking at him sleeping innocently and put blanket on him caressing his face...just one more month to go Shlok...she whispered slowly...

Listening something Shlok opened his eyes and was a bit surprised seeing Aashka closer...

I was...she stammered...I was putting blanket on you...you were feeling cold...

Thanks...all Shlok said..

Are you ok? She asked...need anything?

Shlok smile don listening...truly speaking, I need something, but can't get...

Let me know, maybe I will be able to provide you...Astha smiled...

I need my Astha... he sighed... a tear rolled over Astha's eye listening...she immediately wanted to move ahead and hug him...but had to control herself...

You are missing her very badly these days?

Shlok nodded in yes... One month has passed, I didn't see her, every night she is in my dreams, my arms...i feel her but I want to see her in front of me... He closed his eyes...

(Astha wanted to remove her burqa immediately and tell him...look your Astha in front of you...she was here only always...for every moment...) If she come back, will you accept her now? She too miss you a lot... many times Gauri tells me...

No chance, I can't...Shlok spoke slowly...today doctor told me, maybe I have just six to seven more months...i am getting weak day by day... I am losing myself... as if I am near my death...before he could complete...Astha immediately placed her hand on his mouth...never ever say so... Many people are wishing for you day and night... many elder's blessings are with you, nothing can happen to you...

Shlok held her hand...you know Aashka...I got a very good friend s you, who understands me but all I need is my Astha...just I know, how my one month has passed by now...sometimes I think, if this was my future, why god made me fall in so much love with her? Was not I happy alone?

May be God has decided something else for you , yet you yourself are unknown to that... Astha pressed his hand...

Now what? Nothing can go fine in just six months... I just wish...once I meet my Astha...i want to take her in my arms once again, I want to feel her...saying he covered his face with his palms...while Astha could not take any more and ran outside...

Aashka...Shlok followed her...are you ok?

Ya, I am ...actually your wish to see Astha make me remember my husband... Nothing else...she wiped her tears...Ok, lets change mood, let me cook something for you...what would you like to have?

Umm...I would love to eat ...what about sandwiches? Shlok too smiled for change of mood...

Y, sure...saying Atsha started preparing for sandwiches...she was cutting vegetables and Shlok was looking at her working style...

Wasie ek baat bolun...he spoke...

Hum...Astha replied...

Sometimes, I feel you are just like Astha, your working style, your voice...sometimes resembles to her...

Listening, Astha was shocked and coughed immediately...meanwhile her finger got cut with knife...

Aah...she shouted and knife dropped from her hand...

Aashka, Shlok shouted a bit ad held her hand putting into water...while Atsha was controlling her pain pressing h r lips tightly...

Shlok applied medicine and bandaged on wound and smiled... No, you can't be like her...

What? A moment before, you were saying, I am like her...now you are saying no...ye haan naa kya hai...Astha was getting irritated now...

Actually, if she had got this wound, she would have shouted to my death till now...he smiled remembering some incidence while Astha was also smiling remembering something...

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Astha, let me cook jaan...Shlok was holding knife in kitchen...i promise, this time I will cook perfectly...

Astha pulled knife from his hand...no Shlok...this is fifth time , you are going to ruin our dinner...but today I am not in the mood to destroy our date...so just side from here...I will cook myself ...saying she pulled knife from him and started cutting vegetables...

Haan...let me see how you cook...saying Shlok placed his hands on her stomach holding her from back and started making soft circles near her navel button...Astha was giggling...

Shlok stop it yaar...

But Shlok moved ahead collecting her hair from shoulder and started pacing soft kisses on her neck... A Shiver went through Astha...and she was losing her control...

She spoke huskily..Shlok, if your are not controlling yourself now...you will be responsible for after effects...

Ahaan...looks today my sweetie is in mood to kill me...he too spoke huskily moving a bit ahead...and pressing her against him... while suddenly she got cut on her hand due to knife...

Aah...she started shouting throwing knife on the floor and jumping badly...Shlok, help , I am dying...

Astha...Shlok pulled her, let me see, it's just a small cut...

No, can't you see, so much blood I am loosing, she shouting holding her hand tightly...Shlok immediately put water while she was still shouting, when Shlok took antiseptic to clean the wound...

No...she pulled her hand from shlok's hand...no , don't use this...It will be quite paining...

Noting will happen sweetie, just close your eyes...

No, i can't...she was shouting and Shlok was completely irritated...

Astha...he shouted pulling her into his arms and placed his lips tightly on her...she resisted a bit but soon was lost in his charm ...

After few moments, he broke the kiss midway...

What? Astha got irritated...

My work is over...Shlok smirked...

Work? Astha was shocked...when Shlok signaled her towards her finger, it was bandaged...When? When did you do it?

He pulled her closer...ummm...when you were lost in me...he winked at her...

She smiled and wrapped her arms round his neck...see your effect, your love makes me forget everything , every pain...saying she moved closer and kissed Shlok...

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Shlok... Astha whispered slowly...yes, your love make me forget my pain, and then why could not my love make you forget everything?

Shlok came out of his world...said something?

N...nothing...saying she started making sandwiches for him...

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Two days had passed to the incident...when doorbell of Shlok's flat rang at day time...

Ramu kaka had been to market... It must be Aashka... Thinking Shlok had to go and opened the door...

As he opened the door, he was shocked as well as surprised...

Astha?

Yes, Astha was standing in front of him with her ever smiling face...


So waiting for the feedback...and teaser will be in new thread only...Good Luck...


Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Aap ka yhan ane ke liye bhut bhut shukriya...are main to nobita ban gyi...(know nobita?)
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thnaks for commenting after so many days...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
so shlok finally kept his promise and joined his dads office and taking medicines properly..
shlok and aashka friendship increasing day by day...nice



Whenever Astha felt low due to mood swings of Pregnancy.., she needed her Shlok...she wanted to keep her head on shlok's shoulder, wanted to hold him, wanted to hug him tight...but she knew it is not possible yet...More than Shlok, it was getting difficult for her to manage these days... For Shlok, she was Aashka just a friend... he had his limits as a friends, he never even touched her... But for Astha, he was his love, his life...at nights when she was with him, sometimes she wanted to crush herself into him... weakness of human nature...all want to be touched by their loved ones...but she could not, then she used to caress her stomach caressing her baby...and smiled with tears...just few days baby, then we will be completely with your papa...


this one is really nice part... Loved astha's feelings ,,,,, her mood swings and all
its difficult for her to hide everything to her//his love
then the flash bAck part is good
the last part is awesome
astha came to visit shlok 😲
but I'm thinking its shlok 's dream... My guess... But I think its not right guess😆
continue soon



now I want teaser soon😉
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Thnaks a lot dear...😊
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Competition is getting harder niki...

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