^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET II} PRT-155to157 pg-50 - Page 18

Yarrr its jus tooo awesum..

Gosh geet pagal ho gyi...

Maan ka reply to sam ws too gud..

I jus lov dis ff,n ur styleof writing is superb.


Conti soon dear.

Hope she is ok...maan won't let anything happen to her...

wow amazing update but readers lost interest when there is huge gape in updates please try to be regular

nice parts !! sorry for being late !! aaliya has big mouth...made geet to go into depression !! maan trying to be cool minded...answered sam well and waiting to see how he would handle that doctor !!

waiting for next part n hope we get it soon 😛 n i wana see maan emotional side n love for geet hope story move litle bit n we are nt interested in other versions only intrested in maaneet

PART 146

He can't remember when he was so last angry. There was Geet, being wheeled inside, her head a bloody mess and this bald old slug was harping about a piece of a paper. It was his Geet that was dying!

Doctor pats Maan on his shoulder making him look away from the door where Geet had been taken into, saying, "Aare jao leke aao"

Maan looks at the man, who was busy telling the orderly to wheel Geet to morgue if the FIR isn't submitted directly. Had the doctor not been busy, he would have seen the murder in Maan's eyes and understood that he himself would be in morgue before his wife got sent there.

Waving a dismissing hand at Maan the doctor tells him to leave, get the FIR and stop wasting everyone's time.

Maan curled his fingers and held it tightly by his side, making the doctor unconscious right now wouldn't help Geet. So instead after a few seconds of deep breathing Maan grabs the doctor by his shirt front, he better see what would happen if Geet isn't treated.

"Listen to me carefully. Treat. My. Wife. NOW."

Maan says in a dead calm voice to the doctor and then let's go of him, straightens his collar, "You'll have all the papers by the time you are done treating her."

The doctor squeaked, "S..Sec..Securi-"

"If anything happens to her, the minute you step out of this building the same will happen to you. Jail isn't my problem if anything happens to her.", Maan told the doctor, letting him see the menace in him, the cold white madness in him. His eyes showed no fear, no worry, no stress only certainty.

The doctor nods.. He had seen concerned relatives before but not people who belonged to psychiatric wards.

Maan watched the doctor walk away and closed his eyes, holding onto the anger he felt at the doctor, the fury at the yellow tapes system, coz to think of anything else, he couldn't bear.

Making a few calls he had the papers he needed, his contacts from police over liquor license and business were always useful. Some indifferent nurse made the mistake of asking him to sign the disclaimer forms (about the hospital not being responsible if anything happened to the patient), but ran away as soon as she saw Maan's blazing eyes, letting the form fly away, informing the psychiatric squad seemed a better option.

A few hours later the nurse informed Maan that the patient was awake and he could see her now. Maan goes inside the room she was fine Geet was fine and she would be alright. Maan breathed relieved.

Inside the private room Geet lay, her pretty head all bandaged up, Maan could so go and break Sam's fianc's nose right now.

Taking small tentative steps to her side, Maan touched her hand, it took several attempts and few swallows to get out the simple words.

"Kaisi ho? How are you feeling?"

Geet looked down to where his single finger rested on her hand, her eyes filled with guilt. She managed to nod.

But Maan wanted more than a nod, he wanted to hear her voice, she looked so pale and fragile and breakable, as if one touch would shatter her. "Good? Does it hurt much?"

He wraps his fingers around her cold ones, sits down at the edge of bed, he needed to hear her touch her, see her, feel her. He needed her.

But Geet only shakes her head, no pain.

"Good good. Will it leave scars or anything?", Maan asked for lack of anything else to say. He couldn't ask her why. He didn't want to hear any reasons why death seemed a better option to her than being with him. At least he was better than death. He was, he was changing trying to be a better man, surely he was better. He really was. Wasn't he?

Geet wet her lips and croaked in a low voice, "tu...tumhe kaam se jaana tha?"

She couldn't even stand him sitting there? Was he really that bad?

"s.scars... pata nahi, kya farak padta hai?" she said looking away.

Maan lets go of her hand lacing his fingers together in his lap and replies with a sigh, "Kabhi aur chala jaunga. Aur farak padta hai. 3 mahine baad shaadi mei jana hai... you would want to look your best right?

Maan asked lamely, woman's pride was all he had to build on. She didn't wanna talk to him, look at him, be touched by him, near him. She wanted to die than be with him!

"Shaadi?", Geet asked, Maan was wrong, she wasn't one of those who only cared about looks.

"Sam ki shaadi", Maan replies hopefully. Atleast she was talking to him now.

She frowns, which Maan didn't like at all. He should have kept his mouth shut. Him alone Geet can tolerate but him along with Sam is what drove her to this probably. He wanted to kick himself for bringing up the @#$%$@ name. Instead he leans over and pats her cheek softly.

"Congratulate him from my side" Geet said turn her cheek away from his hand.

"Tum nai chalogi? Mana mat karna... warna wo phir kahega ki shaadi nai karni..." Maan said pasting a fake smile, trying to cheer her up.

"Mera naa jaana hi acha h. Waise...tumhe jaana chahiye, tumhari flight thi. I am ok, you can go", Geet said still not ready to face Maan, but her eyes were going misty and Maan really didn't care about anything in the world other than taking away her anguish at that moment.

"Kahan jau? Tum aise kaam karogi to kahan jaunga?" Maan asked finally allowing some of the deep frustration and hurt he was feeling into his eyes.

Her eyes flicked to him for less than a second and then again looked away. Hiding away from him. Well is she had that big a problem with him being around, she'll just have to say it out loud, Maan thought and relentlessly said, "I guess I'll have to start working from home..

"I am sorry, meri wajah se tumhe takleef hui." Geet was feeling guilty, she had ruined Sam's life, his fianc's life and probably her husband's life too. And now the latest his business..

"I am not the one who is hurt here, mera khoon nai nikla, main marte marte nai bacha." He said in his low calm angry voice, which he only used when he was so angry that he didn't trust himself to remain human.

She is responsible for this, this condition of his. Whatever she does it never seems to be the right thing. Well she had done enough meddling, no more.

Eyeing the IV needle which was feeding much needed blood to her veins, she snatches the tube and rips it off just when Maan was telling her to have a higher opinion of herself. Feeling slight pain and the assurance that things would be better without her Geet closes her eyes, a smile hovering on her lips.

Meanwhile Maan shouts for the nurse. He had only talked about staying at home, GOD! She didn't have to rip open her veins a simple no would have sufficed. Well it seemed like being politely in control wasn't getting through to her. Maybe she didn't understand what he can do, what he was going to do if something happens to her. And that how nothing will be happening to her.

It was only a matter of letting Geet see a little of what he had shown the doctor and the nurses outside. He grabs her jaw and roughly turns it to face him. It was probably the abrupt roughness that made her open her eyes.

With a biting voice, Maan moved his face inches away from hers, "Ek aur, ek aur harkat karo aise.. Just one more, I swear mental ward mei shift kara donga lekin akele nai chodunga."

She thought living with him in a house was bad enough, she should know till where he would follow her.

What Geet really thought was about the hint of craze and something else wandering in Maan's eyes.

Before anything else could be said, the nurse comes and asked how did everything happen, looking at Maan suspiciously.

Maan calmly walks away from the bed to lounge against the opposite wall, "I was giving her some water it happened by accident"

As the nurse cleaned up Geet, reattached the blood IV. Gave Maan another fearful scathing look and walked away. It was time enough for Maan to hide away his panic and anger.

"Kyon kar rai ho ye?" he asks her, in a voice as normal as asking her what time it is.

Geet is silently looking at Maan, sans expression, what had she seen in his eyes?

"Geet baat karo mujhse pls. Why did u do this? Why are you continuing to do this?"

She is silent, her lips zip locked, surely it wasn't... what his eyes had said to her...

"Nai bataogi? Itni problem hai mujhse?"

Tentatively Geet said, "Tumse kyun problem hogi? Maine jo kiya sahi kiya, tum nahi samjhoge", would he let her see that expression again?

But Maan was cool as cucumber, "To samjhao, idiot se shaadi nai ki tumne."

"Tumne to ki hai"

"Agar nai samjha pai to main yai samjonga ki you are fed up with me, so you have decided to take your life." Maan said casually but more or less summed up all his fears in that one line.

"Chinta mat karo, mere marne ka ilzaam tumpe nahi ayega", Geet said staring intently at him.

"Tumne kaha tha chod kar nai jaogi... Mujhe laga tha ki jhoot bol rai ho u will go away with some person.. nai socha tha ki aise chod ke jane ki koshish karogi. As for me being responsible for this attempt, ilzaam koi aur lagaye ya na lagaye main to manuga, I have driven you to this."

"Tumhari kya galti h? Bass main jo kar rahi sahi kar rahi hu. ache ke lie kar rahi hu. Sam se puchlo wo tumhe samjha dega."

"Kiske ache kie liye?", Maan asked casually walking up to her again, but he was rapidly losing whatever cool he had managed to gain.

"Sam... Sam mujhe samjhaega tumhare baare mei? Wo ab tumhe mujhse jyada janta hai?"

"Haan wo-"

"To mai hi idiot hoon jo itne dino mein tumhe nai jaan saka lekin Sam genius hai ki wo tumhe 24 ghante se bhi kaam time mein samjh gaya and now you want to die coz you are tied to with an idiot like me, instead of genius like him!" Maan said his voice rising up by a few octaves. He would have come close to shouting but his phone rang, Sam was calling him.

Giving Geet a smile that promised violence he informs her, "Lo tumhare BFF ka bhi phone a gaya"

PART 147

M-Lo tumhare bff ka bhi phone aa gaya

Maan uthata hai phone

Sam-kaisa hai bey? Kya kaar raha hai saale?

M-Hopital mein hoon. Tere murder ka plan bana raha hoon

Sam-Kyun, kya ho gaya? Kise thok diya?

M-Pehle wo maregi, phir tereko tapkaunga...phir teri fiancee ko aur phir koi scenic se khaai dekh kar khud kood jaunga

Geet murmers, 'chup raho Maan'

Sam-Kaun maregi rey?

M-Geet ko lagta hai that you don't think she desreves to live so wo suicide kar rahi hai

Sam-Kyaaa suicide???????????????????????????????

m-Yup! So...you want a bullet or poison. Tereko tadpa ke marunga so poison...

Geet extends her hand to gesture Maan to sit near her

Maan baith jata hai

Sam-Kahin usne note mein mera naam to nahi likha?

M- Nai nahi abhi to zinda hai. Note mein naam main likh doonga...pehle tera naam phir teri uss fiancee ka phir mera

Geet also sits up and keeps her head on his shoulder

Sam-Abbey ! ye to bilkul pagal hai yaar!

M-Sam...[He says calmly]...sach bata...tujhe kab laga ki main sane hoon? Ek bar ek incidence bata when you thought I was completly sane?

Sam daant phaadke hasne lag jaata hai

M-Bol saale...maine Africa se tereliye snakes ka bhi intezaam kar diya hai. Teri finacee ke liye it's bullet in head, bohot bolti hai

Sam-Par yaar aise suicide-vuicide , pagal hai kya? Sahi life hai uski, paisa-vaisa sab hai...kiski kami hai bol?

M-Kiski kami?...Hmm I don't know some a**hole's approval I guess..

Sam-Kaisa approval?

M-oh I dont know? Approval to live and be around people...apni pyaari soon to be dead hone wali wife se pooch

Sam-Chal phone de use

M-huh...itna pagal bhi nahi hoon main. Nahi dunga phone...saari gadbad hi phone se huyi hai...

Sam-Karne de naa baat. Main kehta hoon use ki aage se naa kare

M-Loudspeaker par kar raha hoon..

He puts it on loudspeaker

M-Geet! Sam ko baat karni hai

G-oh why?

M-I don't know what he will say...

G-Congrats sam and sorry for everything [She says cutly and formally]

Sam-Bhabhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

G-Kya? [she shrugs]

Sam-Aap thik to ho naa?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

G-Haan

Sam-Maan aapka khayal rakh to raha hai naa???!!!!!!!!

G-Haan haan [She says irritatedly]

Sam-Aap kahiye yaa to main aur Aliya aa jayenge agar uss jungli se kuch nai hoga to

Geet looks at Maan with expression , ki 'ye chilla kyun raha hai'

G-Nahi thanks

Sam-Nahi bhabhi aap boliye!!!! Mujhe pata hai Maan jhoot bol raha hai... uski hi wajah se aapko lagi hogi and ab saara blame aap par daal raha hai

G-Dekho Sam, main zinda hoon isliye hum dono ko hi acting karne ki zarurat nahi hai. Hum dono hi jaante hain, tum mujhe kitna pasand karte ho aur Aliya bhi. Tumne haal-chal pucha bohot acha laga

Sam-Nai bhabhi!!!!!! Aisa nahi hai...

G-Maine jo kiya , khud se kiya hai

Sam-Wo to misunderstanding thi...bhabhi aap ye kya keh rahi hain!!!! Apne sach mein suicide attempt kiya?!!!! Par KYON????? Maan ka kya hoga????

G-Kya hona hai?

Sam-Aliya is forever grateful aapne uske gharwalon ko convince kiya. Bhabhi aapko galat fehmi hui hai!!! Dekhiye.. mera kya hai...waise kuch jaldi decide nahi kar pata hoon...meri wajah se aap mein problems create ho gai and now this...bhabbhiji... aap ko kuch hua to isse pehle Maan mujhe maare main bhi apni jaan de dunga

Geet bore ho gai uski baton se, wo let jaati hai

M-Aur mujhe Aliya ke sath hell on earth par chod ke tum dono mazze karna after life mein... ye plan hai tum dono ka

G-Maan

M-hmm?

G-Main tumhare layak nahi hoon. Naa tumhe samajhne ki kabiliyat hai mujhmein. Mujhe chod do. Main pehle hi bohot zindagiyan kharab kar chuki hoon tumhari nahi karna chahti

M-Give me 5 reasons ki tum mere layak kyun nahi ho... mujhe tumse jyada kaun janta hai.. naam batao... tumhe kabhi nai chodunga... infinite times kahne ko taiyar hoon aur tumne kisi ki zindagi kharab nahi ki hai... sab apni zindagi khud banate ya bigadte hain

PART 148

G-Main tumhare layak nahi hoon. Naa tumhe samajhne ki kabiliyat hai mujhmein. Mujhe chod do. Main pehle hi bohot zindagiyan kharab kar chuki hoon tumhari nahi karna chahti

M-Give me 5 reasons ki tum mere layak kyun nahi ho... mujhe tumse jyada kaun jant ahi.. naam batao... tumhe kabhi nai chodunga... infinite teimes kahne ko tayar hoon aur tumne kisi ki zindagi kharab nahi ki hai... sab apni zindagi khud banate ya bigadte hain

G-Jab se main tumhari yaa Sam ki zindagi mein aayi hoon, bura hi hota jaa raha hai

M-Meri zindagi mein kya bura hua hai? And blame Aliya for Sam's...I don't like you and him cozing up

G-Ye baat kahan se aa gayi, Maan? Aur maine tumhari zindagi mein kitna badlaav kar diya hai, tum mujhe koste hoge. Tumhari freedom, life tumhari rahi hi nahi

M-I want to change. I am free...you haven't put manackles on me

G-Naa hi main Aliya ki tarah sensetive hoon, jo tumhare past ko samajh sakun

M-Sensitive, my foot! Doctor hai jisko kuch samhjh nahi aata. I don't like her

He holds on to Geet

M-Bass bohot ho gaya. Kya bigda hai? huh? Meri life bigdi huyi hai kya? huh? Tumne to kuch nahi kiya, dhoka hua tumhare saath. Mere sath sab kuch hua. Phir bhi hoon naa aaj main yahan? Bekar hai kya meri life? Bigdi huyi hai? Maine blame kiya kisi ko?

She is lookin at him

M-Unko nahi aata zindagi jeena to tumhari kya galti hai? Unhe log kya kahenge ye darr lagta hai to tumhari kya galti hai? Tumhe pyaar hua to tumne kya galat kiya? Nahi ho sakta kya, jurm hai kya? Hakk nahi hai tumhe kuch feel karne ka? Apne decision lene ka? Mazaak karne ka? Hasne ka? Insaan nahi ho kya?

Her lip wobbles as every word of his touch her heart strings

G-...main..main bass tumhare saath ...bura nahi karna chahti

M-Tum kya bura karogi? Tum kya bura kar sakti ho? Kya main tumhe doodh peeta bachcha lagta hoon? Kya lagta hai? Aisa kya karoogi jisse meri life bigad jayegi? Bolo? Batao mujhe, tumhe kya lagta hai...kis baat ka darr hai? Aisa kya karogi?

G-Main...main..chahti hoon...tumhe...sahi jeevan sathi mile...main beech mein rahungi to...wo kaise milegi

She only knows difficult it was to speak these words

M-Geet, baat mat badlo. There wil be no one else after you and main serious hoon?

G-Kyun?

She asks like a school girl

M-Tum ek aur harkat karo, daal doonga asylum mein, main nahi chodunga akele

G-Daal do

M-And by God if you still suceed soemhow tab bhi nahi chodunga. I'll kill myself, got it?

G--Asylum mein daal dena, tab to tum alag main alag. Tab wo tumhe mil jayegi

M-Wo kaun? Asylum ghar pe bhi hota hai, nurse ke sath. Itni aasani se nahi chodunga, kaha na

G-Pata hai jaise wo dikhate hai naa, movie wale perfect couple...waisi hogi wo tumhare saath

She says with a little tear on corner of her eyes

M-F**k that Geet! Bakwaas mat karo iss time! Ya to mere sawalon ka jawab de do yaa so jao Mujhe alag hone ki baat sunana band karo! Nai sunna mujhe aisa kuch bhi. You are right, nahi samjhunga main, nai samjhnaa mujhe. You are it for me and that's it! Tum bhi yeh samjh lo..nahi samajh aaye to kal chalenge ghar nurse ko lekar

G-Nahi! Samajh liya

M-Kya samajh liya?

She looks at him with her beautiful doe eyes

G-Ye

She kisses him on his cheek

Maan is like what the...????? Ye kya hua?

G-Tumhe nahi pata

Abhi to kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha bechare Maan ko

She moves his face and kisses the other cheek

He looks at her with narrowed eyes.

M-What do the kisses mean?

She moves her hand on his eyes and she kisses him on both his eyes

Aur ek iss pyaari si kiss naak par

Maan moves back...holds her face in his hands

She is surprised

M-Talk to me. Please say you will never do this again

She shakes her head

G-I am sorry

M-No I don't want to hear that. Just promise me this that it will never happen again

G-Promise

M-And you are not going to die on me, get it?

Maan says looking deep onto her eyes

She also looks into his eyes

G-Tumhe jana tha naa, kaam nahi hai?

M-Nahi jaa raha main. Mann nahi hai ab mera

G-Biwi ki godh mein hi baithe rahoge, kaam chor

She says jokingly

M-yah yah whatever

G-Jao naa Maan. Kaam important hai

M-Not more than you

She smiles

G-I know but I am fine, kasam se

M-Tum hogi theek, main to nahi hoon. Mera blood plessure bohot high hai. I need to rest with you

G-ohhh aisa?

Originally posted by: mothereva

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Nilu dear post the Maaneet version link alone in this thread when u update...

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