Swaron OS:Waiting For the Right Moment

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing os! You penned down the emotions and dilemma in sharon's mond so well. I loved it.😃

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

lovely OS and the way you have described it im in love with it keep writing😊😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

lovely lubna.

loved positive and negative sharon convo.

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey Lubna

awesome OS

really loved it ❤️

it is penned down very beautifully 👏

really liked the confuse sharon talking to the positive and negative sharon

u r a amazing writer and u emotes the emotions very brilliantly 👍🏼

really loved your work ❤️

so keep up the great work going on and do write more

do PM me and thanks for the PM

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Its awsum amazing

I luved it alooot se bhi zyada

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

well i read it earlier but Could not reply because of busy schedule.
Anyways I loved the Randomness of this one
It was different yet realistic and relatable.
I liked the way you have penned the whole thing with such maturity.
it was atreat to read and the I LOVE YOU's were so different here.Their importance was so much more in this one.Its like loving someine is not enough unless you express it
Kudos to you for this Fab OS
-Harshita