Arjun OS : Tuned steps-The evening walk

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys. Not feeling so well & heavy hearted. So thought of making your lives miserable.
Tried something different. Now, May Allah save you.

Arjun OS : Tuned steps-The evening walk

-OHH! So you are that BANDAR !!

- What BANDAR?

-You've been caught red handed, phir vi badmashi chalu hain? Roz door pr knock karke vaag kyun jate ho?

- Toh kya karun? Chupchap khara rahun?

- Tell me the reason.

-By mistake.

-What mistake?

-dil ki galati se shayed...

-ARRGH !! Details?!?

- I thought it was 4th floor. After knocking I realize that I've to climb for another floor...so...

-Really?? Toh yeh baat knock karne ki pehle yaad kyun nahi aata?

- Bimaari hain.

-Kaisi bimaari?

-Dil ki.

-Oh, kaunsi?

-Galti karne ki.

-Aur iska illaze kaise hoga?

- Regular evening walk se.

- Then go...why you are wasting your time here?

-Well...actually I need another pair of foots, those can match my steps, you know company. Just walk se hi kaam chalega. I would be astonished as well as cured.

-Sorry, I can't come.

-You shouldn't deny someones heartiest request. Specially ek bimaar ka. Plz, just for once.

- Ok, coming, but for the last time.

Knokcing Roshni's door twice, run away & then wait for her in front of her building is my daily routine.Sound of her footsteps intoxicated me when she stayed in my apartment in her first days in this city. From then I'm in love with walking beside her.

Today, I must be ashamed & sad for caught red handed by her. In addition, I must be happy because she's coming. However, Iss dukh aur sukh ki cocktail peeke paagal, iss bechara Arjun aaj aasman ke haadh measure karne main busy hain.

-Now I'm going.

- Aane se pehle koi kais jaa sakta hain?

- Jaise shuru hone se pehle khatam hota hain.

- Love may be the best example.

-Hmm...

The steps are tuning automatically, now we've no rush to measure the limit of this sky, let the time pass slowly,we've walk for little more.

-Don't make such mistakes again.

-then we have to start it over, from the end!

- I won't come again.

-I'll repeat the mistake.

- then do it slowly, If mom'll come to know, then...mehnga pardega.

-I'll be ready.

That girl who concentrates every evening on the closed door, knows how to love. She'll always come for this evening walk, to give me company, to match my steps, to be with me. And me, I'll always love her with my happy-sad heart.

The mistakes I make in evening are way too much beautiful.

The End.

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After reading this, If anyone remain sane. plz left feeedback before leaving this page.

& If anyone wants to kill me, you are most welcome.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh great atisha take a bow 👏...how do you come up with such ideas?? I couldnt really guess in the beginning,but gradually when i started reading,i could understand its impact...

such a sweet mischief...beautiful...plz write continue it...if not write some more...⭐️

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you have a unique sense of humour😉
This is short but so Romantic & funny
thanx for PM

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sweet dear loved it
Wonderfully written
Thanks for the PM
Awesome OS 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one dear...

Simple...but outstanding..

Thanks for this lovely OS ...for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely os
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was so cute
very nicely written 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwssmmm OS
LOVED IT
Very cute..
lovely... n Beautiful...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one..
love d title lol..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks all who loved and commented on that little late night bakwaas.
@ rimi_invisible This type of things only comes very occasionally & Accidentally. So...I hope you understand. But if you really love to be tortured, then...😆



Edited by Shamsad1607 - 11 years ago

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