RaBir FF Chapter 10 UPDATED. - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: usrfan

I am waiting for the scene when Rachna comes to know about the locket. Vibz beta, tum sanskari kab banogi? (Seema ki awaz mein) Yeh sochke na, mere baal saphed ho rahe hai, haan.



mahi we have been rotten seeing hotty 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode



mahi we have been rotten seeing hotty 😆😆

My Baal is 50% saphed already but I will not improve 😉

Kabir ne sanskaaron Ka kabada Kar Diya 😈🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode



mahi we have been rotten seeing hotty 😆😆

Why put the blame on Kabir (as if, pehle sub log sharafat ke murat the) 🤣 🤣. Drooled over Rajiv before. Now Kabir 😆 .
@Sharita. Even I am reaching there (graying). I am not bothered to dye. In this regard, I am a follower of Mallika Sherawat. If you have it, flaunt it 😉 .

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: usrfan

Why put the blame on Kabir (as if, pehle sub log sharafat ke murat the) 🤣 🤣. Drooled over Rajiv before. Now Kabir 😆 .
@Sharita. Even I am reaching there (graying). I am not bothered to dye. In this regard, I am a follower of Mallika Sherawat. If you have it, flaunt it 😉 .


🤣 My daughter keeps complaining though I have tricolored hair 😆 Black , red( henna) & grey😕
My hubby hardly has grey hair though he is 51 & me physically aged at 45 but mentally no where close🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mentally to hum, nanha sa, pyaara sa, teenagers hai 🤣 . What is the point, even if men don't grow grey early? Aadat se, they are born oldies 😡 .
Can't wait for both, next chapter of ff as well as the reel one. Have the SSLK people hired Angelina as script writer by any chance 😉 ? Girl, I can visualise every details that you write. How I wish they show each one of those.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Well before I start ..I read ur comments people is it that I am the youngest one in lot ??I m just a 1st year!!!One more thing Hw long u wish the FF to go on?😉😉😉

Chapter-7

Rachna and Kabir getting up the stairs of the Hotel where the presentation is scheduled..Nitya smilingly seeing them walking hand in hand and Kabir trying to hold her whenever she is unable to walk properly...😳

Nitya : Rachna are u ok?

Rachna: I gues I am ...ah!!

Nitya: No u r aren't ...oh god ...!!is it hurting much??

Kabir : she is gonna be f9 Nitya .u ready u both are coming with me for the presentation..

Nitya : ya everything is ready ...But frst Rachna u come with me..

Nitya takes Rachna to her room and brings a tub with hot water ..and asks Rachna to put her feet in it..and she starts gently putting water on her feet while Rachna is in pain...!!!

Kabir comes in Nitya's room to get some files while he sees Nitya attending Rachna ...

Nitya gets an important phone call..

Nitya(to rachna):Rachna, I will be back ..in a minute...

Rachna: okay!!

Nitya leaves Rachna and Kabir alone in the room..

Kabir heads towards Rachna and takes her feet in his hand and starts pouring water on them and gently rubs them ..while Rachna looks at him forgetting all her pain...Kabir then suddenly jerks her feet and Rachna is pain clutches the bedsheet and shouts..😳😳😳

Kabir puts his hand on hers 👏

Kabir: are u f9...Is the pain still there...

Rachna(moving her feet) no...I m F9 now ..thank u KT..😊😊😊

Nitya comes back and sees them holding hands and decides to turn away but she remembers that they need to leave for presentation ...AND ENTERS The room..😛😛😛

Rachna and Kabir move away...

Nitya: Kabir we need to leave ...now..

Kabir: ya come ..

They all move out to reach the conference room booked for their meeting ...

In the way Rachna is left behind while Kabir and Nitya are ahead discussing something ..

Rachna bumps into Aditya who is coming out of his room...

Adi: Rachna..u here?

Rachna: hmm actually I have a presentation ..

ADI : GR8 my meeting is done...I was missing u ..and see u r here..

Rachna: oh!! really Is that true..u missed me didn't even call once ...

Aditya: Really ..check ur phone ..isn't it listing 20 missed calls

Rachna checks the phone and sees really 20 missed calls🤢🤢🤢

Rachna: oh !! Adi ..I didn't know were was my attention!!

Adi : haan ..u found a new guy..ab u will frgt this old one..😕😕😕

Rachna: adi...

Nitya comes to them ..and

Nitya : come fast Rachna.

Rachna: coming..

Kabir turns to see but is unable to see Adi bcz he is not facing him ..Rachna leaves with nitya to Kabir while Adi walks away..

Rachna ,Nitya and Kabir give the presentation..the clients like the designs...

They all leave for lunch..

An announcement is made BY the hotel for a party this evening since hotel has completed 25 years ..

Nitya insists on attending party and Kabir agrees On Dadi's further insistence...👏👏👏

Rachna is advised to rest by nitya..

In the evening Dadi is ready and NiTYA ALSO...Rachna is still in Bed in Dadi's room and Kabir is Nitya's washroom since the geyser in Dadi's room stopped working..

Dadi: Rachna beta..get up..😲

Rachna : ji dadi...

Dadi: u freshen up and Then u can Use Nitya's washroom actually This Room's geyser is not working ..

Rachna: Ok dAdi!!

Dadi and NITYA LEAVE ...

Rachna goes To Nitya's Room oblivious O f Kabir's presence she enters the room..and is shockes to find Kabir in Bathrobe...Rachna turns away immediately but Kabir notices her ...😉

Kabir: Rachna ..wait..

Rachna: sir sorry ..actually..

Kabir goes closer to her..😳

Kabir: Im Going to Dadi's room ..U be here..

Kabir walks out walking near Rachna who awkwardly tries to move away but her eyes rest On Kabir...

Rachna gets ready in beautiful dress given by Nitya and Comes outsyd...She is infrmed by Nitya that Dadi and Kabir have left ..and she was waiting for her...

Downstairs ...in the meanwhile Kabir and Aditya have met ..and Kabir is literally burning inside Seeing Aditya there...

Rachna and Nitya walk down the stairs ..while everyone at the party is mesmersised seeing Rachna looking gorgeous..especially the two guys with theit mouths wide -open.😲😲😲.

Rachna and Nitya go and stand near Dadi...

Adi is taken away by his colleagues or frnz...(wtever)... The music starts playing ...Kabir is away from the crowd and Nitya is searching for him ..👏👏.

Nitya: want to dance??

Kabir: Nitya..U knw I hate all this stuff..

Nitya: probably u don't wanna dance with me but..U can dance with any girl here..

Kabir: Nitya..plz..

Nitya: Oh! COme on Kabir..Go n ask her for a dance..

Kabir STARTS Walking towards Rachna..

Adi notices Rachna and starts progressing towards her ..

Both Kabir and adi Move towards Rachna but Adi reaches her first since she was closer to him😡😡😡

Adi: wt are u doing alone here ..Come lets Dance..

Rachna: No adi ..i Dont want to...

ADI: come on RAchna and takes her on the dance floor while Kabir styands Furious and Heart-broken..😭😭😭

Nitya comes to Kabir

Nitya: this is wt I wanted to say...

Kabir: wt??

Nitya: KABIR ..u R NT A KID!!

Kabir: Come

Nitya: where..?

Kabir takes her on the Dance floor and dances with her..closer to ADI and Rachna😆

Rachna notices Kabir..and

during the Dance Kabir and Rachna steal glances from each other while their partners noticing wt is happening...Adi gets closer To RACHNA ..while Kabir pulls Nitya closer...both the girls are now trapped in an awkward situation with their best frnz..wishing to get out soon..to their relief..Dadi comes ans asks them to leave as she is getting bored..they all leave...adi too..👏👏👏

In the rooms..

Nitya: Rachna who was that guy with u?

Rachna: oh..he Is adi ...mah frnd..

Nitya: Is he just A friend Rachna ??

Rachna: yes ..any doubt??

Nitya : the way u were dancing with him anyone wud doubt...

Rachna: its nothing like that ..

Nitya: f9 I backout...ok Do me a favour...Can u Just Find Kabir and ask him to meet me..

Rachna: f9 I will go and find him..

Rachna goes to DADI'S room who says KABIR just went downstairs...

Rachna: at this hour.!!

Dadi: Hmm i cant help it dear...

Rachna : ok.. I will find him...

Dadi: u havent changed yet??

Rachna :dadi woh ...Nitya was changing frst and then she asked me to call kabir...

Dadi: f9 even Kabir didn't change yet ..I dont know why u people are so busy in work...

Rachna leaves and goes downstairs and finds Kabir In small hall ...which is fully decorated...

Rachna enters seeing KABIR...

Rachna: KT..nITYA wants to meet u ..

Kabir: f9 but I want to talk to u first..

Rachna: ya sure KT..

Kabir: thnku RACHNA ..

Rachna: fr wt??

Kabir(goes closer to her and says in her ears ): for everything till today..

Rachna (shyily): I didn't get it..

Kabir: even I dont know wt I m doing...

Kabir plays the music and asks rachna to dance with him...

Rachna hesitates but complies...and they starty dancing forgetting everything around..they are aware of only each-other's presence...an hour passes but they are still lost in each other ...getting closer and closer...suddenly RAChna's cell rings ..and she moves away from Kabir realising wt happened..?

RACHNA TURNS AWAY AND CUTS THE CALL..and tries to run but KAIR GETS HOLD OF HER HAND ...

Kabir moves towards her and takes out the locket he brought for her...and makes her wear that..

Rachna looks at the locket and turns to Kabir and then suddenly runs upstairs...😊

Next chapter

Back at rachna's home everyone is talking about fixing Rachna's marriage...

comment if u r done reading...

Edited by angelinasingh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: usrfan

Mentally to hum, nanha sa, pyaara sa, teenagers hai 🤣 . What is the point, even if men don't grow grey early? Aadat se, they are born oldies 😡 .

Can't wait for both, next chapter of ff as well as the reel one. Have the SSLK people hired Angelina as script writer by any chance 😉 ? Girl, I can visualise every details that you write. How I wish they show each one of those.


now i wish they hire me...😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

congrats angel\🥳

CVs took idea from your FF and now ra bir are going for out door presentation

wow loved update. they spent night together,you brought so many hot scenes in only one update and rain scene is so ☺️

waiting for next update




i wish they show a rain scen 🤗tooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow it was so amazing i was able to imagine all scenes U r great writer
Loved it Nice update
Waiting eagerly for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
so nice anju...

as chit say i also can able to imagine all before my eyes...

thnks for the pm..and update soon...

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