VIOLIN~RHYTHM OF ROMANCE # 4 love punishment page 62/ 8th january - Page 25

Created

Last reply

Replies

350

Views

30.6k

Users

78

Likes

874

Frequent Posters

Twilightsparkle thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago




NOTE



gals @ Anamika Akanshya my drakulla she is no more

the big fans i have got because of her only due to my honey bee i have got many friends.this is all because of my drakulla
i love her much re cont believe it she is not with me now. With her constant insistence only i have written my honey bee

i even had dedicated my story to her. She is much imp to me hope your soul will be at peace now.


The most pathetic part she got her love after soo much struggle and the they got engaged but now it is over

but unfortunately this accident she lost her life. her fianc is safe but full in shock

here is the link of her love story in her words in maaneet essence

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3671831/my-gift-my-story-in-maaneet

her edits for few writers

https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.1491572627734781.1073741843.1374415902783788&type=3&uploaded=9

Anamika Akanshya drakulla i miss you soo much

keep her thoughts alive

@ ALL wanted to share one thing with you all

you know this story also related with my drakulla only
you all know i have started this violin based on telugu song from movie iddramailtho. in that movie second heroine name is akankshya only. after watching out that movie i am flying over because of that heroine name resembles with my drakulla.

i am really crazy for my friend gals. i asked her about her fav heroine she said parineeti chopra but in voilin i used yami pic.

i thought to give her surprise after starting the story but see she left me. adhoora hogaya meri surprise now. i am really very sad my every thought is related with her only.

but i dont wanted to drown on misery she is the 1st one who wanted me write stories
so i am just continuing for her

felt like sharing with you all about this

sparkle

Twilightsparkle thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago







VIOLIN RYTHYM OF ROMANCE









thanks to shruthe di for the banner







thanks to jadu aka maya rhea for the benner










(gals have patience I have replied to all who commented check it if you want

I have already said that this story will have mystery enjoy the musical ride)

plz check above post




2 LOVE OR ?

(Sorry for delay laks . RJ praff and KK also

Janeeman hope you all like it)



The music is still beating up high making maan to drown in his thoughts. But he chooses to ignore all those he has more things to catch up now. His life is all ways surrounded with music. If he wanted also he cont ignore the word called music, it had given his love most importantly his life his geet. A smile played on his M shaped lips with her name.


He will remember this evening will engrave with golden letters in his heart if possible. His geet is being in his arms after ages is something he dreamed of which turned in to true. He felt as he is sailing in boat of passion when he remembered his act few seconds back. His situation is like this then he can guess what geet must be going on. He chuckled slightly twirled around along with small life in his hands.


"Oh no what's going on my head is spinning" parada (parrot name) thought while maan is fully lost in his happiness. Parade tries to get his attention by calling "maaneet maaneet" in meek voice. But it had given wrong impression maan happiness doubled with their name calling out together he hugged parada closes to his heart twirled with full speed." this maan will make my life hell daily his happiness anger whatever have to bear it god help me" prayed parada silently.


His face is glowing like un touched rose bud. His laugh ecoched in whole room his happiness had no bounds not to forget no restriction which he had. He wanted to celebrate this day his joy is touching up to the sky.
Releasing that small life from his hands maan taken out his all time favorite guitar. He knows playing all types of newly ventured instruments. It is his cup of tea to play with all those instruments playing off his fav tune is his hobby.



pic credits to vrinda 22 aka my MILKY GIRL


Maan touched the strings he felt like he is touching her body the thrill is bliss. He cont explain in words only he can know that.


Before he could start chan chan sound hit his ears. It is mixture of two people he know that. Both are his life he cont differ in both. One is his life another one is his love. Maan smiled as the sound increased at end taken a halt nearer to his room. He can smell jasmine flowers fragrance in air he breathed in sharply. Raising his head he glanced at those two people.



"How long maan it's already late. Now come on take some rest" scolded elderly lady with fake anger. Geet chuckled watching out her expression. Radha glared at her indicated to say something.


"You know aunty making him agree is tough task. BTW must say he is same like his mother" commented geet smiling making Radha to frown. Both maan and radha stared at geet for few minutes for that word aunty and also for calling mother not even maa.


Geet looked away not wanting to face them. The tension what happened few minutes still there is geet's face.


Maan tried to divert there talk said with loop sided smile. "Because I love my maa soo much. So resembles will be there like the way you got". With instant expression geet face lost her bright color. Radha sensed the situation heaviness interrupted


"She is my daughter only enough of now. Let's go maan have something I am starving here" said Radha making maaneet to fume.


"Who said to do kachery(performance )with starving stomach" said maan's father Krishna Khurana (KK) entering room with food plate. Radha pouted watching all teaming up against her.


"Aunty this won't help out now so better you should start" said geet sat beside Krishna placed her head on his shoulders.


"So how is the performance?" asked KK while placing full spoon morsel in radha's mouth. Her face glowed like lamp making trio chuckle while radha started explaining while sitting beside KK.


"Maan you should come next time ok. I missed your violin beat there. Of course my team is there but I wanted you to be there" pleaded Radha after few min of her nonstop explanation.


Maan kept silent he is thinking for any proper escape. He cont give same like all other days in pretext work. He is playing with guitar tuning pegs. He can sense geet eyes are stuck on him along with his parents. KK voice brought him back from his pool of thoughts.


"Will you please eat properly see you are spoiling cushions. You are not kid Radha" scolded KK in between he is feeding geet also. KK loves her wife much but she will act like primary school which he won't tolerate.


"Papa dare to scold my maa see your ladla also doing the same" said maan pointing at geet's place. Geet gave her cheeky smile making KK to laugh out with her antics. "It won't take any end with this war chalo Rdha you must sleep on now" said KK while dragging her with him. Geet laughed out loud watching Radha throwing tantrums. Shouting good night geet fell on the coach by placing her elbow still laughing with closed eyes.


Maan fully lost in her laugh to register anything. He even forgot he got safe escape this time also. After controlling her laughter geet still lied there in same position. Her eyes were closed but her face is looking bright her jaws were tight indicating she is trying to swallow her laugh. Her curls danced on her shoulders whenever her head taken any moment.


"See geet it is true every one enjoying even maa and dad also. Why not us" questioned maan kneeled down in front of her. Geet opened her eyes to watch him very close to her. She knows what he meant. Signing big she said "it's not the question of anything maan. Its question of trust which I don't have in any relation. So just forget all about this."



Maan grabbed her hands he sat there while placing her in his lap. Geet is not at all shocked she know he is angry she kept num. maan is getting crazy with this girl. She is stubborn he knows then he is also not less.
He touched her cheeks with his stubble making her feel how hard it is.


The sensual touch making geet to lose herself. His stubble in contact with her warm cheeks felt like heaven for her. Maan placed his lips on corner of her lips this time making geet to stiffen. Maan sensed her condition but she deserves this he concluded. To control her urge to hug him geet fisted her hands tight. Not wanting to feel anything she tried to distract herself.


"Maan your stubble is making me ticklish leave me now" commanded geet making maan chuckle.

"You are feeling ticklish or anything else?" asked maan winked at her. Geet looked away to hide her embracement. He knows very well how to play with her. "You know that also but we should think about aunty and uncle also" said geet looking straight in to her eyes. Maan eyes color changed to burning lava with her nonsense talk.


He left her stood away facing her straightly. He is missing that geet who will give her shy smile when even he tried to touch her. He hated this new geet. He knows only one geet who knows to melt with his one single touch. Who knows to love him more than herself? He hated his existence as this day came in to his life. To listen to her baseless talks silently helplessly.


Geet knows how to handle him. Come on who will know him more than her. She hated this moment for doing all these. But option was nothing than this. There is no place in her life for word called love. She lost happy life long back there is nothing to do now.


"Come on maan don't be silly ok. I am not teenager Geetika Sharma 21 years old. But I am not your type of girl. So better you should try another girl" said geet standing on her feet provoking maan's anger.


Maan know this will be coming he got bored off her talks trash now. He knows how to tackle her now he played along.


"But pleasurable night with my love is more bliss what say am I right" said maan tucking her close to him. His face is hard no emotions were there. Geet tried to get what he meant. Her eyes popped out with realization.


"Now go away before I do something which you regret. Better you respect my love rather than" maan warned left the sentence in middle. He even doesn't want to take that word from his mouth. Grabbing his guitar maan left the room leaving her to grab up what mess she is creating.

Apart from her faint breathe sound the room is filled with dead silence. There is not regret in her face but only some lost expression. There is a lot to be finished off before doing anything decided geet in her mind. She doesn't even know in what way her life is heading. All she knows is to leave him before she again lost her gathered courage.


Maan is pacing to and fro in his room he is angry. But he doesn't know how to take of it. He checked on his parent's room, they already drawling in their dreams. He wished they will be happy like that for ever as they got this peaceful life after lot of struggle.
********************


"Beep beep" vibration of her mobile disturbed Aks blissful performance. Cursing herself for forgetting to call his parents she hurriedly picked up the call by leaving her fav violin to barer. The whole hall hooted with whistles while Amar raised his hand to say he did it.



"ohh fish" Mouthed Aks while glancing at her mobile with blank face."haaa I maa I told you right that I will cal you later. Then what's the need to call see that dumb had taken advantage of it." Blasted Aks on her maa.


But all she can listen in her dad chuckle instantly he anger washed away smile played on her lips. Simmy snatched her mobile while Amar tugged her close whispered in her ears. "looser get ready for the party baby".


Simmy moved away while talking with Aks's parents giving Amar his needed space. Aks makes a face but she lost the bet right. She kept mum and this turn of events she can say a trap for her. "Huh nice trap must say" commented Aks with loop sided smile. Pinching hard on his cheeks said with smirk "enjoy my cutie pie".


Amar smiled inwardendly for it but he can clearly annoyance in her face. Aks felt his touch somewhat tapping something in her heart but ignored it all together.


"How are you dad and how is everything "asked Aks after simmy giving her mobile back with lots of pleads.


"Don't be I know you are enjoying your freedom there" said Aks father making Aks chuckle.


"acha listen you have meeting with Khurana's don't forget that ok"said Aks'a maa making her frown. She really doesn't know what is with that Khurana's his parents were hell bent to make deal with them. While they are all ways saying they are not doing any albums regarding violin.


"I know what you are thinking baby. But I really wanted this to be done by them for me at least." Pleaded aks father. She is getting annoyed now come on she is running a music company. But her won parents want someone else to do album. She wanted to scream but her parents sended her here for that work only. Now no back off she decided and said with final note.


"I am going there. Plz take care of dad maa I will handle everything" said Aks with almost chocked voice. Amar who is listening all up to now came forward placed his comforting hand on her shoulders.


With some talks Aks finally ended the call thanked Amar through her eyes. Amar blinked his eyes he can understand she is missing her parents especially her dad is not well. Simmy coughed slightly to gain their attention Aks looked away.


Simmy hugged Amar tight for his success. Aks rolled her eyes but thought in her mind. "Here you go maaneet I am coming to face you now. You guys needed to answer me now"


Parrot names credits goes to hira aka my BB



Hope I have given justification for all

You have to wait to know more

Plz plz leave ur views

Sparkle



Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
sohni_kudi_111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Great part! still loads of confusion... maaneet's relationship is strained but waiting to read more!
Shane
tamanna1391 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
awsem update maan geet taunts
PoonamT thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for your loss dear
RIP
Surish thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
I pity your loss dear but I'm impressed with your fantastic piece of literature. Continue to capitalize on your creativity my dear!
Ggorgeousqueen thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
Did something happen between Maan and Geet in past?
I think Geet faced an heartbreak..Hope Maan is not behind it
hmm soon both lead couples are going to meet each other
I m waiting to see what happened next
though I m little bit confused still I know that all will be clear in coming updates
nice update Pooo
-Lehar- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
loved the bond between maan's parents and geet
geet saying maan to move on with another girl because she lost her trust on relation...what exactly happend that she lost her trust on relations waiting to know the reason
aks coming to meet maaneet
waiting for the next part

Donnaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update..
y geet lost her trust in relationships???
did something happened with her ??!!!
geet told maan to move on with another girl...

...RIDDHIMA... thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Yaar itna sad note se start Kia...
May her soul rest in peace...I'm feeling really very sad reading the not..couldn't concentrate on the update
But jitna Kia usse Bol raha hoon
So many confusion
Y geet is behaving like this
N maan is frustrated by her changed behavior :(
Parrot part was cute..n it's self thought :P

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

6 months ago

*~The Charade~* [Romance on the Clock Series #1] *~The Charade~* [Romance on the Clock Series #1]

Maan Singh Khurana and Geet Handa had known each other for several years. They were colleagues, strictly professional, or so it was meant to be....

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

6 months ago

*~The Cursed Body~* [Romance on the Clock #2] *~The Cursed Body~* [Romance on the Clock #2]

Romance on the Clock #1 - The Charade The Cursed Body The day started innocently enough. Geet and Pinky had planned to finish work early, grab a...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Bound by Honour| Note page 50 Bound by Honour| Note page 50

Prologue “Where are you, Sameera?” I yelled unable to hold myself back. “I’m not coming, Maan”. “It is our wedding day. You know what my...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maan Geet new Ss Binding by Love Pt 29 page 47- 10/1/25

She met him in an unfavorable time when she was running behind the time to save him. Save the only one member of his family whom she call his...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

8 months ago

Something About Us- MG || (Part 50|Page 50)

Something About Us Hey All, starting a new story. It is a kind of reboot or version 2 of the story Something About You . Hope you will enjoy it...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".