Killing me softly( Parts 7,8-updated Pg15 - Page 11

Raaga,
You already know u write very well... let me just reinforce the fact...
Fantastic.... 👏 👏 👏
The two parts are very well written... so no one asked him where Bani was all this time...
But like u said...his sorrow was his strength and his weakness too...

His lonliness and pain is very well portrayed... 👏

Hope to see the next part soon 😳

Poo

wow wow wow 👏 👏 👏
finally u did updated it 😃
awesome mindbowing part buddy 😳 😃
actually i had to read the previous parts abit to get the rivision of actually where the story had stopped sorry u can blame my dull memory 😆

and well u did a gud job ..... no like a gud girl
continue soon very very soon 😃

finally i able to finish reading all parts
it's amazing
you should keep writing
and your writing style is good
keep it up
👏

Wow awesome ff.Just read through all the parts
Plz continue soon 😊

that was a great update, please continue soon and not make us wait forever.


-Rimpy

Divu, Sudhu, love you guys!!🤗

Finally we've bene blessed with not one, but two updates!!😛

Raaga, I stand by what I said earlier (much earlier!!😕) I honestly should take some lessons from you in writing!!

The way you described JW's inner turmoil and Mausi's feelings was amazing!!👏👏👏

I'm glad that you pulled him out of his silent sorrow mode and will (hopefully) bring back the JW that graced our screens from Jan-Jun 2006!😳

Though all that has dissapeared, I have FFs like these to live on so no complaints!😉

A little question....how long has it been since Bani left him?

P.S. You promised you'd update shortly.......does this mean we will be waiting another six months?😕😆

read your ff in one go .....it was reallly good but don't keep your audience waiting for too long plzzz up date sooooooon
menal