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I have written this OS with the lyrics of Bairi Piya listening to the song just now. When I heard it this OS sprang in my mind. Enjoy and let me know your comments

Sooraj and Sandhya finished helping Emily with BP. Emily and Chaturi had gone home leaving them in BP. So key was with them. SURYA locked the shop and came out. Sooraj saw a bangle vendor in the road. He looked at Sandhya and she smiled. They both went to the vendor. Sandhya was looking at some fancy Kankans instead of chudis( Kankan is metal ones a little broader mostly 1 is worn or bracelet and chudi is glass bangles). Suddenly Bhabo called Sandhya Beendini. Sandhya went to RM hurriedly.

When Sooraj came back to RM with Kankan for Sandhya she was still busy obeying Bhabo's orders.Sooraj went upstairs and waited for her. But there was no sign of her.
Downstairs Sandhya was getting impatient. She started cleaning kitchen quickly. Then Chaturi came and told she will do the rest. Sandhya thanked her and rushed to GG room.

When she came to GG room Sooraj was sleeping . She tried waking him up. But he simply turned. Sandhya switched on the lights. Went Near Sooraj and removed his blanket. Sooraj just put the blanket back. Now Sandhya pulled his hand

" Bairi Piya Bada Bedardi. Dil ka dard na jaane harjaaye Ram Duhayi
Kaise kahun, ka se kahun hay ram dil ka dard naa jaane
naa jaane , na jaane , na jaane haay "

Sooraj pulled his hand back and turned to other side.
Sandhya whispered "issh...." in his ear"

Sooraj immersed himself into the blanket not even looking at her. Now Sandhya got into the bed and took his head and placed in her lap

" Tu Door jho tha tho pass hi thaa, ab pass hain tho door hain kyun, na jaane "

Sooraj placed his head back on the pillow. Now Sandhya looked around not sure what to do. Then she saw the Kankan on the table. She went and took it.
She again came to Sooraj and forced him to open eyes and now she was almost begging him
"Aa pas tho aa , pehna bhi de ye kankana
naa satha ab man bhi le ye kahna"

Sandhya turned and wiped her tears. Then she felt Sooraj arms around her waist and he pulled her. He took her hand and tried putting the kankan. it was not going that easily

" Kaise kahun, kahase kahun ram kankana kehna na maane
ye kankana bada bedardi, kankana kehna na mane deewana , awara sang dil ram duhayi"

Sandhya giggled broke free from his arms and ran towards the balcony. Moonlight was streaming in the balcony
Sooraj went behind her
" Ab man bhi javonaa, tum pass tho aavonaa"

Sooraj looked at her with yearning in his eyes.Sandhya gave a badmashi smile and went towards him
" Behki behki baton mein teri, dheere dheere aane lagi"
Then she saw a small jugnu in the balcony. She tried taking it and Sooraj kept his hand on hers

" Jugnu ne mujse kaha aisa hai tera piya , le hi jaayega tera jiya
Sooraj caressed her hair and pulled her into a hug

" Pyaari Pyaari baton pe teri Chandini bhi hasne lagi
Taare muskurane lage, hawa ghungane lagi aur aasman bhi jhum uta "

he tried putting the bangle once again. it was not going. Sandhya took the kankan from him

" kaise kahun, kasa kahun hay ram , ram ram
Pagla itna naa jaane, na jaane haaye"

She opened the hook of the kankan and looked at him giggling. Sooraj too smiled as he took the kankan and put in her hand and whispered in her ears " issh" . Sandhya fell into his arms laughing and they sat in the balcony enjoying the moonlight wrapped in each other's arms.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice shruthiji😳⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome!

I can see SurYa instead of Shah or Aish!

Excellent.

Thank U ji!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Exactly Ayisha. I pictured SURYA in balcony when I heard this song today and this OS happened.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow Shruti di this OS is wonderful
u have interwoven the song so well 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.!! SurYastic OS shruti di😳.. Thats soo cute, sandy manofying so- pretending to be angry Suraj, SurYa spending their ni8 in moon li8 in each others arm & that song...just WOW...!!.. I can picturise the exact scenario, u hav written!! there is a lot of passion, caring, romance everything in this couple..⭐️
Thank you Shruti di for sharing this excellent scenario😎..B/W i must say you are an outstanding writer..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaw...😳 Very sweet!! Loved it!!! Well done!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Excellent Shruthi 👍🏼very romantic 😳 😳
Edited by Manjuu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very romantic Shruthi..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks everyone. Anyways my romantic antenna have gone up since CHF😳

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