FF: Kuch Rahein Anjaani Si-Ch 36,pg111

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Prologue - Pg 1, Ch 1 - Pg 3, Ch 2 -Pg 7, Ch 3-Pg 11, Ch 4-Pg 15, Ch 5 Pg 17, Ch 6 Pg 20, Ch 7 pg 23, Ch 8 pg 26, Ch 9 pg 30, Ch 10 pg 35, Ch 11 pg 40, Ch 12 Pg 46, Ch 13 pg 49, Ch 14 pg 53,Ch 15 pg 56, Ch 16 pg 61, Ch 17 pg65, Ch 18 pg69, Ch 19 pg 72, Ch20 pg74, Ch 21 pg 78, Ch 22 pg 81, Ch 23 pg 84, Ch 24 pg 87, Ch 25 pg89, Ch26 pg92, Ch27 pg94, Ch28 pg 96, Ch29 pg98, Ch30 pg100, Ch31 pg102, Ch32 pg 104, Ch 33 pg106, Ch34 pg107, Ch35 pg109, Ch 36 pg 111

Thank you for the overwhelming response for my last Fanfic : Contract Heir: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=536274&T PN. After I completed this fanfic, I have been getting PMs to write another….so was wondering what to write on…had started one but it was not shaping upto my satisfaction when our forum friend Amiee wrote to me giving this story line requesting me to develop something on 'unwanted' daughter. The storyline given to me is based on one of Amiee's relatives. Well I found it interesting and since unwanted daughter is still prevalent in our country very much, thought why not give it a try…..so with Amiee's inputs here is my sixth FF: Kuch Rahein Anjaani Si (title courtesy Amiee).

My earlier Fanfics are : Return of Bani Walia, https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/515481/return-of-bani-walia-note-on-pg-31: :Business Tycoon Jai Walia marries a Mt Abu Girl(https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/486636/business-tycoonjw-marriesfinal-prt-pg64). My earlier two FFs are Mai Apke bina nehi reh sakti hu (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/457994/mai-apke-bina-nehi-reh-updt-pg-11-pt-ix)& Finding Bani (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/469208/finding-bani-ff-part-viii-page-8).

Kuch Rahein Anjaani Si

Prologue

Little Bani hid behind the pillar, she was scared….so much of noise, so many people, it seemed the whole village was invited. She looked towards the centre of the hall, she could see glimpses of her parents, they were looking so beautiful, so different from other days, just like Dulha Dulhan thought Bani…there was Dhruv, sitting on her mother's lap, ekdum rajkumar jaisa, lekin yeh keya phir se row raha hai…aaj Dhruv ka pehla janamdin hai…lekin janamdin keya hai?....jis din tum iss dharti me aye ho…she remembered her bare papa's words….lekin dharti me ateh kaha se…Bani asked…. Bhagwan bhejta hai beta…

tabh mera janamdin kab hai….woh kiyu nehi hota…..

Bare papa did not reply…got busy pealing the ganna with his teeth and chewing it….

Bani was hungry, she peeped out again saw her dadaji and pitaji talking to some people….with their hands folded saying something….barelogo ki batho ke beech me nehi ana chahiye…she remembered her mother telling her….

She ran to the next pillar, she could see her didi, Pia playing with her friends,

Didi, didi, Bani called out tentatively…

Pia turned around…keya hai…

Bhuk laga hai…..

Toh mai keya karu, 7 year old Pia made a face at her 4 year old sister….

Areh Bani, tu udhar kiyo khari hai, idhar aja, khelenge saath me..called out Meera, Pia's friend but a little older than them…

Mujhe nehi ana hai….agar kho jayu toh…bare papa ne kaha hai, aaj bahut sare log ayenge

Apne ghar me kaise khoyegi…Pia laughed…

Nehi, Bani replied innocently…koi utha ke le jaye toh….

Tujhe kaun uthayga…itni kali…Meera intervened….tera toh shaadi hona bhi mushkil hai usdin meri ma bata rahi thi….koi pasand nehi karega tujhe….Pia and her friends laughed…

Bani was crestfallen, she did not understand but she knew …nobody really loved her much…Pia was her Pitaji's favourite & Dhruv everybody's…infact other than her bare-papa nobody really took notice of her…Bani went behind the pillar again…Pia and her friends ran outside….

Bani, yeh Bani, areh meri Bani rani, idhar a…called out a man from outside the French window….

Bare Papa…Bani ran…kaha the aap, she asked lifting her little arms to be picked up …

The man picks her up in his arms…tu row rahi thi…

Meera didi ne kaha hai, mai kali hu aur meri shaadi nehi hogi….

Aree Meera ko chhor, moti kahi ka...tere liye rajkumar ayega...dekh lena...safed lamba gari me....abh bata bhug lagi hai....Bani nodded her head.....dekh mujhe pata chal giya...chal mujhe bhi laga hai...the man puts Bani on his shoulders and enters the big tent which has been erected to cook food for the occasion.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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me first

Good to see you with new FF........

I believe it would be nice and excellent ff ever...........i am already touched by your Bani...😊😊

Ye Pia ki to meh😡😡

Plz continue soon...........👏

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sounds great 👏

please cont soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tin u r baaaaaaaaaaaaack!!!!!!!!!!!
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Amazing story once again..Build it up,we r waiting here!!!!

Safed Lamba Gadi??White Limo?? 😆 😆 😆

Loved it!
I have something to look forward to before i sleep everyday....Me sooo happy!! 👏 👏
Edited by rpmenon - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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VERY CREATIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳

But where is Jai??????????????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Bechari Bani stupid little Pia feel like smacking her😡😡😡
I have a feeling that Bani will marry her rajkumar jai but she will be loved like main bhi ek ladki hu old meena kumaris movie
i feel so sad for Bani😭
I missed your updates i am glad you are back
Can we have a weekend special😃
Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful tintiny...loved it...glad that you came with yet another piece...loved it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oww...poor bani,

She's only four...nice start, do cont sooon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wonderful start Tin! Continue soon! I look forwrad to reading it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi tiny...awesome start...i love it already...
BTW my new one is also about an unwanted daughter...what are the chances 😆 ....

please continue soon...I am waiting for the next update already...
Rivs

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