Fortress around the heart~ViSa and RaVya FF~Part 36 updated pg 68 - Page 28

Tenderly scripted...enjoying my visa dosages. Looking forward to your updates.

Ohhh Myyy! Loved this update!😳😳 Thank you for helping us visians lose that very empty and lost feeling. Plz update soon.

can we have ravya chapter now please pretty please😳

Paaallaaaviii I didn't want them to do IT!😡 Satyanash!! I was in my own happy lil world after reading this sensual love making but now I'm all heartbroken because I read your comments to Meriam😭

This part was a mistake.. please make it a dream (those kind of dreams☺️). I was hoping for light romance and maybe a lil talk aur yahaan.. dil ke armaan aansuon mein bah gaya💔 if what I'm dreading is going to happen next.. no one deserves it, especially if it's the first time.

I'm considering of skipping next part.. I'll see depending on what people comment.

Ok guys!

I am just posting this chapter and running away since I know many of you will be ready with chappals, vegs, fruits and andas! Hehe

I know very well that most of you will be upset and will want to strangle me for what I have written...So I apologize in advance..Ok?

Catch ya later alligators!

PART 22

Vikrant's Residence:

Sarita's eyes brimmed with happy tears and her throat clogged because of the overwhelming emotions she felt at the moment. What she experienced right now with Vikrantji was nothing short of ecstasy. She never felt this special ever before. Her heart was overflowing with love for him; he took so much care to make their culmination so very exceptional. She had so many things to tell him; but before all that she just wanted to confess her love for him and thank him for making the moment so very memorable for her.

Vikrant pulled out, released her hands and reached for the blanket to cover them with it. That was when he sneaked a glance at his wife to see her eyes filled with unshed tears. This brought a frown to his forehead and the reality of what happened sunk in all at once. He looked away from her and thought, "Oh god, what did I do?" He felt downright ashamed of how he took advantage of her vulnerable state. She was still heartbroken over her ex-husband and fresh from being dumped and what did he do? He went ahead and made love with her.

"But she seemed to want this too, did she not?" his mind questioned him. He found the answer to it immediately; she is on a rebound for god's sake and I was the one who started it, not her, he thought. Now, the guilt increased two fold; he made love to his wife and to top it off she was a virgin too. God, he wanted to kick himself for what he did.

He must have stopped it when he could; could he not control his manly urges? He cursed at himself. No wonder she had tears in her eyes. The reality must have hit her hard, he thought. He was scrambling around to find the right words to speak with her.

He heard Sarita call out to him saying, "Mr.Suryavanshi" She paused waiting for him to look at her, but he just could not bring himself to meet her eyes at the moment. "Mr.Suryavanshi" she said again and continued to say, "I..L" when Vikrant cut in and said, "I am sorry!"

She stopped her confession abruptly, shock taking over her emotions. She was confused to say the least and wanted to make sure she heard him right; she said, "Excuse me?" her voice quivering a little. Her eyes closing in silent prayer praying she heard him wrong.

He repeated in a low tone, "I am sorry, Sarita. This should not have happened; I don't know what came over me. What happened now was a mistake and I assure you that it will not happen again. I am really sorry." He dragged himself away from her, covered her with the blanket and strode away to the changing area with his towel. He came back a moment later, only to leave the bedroom with the clothes in his hand, without a backward glance at her.

Sarita lay motionless for a long moment wondering what just went wrong. Things seemed to be wonderful until he uttered those dreadful words. The only words echoing in her mind were that he was sorry and that it was a mistake. The reality gradually started to set in and she could not control the tears that tumbled down her cheeks, the trembling of her lips or the shudder that went through her body before acute shivering took over. She just wanted to hide in a hole and die. She wrapped the blanket around herself and lay down sideways in a fetal position.

What had been the most beautiful experience of her life was a mistake for her husband? He was sorry? Why oh why? She wondered. Unfortunately for her, she did not have any answers to those questions. But did he not make the first move? He heart queried. For which he apologized and justified saying that he did not know what took over him, answered her mind. Her eyes were like an incessant pool of tears, it did not show any signs of drying up. She wrapped her arms tightly over her abdomen and brought her knees to her chest to relieve the excruciating pain she felt in her heart. Nothing seemed to work or make the agonizing ache go away.

She thought that they were making progress; the way he extended support earlier the day during the wedding, the way he smiled down at her and the way he held her when they danced...She assumed that those moments were genuine; but it must have been just an eye wash just to keep appearances, she thought smiling bitterly through her tears.

She felt like such a fool. A very big fool to have fallen for him; and an even bigger fool to have believed that there was a chance that he fell for her too, she thought miserably. She realized that she was never meant to be loved the way she wanted to be. She shut her eyes tight and hugged her knees to her chest tighter as the pain seemed too unbearable at the moment.

No! She shook her head...She had one person who loved her a lot. Her son, Abhiman; and she had to be strong for his sake, she determined. But she wanted to be weak and vulnerable, just for this one night. She just wanted to weep like a baby and get everything off her chest tonight. Tomorrow she would get her bearings together and be strong, she promised herself.

The last thought that she had before drifting into a fitful sleep caused by exhaustion, was that she can never forgive herself for being an idiot, wanting to thank her husband for making the night memorable. Boy did he make it unforgettable...

To be continued...

*Ducking away from the onslaught*

Wow...I'm first for the 3^rd time in a row

I am not surprised, Vikrant and Sarita's behaviour is inevitable, I'd expected something coming this way the aftermath of what transpired between the couple💔

Thanks Again for writing a beautiful story. Its different that I don't like Vikrant and Sarita to suffer but still I love the way story is progressing...I guess from now Sarita will start avoiding Vikrant

Looking forward for the story to progress...Keep Posting 😊

omg tats a shocker amazing part cont soon

Amazingly written...kinda expected something like this from Vikrant...but story is unfolding beautifully. Just loving it... 😊

Oh Pallavi, am crying!! Like really, tears are just stopping right now :'(

Saw it coming -Sigh- It'll take me some moments to get myself together.

Damn why do u write as if it's me experiencing all these things?? It's also a disadvantage with a plus point 🤔

Anyways, now i want to know what will happen, a little twist here and there, it's making the story more interesting :)

Just praying Vikrant doesnt go write all what happened in his diary 😆 Specially if Vandy's around the corners :p

And whenever you write, i do read every part, i just can't bring myself to comment on when they do IT *Embarrassed* Too hot to handle :p

But way to go! *two thumbs up*

hmmm palllavi act no undas for u he he