VIRMAN: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aenna

Omggg I just read d storyyy
It s amazing
First coz it contains my name!!..lol
Dat too as virats luv lol
But I no virman hv to be together
Then plz aenna ko bhi koi
Smart guy milwa dena lol..
Nd gosh m a hindu lolzzz
Update soon..


Thanks !!
Oh yeah ... A coincidence😉
U liked it right 😆
Don't worry ... My characters are never bad 😳
Smart guy ... ? Sry, I don't know Hindi !!😭
That's nice 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Srry dear for being sooo late...
Bcz of my poor netwrk...
Abt update...
Its totly MINDBLOWING...
Love its concept...its make us cry wd the tears of joy and laugh...
Omg mannnvi is manvi really...wt kind of person she is...hahhh
Love her each act and point...
VM is also not less than her DIL...
Love her diolouge...but be careful and bye...my frst DIL...
I think manvi' s not chrisitin...she only said that for not to being wd virat...
Really egr to knw wts next? ???
How virman stay together? ??
Plzzz try to update soon...
Thnx alot for pm dea...


No need to be Sry !!
Its OK !

Thanks !!
Is it ...? Thanks you !
A very crazy dil n mil 😉
Yeah ... They r the highlights of this story !!😆

Omg !! Why do u all guys think manvi is not christian ?😉
U'll know in next parts !!😳

I'll !!
Please don't thank me for PMS !

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reyna.



Thanks !!
Oh yeah ... A coincidence😉
U liked it right😆
Don't worry ... My characters are never bad😳
Smart guy ... ? Sry, I don't know Hindi !!😭
That's nice😛



Oh its ok.. I meant find aenna some nice guy...too
Nd dontmake her character negative 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aenna



Oh its ok.. I meant find aenna some nice guy...too
Nd dontmake her character negative 😊


oh sure !!😳
my story wil not have any negative characters !! 😃
so, just chill n read how u'll character wil develop 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3:

varun ( virat's dad ) : u all stop it, now enough of ur drama !!
virat n manvi, u decide whether to live together or to get divorced !!
first cal manvi's parents
if u r going to live together ... take the new house keys n go !
else, we'll go to lawyer !!

virat: i need some time to think about it dad

manvi: but, i want to settle it now itself

virat: so, what have you decided ?

manvi: i need to talk with you personally

virat: wat 😲? personally ... but why ? ... no, we r not going anywhere, we will talk here only 😆

manvi: don't act as if i'll eat you virat ... it's just a matter of 5 minutes ...

virat: why are you always reacting like a man manvi 😕 ... ? have some sense that you are a girl after all !!

manvi: oh my goodness ... !! ... it's your problem that you are always acting like a girl ...!! 😆
how can you say no to a beautiful girl who wants to talk with you personally ?
does any man do that ?

virat: yeah! i'll do that because i have my values

manvi: which values are you talking about ? ... u wanted to marry a christian ... that too against the wishes of your parents 🤢

virat: don't poke your nose in my personal things manvi

manvi: you are the one who started it !
now ... u r coming with me or not ?

virat: no !

manvi: aenna ... is this the person whom u loved ? ... hahaha !!
don't tel me that he's your man ... it's better to call him, as your woman !!😆

aenna: stop it manvi ... not a word more ..
to virat ... virat , go with her ... it's just a matter of few minutes

virat: u also started ? ... i'm not going anywhere ... is it clear ?😡

vanshika: virat, u r reacting as if she has asked you to kiss her !!😳😆

virat: mom ... ? 😲😡
i'll go ... u please don't speak a word further ... please ... for my sake !!😉😆😆
to manvi ... come ..lets go

they go to a room ..

manvi says something to virat ... ( this will be revealed in future parts )
virat was shocked hearing this ...

manvi: i'm a devil if you try to go against me 😈

virat: you need not give introductions ... i already know that you are a devil, ... a psycho ... 😡

he murmured all the names he got in his mind
manvi is now in all smiles looking at him ...😆

virat: don't smile ... !! ... but, i have one doubt ...

manvi: yeah .. i know !! ... if we don't want divorce, then they'll will ask us both to stay together ... right ?

virat nodded in awe ... !

manvi: don't worry ... i'll tel them that i'll come to stay with you after my studies are over

virat: you are such a ... he stops realizing what he was about to say

manvi: i know ... so, shall we go ?

they both go n stand silently ...

varun: this is not a silent movie ... n... we can't understand this silent language ... speak up !!

virat: dad ! we don't want divorce

all were happy with this decision except aenna's family n especially 2 people ...
yeah ... vanshika and aenna

aenna: virat ... ? how could you do this to me ? u cannot betray me ... i love you soo much !! ... i can't live without you ...
please kill me before you start your new life .😭... i cannot see you with any body else ...

she cries collapsing on the floor 😭😭

at that moment, he wanted to hug her tight , assure her that he can never betray her ... 🤗

he wanted to give her a tight slap for uttering those words which he never ever wants to hear ...n that too ... from her , his aenna ... his love ... his life ... ❤️

he immediately turned to go to her ... but manvi caught his hand at the right time

he glared angrily at manvi ... she could see his pain n love for aenna in his eyes ... which are as red as blood ... 😡😡

all the emotions were clearly understandable to her ... he was boiling in anger ... as if he want to kill her at that very moment !🤢

she was still looking into his eyes in awe ... she has not seen such anger, love n desire in any eyes till now ... !!😳

it's now ... that she understood how much he loves aenna ... n how much a man can love a woman !!😳😳

vanshika: it's ok virat ! though my wish of hindu DIL is not fulfilled, i want you both to stay happy for the rest of your lives ... may god bless you !

manvi then leaves virat's hand

aenna's family members take away aenna ...

varun: so, call manvi's parents now !! we have to share this happy news ...

virat: tell me your dad's number manvi

manvi tells the number n her father is on phone ...

virat: hello, is this aditya mehra ?

aditya: yeah ! may i know whom i'm speaking to ?

virat: i'm virat

aditya: sorry, i'm unable to recollect u ... can u tel me who you are ?

virat: you don't know me uncle ... !! ... i'm ... i'm .. 😕

aditya: you are ... ?

virat: i'm your daughters' husband !! 😆

aditya: do you really know who my daughter is ? ... don't try to fool me n don't you ever call me again !!😡

virat: but uncle, it's the truth !!

aditya: shut up

virat: r u manvi's father ?

aditya: i'm not manvi's father n nor ur uncle 😆... my daughter is getting married now n it'll be better if u don't disturb me !!

virat: oh i'm sry sir ... a wrong call !!
to manvi ... u gave me a wrong number ... and in this situation ... ? 😡

manvi laughs at this and grabs his phone ... 😉

virat: agrrhhh ... don't laugh at everything manvi !!

please don't laugh ... i can't see your laughing or smiling face ! ... i just hate it 😡😡... i just hate to see you happy ... please don't ever laugh in front of me !

by the way ... how do you get laughs and smiles even in such kind of horrible situations ? 😉

vanshika: is this a way to talk with your wife ? i know ... but this is not a way to romance also !!😆😆

to manvi ... don't mind his words manvi, he cant' see you laughing because he can't control himself ... as you look like an angle while laughing 😉😆😳

hearing this ... manvi burst into laughter ... 🤣

virat: mom ? 😲😡
😆

**********

that's all for now ... bye buddies !!

Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment and like ... !!


reyna

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Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update what she told him
and he agree update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update! Waiting to know how she convinced virat to stay together!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is just hell of an amazing OS 😃
the topic is awesome 😃
Virat married manvi instead of aenna vewry gud 😆
cnte soon and do pm me too 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update what she told him
and he agree update soon


thanks !
u'll know it in future parts 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Devan.monalisa

Nice update! Waiting to know how she convinced virat to stay together!


thanks !
u'll know in next parts !! 😉

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